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Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

By the way, we are going to team people up in pairs to push forth some early interaction. Since we are still waiting a few characters to be ready, the assembled pairings at the moment are:

@floodtalon Ami & @Squee Sera

@Polaris North Alexis & @Rai Hikari

The others are going to be teamed up as more confirmed characters are added.

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

@Squee

Oh, sorry, I thought that I had evaluated yours already. Nevertheless, your CS is ok on my end.

Apologies for the lateness, once again.

@Karkinos

Enhanced physical attributes (strength, toughness and speed/reaction time) are a given, though the extent of the boost depends on each magical girl's style.

At the very least, all of them are at peak human condition after transforming as far as their bodies are concerned.

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@Lonewolf685

You're ok.

星空 不朽 | Hoshizora Everlasting

I finished my character. Just letting you know.

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

Ok, I have some time to spare now so let get some reviews out of the way.

@floodtalon

Accepted, just remember to do the modifications required to reflect the changes in the CS template.

@Polaris North

While I would normally question plain guns as magical girl weapons in any other situation, for the context of this (especially since she doesn't have plain .45s anymore), I suppose it's alright.

Accepted, just remember to do the modifications required to reflect the changes in the CS template.

@Rai

Most of your CS is ok, however, I feel that her magic may require a few slight tweaks to avoid making her too resilient. Basically a vague limit on how much she can heal herself and adding a handicap to that clone ability like "she keeps the damage of the worst hurt of the two when she merges back" or make it very taxing on her magic reserves, anything to avoid a character that may end up becoming too much of a brick wall.

@blackdragon

Since it requires more consideration, I'll think about your case and give an answer later when I have more time to spare.

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@blackdragon

It's really hard to offer any help if we can't see the code you are writing, though.

If you could post what you have, it would be much easier to try to find a way around it. Nevertheless, if you really can't get the images working, and don't want any specific help, you can simply let a link for others to click.

星空 不朽 | Hoshizora Everlasting

Here's a half finished character, just to give an idea of what I'm working on:

Lina Tachinana

Cheese!

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Lina Tachibana.

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16 years.

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Female.

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164 cm

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52 kg

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Eltria, a habitable moon orbiting a gas giant, on the Neutral Rim. With an economy driven mainly by ships, tech and fuel exportation, using the abundant resources of their Solar system. Its people are widely known as daring explorers, and skilled pilots with a strong sense freedom, fickle personality and sense of self preservation that's "a few" points below the average.

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Lina is a goofball, always joking and making sure that she has a good time... everytime. A happy-go-lucky idiot most of the time, it's hard to see her without her beloved handheld console, or an earnest smile in her face. Some may think that she hides a sharp intellect behind this facade of willful ignorance, however, the truth is that as soon as you get to know Lina you are given the full deal on her true self.

If people lower their guard around her thinking that she's a harmless dumbass, it's their problem not hers. Like most of the people of her home world, she likes to play by the ear and believe that luck will get her exactly where she needs to be when she needs to.

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Lina was born in a typical Eltrian family. As the only daughter of a couple of thrill-seekers and explorers whose main job was mapping areas for companies in search of new resource deposits, it was needless to say that she was folded into their erratic lifestyle from birth. She learned the tools of the trade before she could even walk and worked up from there, making use of Eltria's very flexible schooling system.

Being a very skilled pilot and shooter, for her age, it was natural that Lina would develop an interest to broaden her horizons. After making sure that she had a M.A.I.D. that matched her specialties, Lina's parents gave her the go to enroll on Asterisk and see how far she can fly on her own while they keep bouncing from piece of space rock to unknown planets and back.

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Lina's M.A.I.D., affectionately named Nep, takes the form of her handheld console. It's indeed a fully capable AI that can assist Lina in a number of ways besides what normal devices would be able to accomplish, including detailed holographic projections, hacking and the ability to control other electronic integrated devices as well as assisting Lina with tactics and suggestions befitting her needs. Oh yeah, and it's very handy for gaming as well, both VR or not.

An all in one digital assistant that can be said to be the lifeblood of a modern rogue.

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In addition to Nep, Lina almost always has a pistol and knife, as well as a light exoskeleton to assist her more daring acts. She also tends to have a "survival" kit with several types of tools to get around tough situations.

Oh, and she likes her hat, a lot. She would be deeply thankful if people could avoid ruining it.

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Like a goofball out of Hell...

PS: to give a good idea of her homeworld, it's based on mix and match of Corelia, Kuat, and Bespin.

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Tsukuyomi Luna

"Fast as wind, Silent as the forest, Fierce as fire, Immovable as the mountain! Ally of Justice, Getsuga, is here! Prepare yourself!"

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Tsukuyomi Luna「月夜見月」

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Getsuga

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14 years

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152 cm

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44 kg

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A cherry blossom-shaped tattoo on her right shoulder. It's shining light grows brighter as Luna reaches greater rhythm and tempo while fighting. Once it reaches its maximum, Luna is able to show her true power.

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As a untainted magical girl, Luna's gift come as a Divine Arm, named Phantom Blade: Gekkou Ikazuchi「月光雷」. A pair of Japanese swords that allow her to summon ghostly, sword-shaped projectiles as well as coat themselves in the same phantom glow to amplify her attacks. This ghostly energy behaves like a cold, electric-charged, plasma, not dissimilar to the effects people would associate with ball lightning or fox fire (i.e.: will-o'-wisp).

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Luna's magic is more physically oriented than most other magical girls. Named Teachings of the Five Rings: Tenkū no Fūsho「天空の封書」, the five teachings to achieve the pinnacle of swordsmanship and thread the path of Bishamonten, the evil-slaying god of war. Needless to say, this allows Luna to tap into a wealth of hidden power and martial skill, most noticeably though the use of a number of martial arts techniques. Nevertheless, it's greatest power is the ability to summon an avatar of the God of War Bishamon to fight in beside Luna.

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A selfless ally of justice who slays all evil with her gorgeous moonlit blades. There's perhaps no better way to describe Luna other than the previous words. Born in a traditional family and raised as a Yamato Nadeshiko despite her mixed blood, Luna is a paragon of determination forged in steel, just like her beloved sword.

No evil shall go unpunished before the eyes of the righteous. No burden is too heavy for those who carry the responsibility of upholding justice in their shoulders. clutching these truths close to her chest, the blade of moonlight dances under the night sky with a storm of cherry blossom following wherever she goes.

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Like a beautiful blade, shining in the moonlit night...

Fate/esoterica

EMILIA WAROV

The magical energy wafting through the air near the church was so dense and of such an oppressive nature that Emilia could feel it crawling under her skin, causing every hair in her body to stand like the fur of a wary animal. Even so, the smallish looking girl felt compelled to push her plan ahead. After all, what kind of magus would she be if she didn't see her own scheme through the end?

"That said, a battle between Servants is really something else. Modern magi will never be able to catch up to such power. Servants are... really the ultimate dolls. Do you not think so, Caster?" Emilia said telepathically. Even her mental voice sound exhilarated, yet none of these dark emotions showed themselves on Emilia's face. To any onlookers, she was just a girl happily walking with her family's dog while they took a trip to visit their local church and bring a homecooked meal to their current man, or woman, of the cloth.

"Disposing of a person that happened to wander into the wrong place at the wrong time is easy, but a whole family in an otherwise peaceful neighborhood is a whole other story. Let us just hope our enemies are smart enough to figure that. Just in case, be ready to provide some distraction if need be, Caster. We certainly can't back down from a fight if they choose to chase us down," Emilia said to Caster just as they reached the last turn that would get them right in front of the church.

As soon as they were in position, the recently converted into a familiar, dog 'accidentally' escaped from Emilia's hands, running ahead in chase of whatever was causing the commotion the family heard from a little down the road. Naturally, she ran after it only to stumble before a massive man wearing an ancient Oriental armor, whose most impressive features were an almost supernatural beard and a polearm that looked to be impossibly heavy. On the other side of the street was a girl whose savage looks and cheap dressing habits, coupled with a brutal power, made Emilia think if such a thing as a Heroic Spirit of Street Urchins existed.

The whole family came to a halt with the mother screaming from the bottom of her lungs, the young boy freezing up before losing the strength of his knees and, finally, the poor daughter completely catatonic, hugging her dog as if her life depended on it. Their lives pretty much at the mercy of the titans clashing in the street.

If this plan didn't give Emilia the chance she needed, she was ready to burn even a Command Spell, if need be. The only thing she wasn't going to admit is losing in a game of wits to other magi without even getting the chance to try.

ARCHER

"Hmph! I was expecting something else to happen. Could it be that the men of this era forgot a thing so basic such as how to properly please their idols?" Euryale said, before stuffing her face with her burger. Whether the purple-haired loli was doing that to disguise a pout or because she was that interested in cheap fast food was anyone's guess.

"I suppose we will have to try something else to expose our enemies. Do you have any ideas of your own, Master? Like this, I'm not as good with pranks as 'I' would be, but if you want to, I can certainly think of something," She added before continuing her meal.

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@Crusader Lord@RolePlayerRoxas@Raineh Daze@VitaVitaAR

星空 不朽 | Hoshizora Everlasting

I'll try to have a CS done soon. I'l already working at ideas.