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Recent Statuses

3 mos ago
Current I'ma fuck this bitch, I fuck her off the shrooms (Yeah), woah
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5 mos ago
Introducing Recollections: Moon: roleplayerguild.com/topics/…
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5 mos ago
We laugh all day like Dumber and Dumber.
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6 mos ago
das not a flex
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9 mos ago
Categories don't matter when standards aren't being enforced.

Bio

"You're a fine warrior. Call me sentimental..."







Currently updating...




"I'm a dominant..."
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The Tyrant Shell Universe - Mechapunk (Mecha and Cyberpunk mixed together).
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Most Recent Posts

@Utrax Very good, I like Marcus. I don't see anything wrong with him, but I should probably note that his power would inherently buff his strength while transformed. Otherwise he won't be able to move at all. lol

Accepted.

As for Courtney, I like her power, and the idea of a youtuber. But, I think she could use a little bit more detail in a few areas. Specifically her backstory. It feels... incomplete. You never explained how/when she got her power, or her start as a youtuber. And thus, it just feels a bit tacked on. In addition, the dynamics section is for relationships with other characters. Not really NPCs.




@Oliver His limits and weaknesses look muuuuch better now. I think I'll just go ahead and accept him.

@Oliver Just for posting in the char tab first; I'll kill your parents.

No biggie, you just need to get your character accepted.... but here comes the first obstacle.

Overly critical J, go!

1). This just might be me being anal retentive but "being easily distracted," and "has an eye for detail," generally don't go hand in hand.

2). You should redefine the limits a bit. Because they seem a bit too general to even be limits.

2.1). "He can't manipulate birds into doing things birds aren't normally able to do, i.e breathing fire or speaking English." is just so obvious that it doesn't need to be noted.

2.2) "And while birds understand him, he doesn't understand birds. That said, he doesn't really need to. It's bird manipulation, not bird negotiation." ... I really don't get what this means.

2.3). Limits that would make more sense (but albeit generic) would be "He can't manipulate birds outside ten meters," or "can only manipulate a set amount of birds."


3). In accordance to the McAllister Effect, he should have some kind of weakness. Idk what other than "this power hurts my braaaain!" but that would be a good start.

4). I don't want to be that guy, but try to fix some of the run on sentences. lol

5). I also want to wait until I get my lovely co-Gm (@Zombiedude101) opinion before I make a final decision, so be patient.


Your character's not rejected, but needs a few touch ups to be better.
Oh yeah, i forgot to actually post this.

If anyone wants some running commentary over their fights, just drop me a PM and we'll work something out.


Defo gonna hit you up.

The fights are winding down a bit, so we'll move onto the first round once the last two fights are finished. Though, do you all want a brief lull in the action for interaction, or do you want to continue the fight?

Pacing after all.


@Mr Allen J@sassy1085 PLEASE PUT THOSE IN THE CHARACTER SHEETS thanks


You mean character tab?
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Thanks for saying that. Who could guess by just reading those big red letters in the CHAR tab. xoxo


shut up defacto
@Spoopy Scary also your gay character is accepted

i was trying to troll you
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