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Because your use of objective is nonsensical and banal.

@Inkarnate

i dont normally agree with you but yeah youre right.

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That works both ways you know, if my objective isn't any good then yours isn't either. And the debate ends there.

@Dynamo Frokane

he didnt even say objective my mans

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@Superboyeverything on a case-by-case basis. i guess i'm also not used to really doing rps where one person can hold up the whole squad, but if i were doing that, i'd probably be leaning more toward your point of view.

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While you're completely correct in that regard, Tex has a point. While you can always choose to do it later, the longer you hold off, the more you're dragging everyone else down and slowing the RP to a crawl by refusing to post. If the 'later' goes from just being a few days later to a week or two, it starts to become a problem.

If someone finds themselves so disinterested in an RP that they'll keep from posting despite having the time for several weeks, they should just bite the bullet and drop out instead of wasting the other players' time. It's all a matter of relativity, of course; 'too long' is a totally subjective time frame.

@Superboy

i mean sure there's like a limit, but just because you have the time doesn't mean you should force yourself to do it. sometimes you're just not in the mood, you know? i think so long as your get your post in within the week, that should be fine.

if you force it, it can very well be bad writing because it's forced, or phoned in. once someone has taken 2+ weeks to post? then i would complain about it. but i think giving your fellow writers the time to write a quality response is important.

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One of the biggest RP killers is the mentality of "eh I'll post later".

If you find yourself thinking this, do one of two things:

1. Drop the fuck out

or

2. Post anyways.

@tex

why? why can't someone just opt to post later? sometimes people get busy or don't feel like writing. it ain't a job, it's a hobby.

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final fantasy xv game me noctis in tekken so for that i am thankful

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@Hushed Whispers

She's accepted. We'll find a place for her =)

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@golaniCool, she looks fine now.

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@Hushed WhispersYeessum

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@myinneroblivion
The only thing we have to note about your sheet is that rather than having her wander around the woods alone for a while, they would have Cerebro'd her and picked her up. We think that's a better choice than having her be alone for so long. If you change that, she's in. =)

@golani
You should have four negative traits in total, also you don't have to put NPCs in the relations sheet. The relations sheet is for other player characters, to be added after we've got our cast together. If you add two, she's in! :)

@Burning Kitty
First off, we'd like it if you go back and fix your formatting for your sheet. The coding and everything is already set up in the character skeleton you copied. We also feel like 'abrasive,' 'confrontational,' and 'issues with authority' are pretty similar personality traits. 'Will not kill children' isn't really a personality trait, it's more a code of honor. They also won't be killing anyone. We'd also prefer if you could adjust her timeline so that she's been at the school for a few years now; we'd like everyone to know each other fairly well. If you could also edit the relations sheet to follow formatting we'd appreciate that too, and there shouldn't be any NPC characters in there. Lastly, I'm not sure that the X-Men as a whole would go and investigate/find her; maybe Logan went on his own. Please talk with us before mentioning canon heroes in your character's history, like the character notes section in the characters tab says.

@Poleski
In both the negative and positive trait sections, you have a stray one. Please remove those. After reading your sheet, we weren't sure if she was picked up by the school or not, but we kind of assume she is. Also, we talked about it, and we think it best if you remove most of the tattoos she has -- you can keep the 'remember dad' one, but the others are a bit much for a seventeen year old girl. We suggest maybe a journal or something similar she carries around? Lastly, and this isn't necessarily something you need to change, I just personally noticed that her power might be more negatives than positives? Just not sure if this is what you're going for.

@CaptainMarvel
your character is approved, as we have no issues with her. welcome to the team.

@Silver Carrot
what's up carrot fuck you get out of my roleplay

i'm jk you know i love you. only things we have to say is that no one is gonna call her dr. williams ;p
Also, I'm a little worried that her power might make her less than prominent in combat scenes. I don't want you to feel left behind!

@Hushed Whispers
We think she should have worked Jean rather than Charles. Charles was very old at the time and very hands-off, where Jean would have been hands-on.

@Dusty
Your character is pretty much fine; you can move him over, but we are a little concerned about power levels. Hydrogen bombs in particular are pretty powerful, and we don't want any Omega level mutants or any one character to be overbearingly powerful.

Thanks guys! The cast looks great so far, we didn't have too many complaints — certainly not anything major, just a few things we noticed here and there. If you have any questions or comments about our reviews, feel free to PM us or ask here publicly. Thanks! =)