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24 days ago
Current First writing contest after my hiatus went well. Now to start planning the next. Keep an eye on the sidebar!
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3 mos ago
*blinks* how long did I sleep?
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12 mos ago
Away from home until the end of July.
2 yrs ago
Away from home between October 26th and November 10th. Contests will return when I'm back home!
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2 yrs ago
Don't forget to vote in the writing contest! The link is in the sidebar <3
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Hello everyone. I'm Dutch, a mother of a 12-year old boy and I love both rp-ing and writing.

I've been writing and roleplaying in Dutch and English since 2002. I joined the RolePlayer Guild in 2014 and since May 2020 I'm one of the contests mods.

There are times I don't have much creative energy and will be silent for a while, but in the very least I will try to keep the writing contests going.

If I haven't replied in a while, feel free to poke me. Genuinly, I sometimes need reminders that you are waiting for a reply. I don't ghost on purpose, I promise. Time is just a weird thing sometimes, and if something happened 3 days ago, 3 weeks ago or 3 months ago can feel pretty much the same and I often don't realize how much time passed since my last reply. And if I read your reply and accidentally closed the tab there is a good chance I might forget I was supposed to reply because I lost the visual reminder T_T

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The three friends

Can be used together or separately





Name: Martha McNally

Alias: Nelly Roselips

Gender: Female

Appearance: Nelly is a bit chubby but looks healthy, there are no visible scars and she has all her teeth. Her eyes are blue and her skin varies from pale to tanned, depending on the season and how much time she spend outside. She has blonde hair with a faint reddish hue in it, which she keeps in a long braid.
Her clothes are fairly simple: when she’s at home she wears what other Scottish woman wear and on sea she wears a long-sleeved shirt and trousers because that’s easier. Her clothes change depending on the season or the area they're in, in warm weather she wears a linen shirt, in cold weather she'll wear a woollen coat over her shirt and woollen trousers.



Equipment: She always wears a golden pendant in the shape of a rose. She carries a knife with a rosewood handle in her belt at all time and owns a rapier that she only takes with her when she joins on off-boat mission.
Position on the pirate ship: Cook

Skills: Cooking, knitting, sewing, basic farming skills, basic butcher skills, reading, writing, sword fighting, hand-to-hand combat.

Weaknesses: Afraid of snakes

Special characteristics: Loves roses. She has a pendant in the shape of a rose which she often kisses before battle for good luck. Her husband always offers her a rose when she leaves on a journey and as the ship sets sail she’ll kiss it and throw it overboard. That’s what earned her nickname.

Family: Nelly is the daughter of a Scottish pirate boatswain and a Norwegian farmer’s daughter. Her father fell in love with her mother when he had come ashore for supplies with a small crew. He spent his next shore-leave in the same place and the more time they spend together, the more they loved each other. Eventually he asked her to marry him, she agreed and moved to the northern part of Scotland with him.
The couple had several children, only three made it passed the age of four. Nelly was the middle of the surviving children, her brothers are six years older and four years younger.
At the age of fourteen she fell in love with the son of a butcher, they married when she was seventeen.
They have two children, aged 4 and 1, when she chooses the pirate life. Her husband supports this decision, taking care of their children and the butcher shop with his sister when Nelly is at sea.

History: Nelly grew up in a small house at the outskirts of a village on the north-coast of Scotland. Even though her father brought back plenty of money, they lived a simple life. Nelly learned from an early age to work in the garden, to cook, to knit and to sew, because she was the only daughter of the family. She helped taking care of her younger brother, but also played with her older brother who loved her deeply.
When her father was home he taught her older brother and her how to defend themselves with a sword, her aunt had died because she couldn’t, and her father didn’t want that to happen to her.
At the age of twelve she was send to the city to attend school, like her brother before her. Her father had saved most of the money he had earned on the pirate ship for this purpose. She attended a girl’s school there for two years, to learn to read and write in English, something her mother never learned to do, and the basics of biology, geology and calculus.
In her second year a butcher opened his shop on the city, having moved there from the countryside. Nelly fell in love with his son, but went home when her second year of education came to an end.
She continued to live there and travelled to the city at least once per month to visit her lover. When he proposed she accepted and she moved in with him.
As she lived and worked in the butcher shop, she often longingly looked at the sea, where her father works. He had often told her stories about his adventures and she had always wanted to go with him.
After giving birth to her second child, she told her husband she wanted to join a pirate crew. Her husband already knew about her father being a boatswain on a pirate vessel and it didn’t come as a surprise. He gave her his blessing and she promised to return to him and their children every shore-leave she had, like her father had done too.
She boarded her fathers ship and served as a cook. The captain didn’t believe in the superstition that a woman on board would bring bad luck. The men soon learned she wouldn’t accept any inappropriate behaviour and when a rival group of pirates attacked she fought alongside with them, earning their respect.


Here are my reviews. I didn’t actively check any of the stories for grammar mistakes, but if I caught some I will mention it. Generally I review the story as a whole, what impact it had on me as a reader, what I liked, what I didn’t like, things that were confusing, etc.

@Rosenrot


@BrokenPromise


@PlatinumSkink


@Silver


@Exit


@Vocab


@SleepingSilence




I read all the entries, I will post my reviews in the voting and critique thread soon. Tomorrow, or maybe the day after.
This will be for all my RP characters.

List is not complete yet :)
Timezones can be confusing like that.
I must admit I was unsure what the exact deadline was in my timezone, so I made sure to finish my final correction round on the 27th and posted it that evening, just before going to bed. A good thing too, because the 28th we had visitors over :)


@Calle I find it funny how you had the shortest entry last time, and now you might have the longest!

I'm sure it'll be an interesting read.


Yeah, it's funny how those things go XD

This is the longest entry I ever made for a writing competition. Thanks @Frizan for the interesting prompt.

Got the story on paper, now the correcting round begins.
I... am almost at 8k words for this entry and haven't reached the end yet, which will be an open ending because I don't have the time to write out the full story before the deadline. This prompt sparked this tale that just couldn't be told in a few pages.
I am sorry.
I recently created a female pirate character in the character creation competition on this site and I would like to use her, so I'm interested in the Proposition plot. I don't have realistic images or realistic drawn images of my character though, she exists in text only. But I do have an extended character form ready with her personal history.
And she is the cook of the ship, who joins the land party when they go out acquiring valuables.
My character won't speak like a pirate as you see in the movies, as I'm not quite familiar with that way of speaking.

I too write in third person, past tense and multiple paragraphs, usually 2-3. I do have to warn you about my posting habits, I usually can't do daily replies. I come online daily, but I don't always have the time to actually post. My replies are sometimes weekly, but never longer than that.
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