KoL

Shakugan no Shana -Fragments of Crimson- [On Hiatus]

@Gilgex

After looking over your character, I agree with Windel about he being ok, except for one thing. That Vengeance ability feels kinda slapped in on the CS, since they should come from the Crimson Lord and vengeance has nothing to do with alchemy.

I guess that you could define that better as a quirk of going berserk if lives are at danger, would out be ok, out di you have another explanation?

Shakugan no Shana -Fragments of Crimson- [On Hiatus]

@Pie Flavor

I gotta say that I didn't understood your character at all, except for a few things, he's too old for a Torch (since they are expected to live much less than the original), Tenmokuiko was a big exception, but it's unlikely any Torch like him will ever exist again. The only way for a Torch to live that much would be having the Midnight Lost Child inside them, which I don't need to say that is a no no.

His history didn't matched his age as well, there wasn't duct tape 100 years ago, for example and the school system was very different, specially on Japan.

He can't be both a Torch and a Flame Haze at the same time, Crimson Lords only contract Humans, that is a fact.

Also, he can't have an "extraordinary amount of Power of Existence" only Crimson Lords have that, Humans are miserable sources of Power of Existence, which is why torches die fast.

I suggest you to PM both @TheWindel and I, so that we can help you rebuild your character in a more appropriate way.

@Gilgex

I'll take a look at your character later. I'm sorry for the delay.

Deep Ground Online (Hiatus)

@Caits

I don't think so, Hibiki just tried to flee but nothing has been decided yet.

Deep Ground Online (Hiatus)

Will Eclipse Princess accept Phantom Regality's challenge?

@Mega Birb

This one's easy... no. She'll say whatever she has to say and then go away. I'm just tired of those ideas/situations/spins/etc. and need some time to think how I'll do to fit Eris in the RP the way I want to.

Sorry for the short post. It's been a long day and I can't really think of anything clever. Feel free to decide how effective Hibiki's heroic attempt was.

@Ryonara

I believe it'll be successful, at least if it's by me. On that matter, advanced apologies to @Caits, since Cassandra was left behind, but that's the best course of action to avoid a fight.

KoL's Test Thread

Old EC Princess

@TheWindel said that I could join you guys, thus I'm posting my CS here for reviewing. Here it goes:

Appearance (Real Life):

Height: 168 cm
Weight: 58 kg
Hair Color: Blond
Eye Color: Blue
Name: Eris Valkeyr
Age: 15

History: The second daughter of an influent German family with a long streak of wins at DGO, Eris has always lived at the shadow of her older brother, who's an ace but about to reach the age cap and thus has already secured quite a good living. As is expected from a child that got forced by her parents to strive for a living that she might not have wanted, Eris got fed up with her life rather quickly and instead of playing DGO to fulfill her parents' ambitions, she simply used it as a place to vent her rage.

Inside the virtual world she became a deadly warrior who clings to the dark corners and fights with wild abandon swinging a two-handed sword at foes much stronger or numerous than her, knowing that the worst that can happen is for her avatar to die and become unavailable for a few hours.

Knowing that she would be a problem child, Eris' parents put her on a plane and sent her to study at Purple Crown Academy to see if the time away from home would "cool" their daughter's temper.

Personality: Eris is brooding and this filled with a deep discontentment for her upbringing so she tends to be dry and blunt when talking to other people, almost to the point of being obnoxious sometimes. She thinks that she doesn't needs friends and such, since they will only be more trouble to her, but still can't avoid social interactions, since she knows all too well that human being can't live alone.

She's not a bad person to hang around, since she doesn't tend to lash a other people so frequently, but her lack of social finesse can cause some people to feel a certain discomfort around Eris, not that she cares in the very least.

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Appearance (Avatar):

Full Body

Avatar Class: Warrior (Berserker)
Avatar Title: Eclipse Princess
Avatar Level (Initial): 3
Avatar Guild: None yet, but would join the Ebony Strykers if they weren't such a fraud.

Avatar Abilities:

1- Shadow Armor (passive): Gains a 20% bonus to defense when in shadowy areas.

2- Shadow Step (passive): Gains a 20% bonus to speed when in shadowy areas.

3- Dark Rage (active): Can be activated to gain a 20% bonus to damage in shadowy areas. If there's no shadow nearby you don't gain the bonus damage, but instead creates an area of shadow around your avatar with a radius of 10 meters/level. Cooldown: 1 min.

Avatar Feats:
3- Power Strike: Increase all damage done by 15%

Other:

Theme Song

@KoL

The Collector (2) [Closed]

<Snipped quote by KoL>

Nah. Marianne is just gonna watch her try to escape herself. Since she knows Lusso secretly likes the position she's in.

@TheWindel

You... are not even wrong about this.

Shakugan no Shana -Fragments of Crimson- [On Hiatus]

@Gilgex

Sorry for the double post, but my phone is being dumb right now and won't let me edit the other without the browser crashing.

As @TheWindel said, only the basics are necessary, you can always find about Ball Masque in game. It should be a good wakeup call, hehehe.

Shakugan no Shana -Fragments of Crimson- [On Hiatus]

Hi I found this rp looked really cool, and want to join. But, I haven't seen the entire anime series. I will marathon it though, so is it okay if I create a character still?

@Gilgex

Since we aren't following the anime's storyline, you can learn ask that you need to play by the end of the Friagne Arc. If you need a quick recap, the movie will get you there in less then 2 hours. Actually, no you need the 1st season in full, otherwise you'll not understand the Ball Masque and they are going to appear on the RP so it's best that you know who they are and how they look.

I still advised to to watch the series in full, just because it's that good. You can't miss a moment of Hecate-tan's Supreme glory.

Shakugan no Shana -Fragments of Crimson- [On Hiatus]

@ADamnFiddle

Your character is ok by me as well.

The World of Wasted Dreams

百合夜 夜空

"Mmm... mmm..." Yuriya groaned as her consciousness slowly returned. Her head was heavy and... covered with something cold and sticky. Was it, blood? The ferrous smell certainly made it a possibility, which Yuriya confirmed as she lumbered back to a sitting position, before the blur of her vision cleared enough to let her gaze at her fine digits covered in the rusty red of stale blood.

Then it were her other senses that returned slowly, one by one, until she was overwhelmed with information, holding her temples between her left index and thumb, in a vain effort to dull the headache that was assailing her. "This song, what is it?" Yuriya said to herself, just before noticing that she wasn't alone on the dreary Plutonian landscape of the crimson world, no, she wasn't alone at all, there were a few more students, most of them foreigners, whoever was playing that song and...

"Shizune? What are we doing here and" Yuriya said getting back to her feet and walking to the window to get a better view of the landscape that enclosed them, right on time to see a flight of black bird-like things leave the trees on the distance, "why is it that I feel like this isn't the first time I have seen this place?" she said in a grave voice.

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@TheWindel, @sakurasan, @rechonq, @Bird, @Lucius Cypher, @Unlucky0013, @Lonewolf685