@Dblade26Well, the first thing I see off the bat on the initial skim through is the age. It's a little too young for a Padawan as stated in the CS area, even in war since he would be pressed to go into war zones and much worse depending on his role choice. 9 is also both youngling stage still and very impressionable making him very good Academy material so as a result he wouldn't be on Nyiss' Ship but sent right to Korriban to be 'retrained' or killed during the process. Their methods were rather strict and unforgiving from what I heard from Echo and Ellri when I asked about them.
In addition because to the natural of the mature themes such as torture both mental and physical, we also made a age limit agreement in the irc, which I'll be asking Ellri to put into the CS soon. My apologies for it not being in there sooner as the padawn ages were listed mainly as a reference for younger ages in the bio to when they became a padawan and the older side to what is possible. I believe the age limit for youngest you could be was about 14-16, I'm leaning on 15-16 on the safe side because many of the current youths are teenagers which easily leads to drama, teenage differences, and the normal emotional turmoil many individuals experience through their young lives. It also gives Sith something to play off.
The final reason I think the young age is not the best idea, is mainly as Sith Players might struggle to interact with your pc. Sish, Rtron's PC, is a cruel, vicious individual and wouldn't have an issue tearing, scarring, or worse to your Padawan. However, while I can't say for the Player, I think Rtron might have slight worries about it or concerns interacting with your PC with Sish. Might even go to strong lengths not to which could be seen as it being personally against you, something not true.
However, the rest is perfectly alright and I feel with only a bit of minor altering can still fit well. The fun part of this Era, he can still be a fresh Padawan at the age of 14-16 as he could've been discovered much, much later in life. Take Nazca for example, she is 21 and still technically a youngling due to lacking training. Besides that, he's shaping up to being a very interesting looking Pc. ^-^
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