Lord Zee

Godfall - The Emergence [Dead]

The Laughing Rain

Amos

Amos frowned, it seemed that many of his family thought him to be the boring one of the group. How strange that it bothered him as much as it did. He should have expected such a response from Cyl, they were one who was never going to reply with little else then utter nonsense. But still, he couldn't help but think that more then one of his siblings thought so little of him, even though he had done so much for them. Things they would never understand, best left unsaid. As Cyl walked over to him, peering at his human form, he too gazed down at his sibling. Their form was small, had they always been so? They spoke at last, mentioning her name and the human who had followed.

"Cyl it is then, dearest sibling." Amos said with bitterness in his voice.

Amos moved his gaze towards the male, not very old but then what did a god consider old and young anyways? He looked bewildered, luckily for him the rain had died down and the thunder was distant. A storm in the mountains could prove most fatal to a human after all. Other then that, Amos did not really care for him, he had one objective while it still mattered and that was reminding Death that he had taken his purpose away.

He looked back at Cyl, "I'm sorry to disappoint you at my presence." Amos stated. "You are a little unpracticed it seems, I suppose centuries without one's powers and you tend to forget a few things. Look around Cyl, we're on a mountain far from where the bell rang it's beautiful note. As far as I can tell, someone rang it on the East Coast of this country. Perhaps another spell and you can take us closer? I'm sure you have the ability to do so, but whether you can seems to be in question given your latest bout here." He said wryly.
@Rune_Alchemist@SpawnMeme

A Demigod Talk

Keyla+Death

Keyla noticed Fiala out of the corner of her eye offer her a cigeratte, but Goehearth interrupted her from speaking. She was flattered though but before Keyla had time to reply to any of them, another goddess arrived, attacking everyone there with words of contempt. She did not like this newcomer Vetra in the slightest, she was far to rude. But her words did shine light on why they had gathered, something about a Hollow or another. She didn't have a clue.

Keyla noticed Fiala turn to her and give her name, also offering a hand to shake. Tentatively, Keyla took it and shook her hand. What Fiala would notice as soon as touching Keyla, was a sensation of serenity wash over her. Like all of her troubles washing away in a breeze, but Keyla would be unaware that she was doing anything other then shaking Fiala's hand. "I'm Keyla. Keyla Harms, nice to meet you Fiala. I'm...I'm sure you won't have to call him your boyfriend anymore." she said with a soft smile.

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It had been going so well, then Vetra had arrived, backhanding him in the face and practically insulting everyone gathered. Death felt his anger rising.

Death hissed, "I care not for the petty distractions of the flesh Vetra, nor am I related to any of you whatsoever. And be careful to point fingers about incest my dear Goddess for your infatuation with Goehearth has not, nor ever, been without questions."

He tried to calm himself, but Vetra was one of the few Gods who got under his bones, and her annoyances were now laid bare to everyone.

"If you had arrived naught but ten minutes earlier, you would have heard us speak of Huseror. Hollow is another matter entirely that demands our presence leave here first before further discussion. Now shut your mouth or I will for you."

@mercenarius@Dealdric

Godfall - The Emergence [Dead]

@Jangel13 It is better, accepted.

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@Jangel13 Your history. Your second and third paragraphs need to be switched and moved to Post fall history. Regales could not have helped Michelangelo and Leonardo as a God, just so we are clear. He would not have his powers then, but helping the Norse would have been something he could have done as his powers faded.

Look at some of the other applications for pre-history, what was he doing in Heaven? What did he think of the other Gods? Etc.

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@Jangel13

In the context of the rp, what I mean, is that Gods slowly lost their powers once the Gates to Heaven were shut. If I was a human in this world, I would know what history thought of some of those Gods, but I would only know what history says, I wouldn't know the true story. Which can be made up entirely. What I am trying to say is the gods have always meddled in human affairs. Before they were locked out, they used humanity as toys and some were just outright cruel to them. When the Gods became locked out it allowed humanity to grow and populate, while they faded from history.

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@Kazemitsu@mercenarius@Forsythe@GrizzTheMauler@Rune_Alchemist@Dealdric@Eyeris@SpawnMeme

General update-
1. I have added opinions to all of my characters, so feel free to check them out.

2. I have also updated the front page with some more lore in the Primordial Law section.

3. I still don't have everyone's color codes for the roster, so I'd appreciate it if I could get some help there.

4. Also, I am going to suspend new applications for Gods. I have seen concern that we have enough currently. Feel free to make any demigods or humans if you only have one, or a couple of characters. I will re-open them when I feel that the time is right. We also have like 3-5 Gods that are either being created, or haven't even gone yet just to put it in perspective.

@Jangel13

Much better, you are almost there. However, I would put his birth to be much much farther back, when Humanity was first created by the Sun and Moon, because that was when the desire for art would have been founded in humanity.

I guess this isn't very clear, which is not your fault but mine, The Gods were locked out of Earth before any great civilization was founded by humans. Like the Mesopotamia culture, or the Greeks, and the gods slowly lost their powers over this time. So for those that wanted to meddle in human affairs,(like the Greek Gods that history books name) they would still have enough power to be Gods but it was a dwindling power.

Hopefully that helps enough to change your history section once more. I know its probably a hassle, but I want some consistency with what Lore I have. If you have anymore questions, feel free to ask.

@Dezuel

Hows it going? Any updates on when you might go?

To Everyone Else;

We are doing good guys! I am very happy to have you all here and it is greatly appreciated. Let's keep up the great work!

Also, if anyone has questions or concerns, feel free to ask them.

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@Eyeris Welcome back, accepted.

@Jangel13 Good, let me know when the changes are made.

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@Jangel13 Okay I have a couple of concerns and some contradictions to go over. He is very similiar to a Demigod that we currently have, Keyla Harms(Daughter of Mercy). She even has one of her powers named Serenity, which basically does what your power calming presence does. As my character was here first I'm going to have to ask you pick a different aspect of change it to where it doesn't overlap with her powers.

Now, moving on.

Age- 230 is too young for the timeline. If he was only 230 years old that would but his birth in 1788, a time when the Gates were shut and Lunus(The moon), wasn't even active.

Parents- You say his father is Lunus but who is his mother? Then later down in the history you say "He was born from the intense desires of innocents that wanted nothing to do with war or fighting.." So which would you rather have?

History- It has a lot of inconsistencies. The first history block is what he was doing before the Gods were banished to Earth. His second history block is what he did on Earth without his powers.

Motive- His motive sounds very sinister to me, which goes against his aspect.

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@Jangel13 Hmm. Alright, Let's see an application then.

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@Jangel13 Yes you can but I have to say we have a lot of God's right now and we could use some more demi-gods/humans to even out the rosters. I'm not sure if that would mess up any ideas that you might have.

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Tribulations IV

Death+Keyla

"This is no place for a discussion of such magnitude Hiraga, but no, they are not open. I have no idea where your brother is but I feel his wrath will be terrible. He does get it from your mother after all." Death calmly stated, then turned to Stjerne, "Time is of the essence, take us somewhere out of the prying eyes of mortals, please. I fear Huseror to be on the move already, and as I have said, there are many things you all must understand now. Now, let us be off, quickly."

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Keyla was caught by one of the men much to her relief. When she looked up at him however, she saw his piercing red eyes and the way he smiled was unnerving. This man would probably have scared anyone but what she saw was far more terrible, that really couldn't be him, could it? After he went off to greet the newcomers, Keyla had a minute to herself. Something felt warm inside her, steadily growing in strength and it frightened her. She had no idea what was going on, and her family... Her family!

She checked her phone to see several missed calls from her mother, had it really been that long? She was about to call when the man returned and told her his name. Goehearth, The God of Anarchy... It didn't ring a bell, could this man be crazy? Is this why this section of the town was so rundown, because of all this craziness? But how did that explain what she had seen? Maybe she was really home, maybe it was all just a fever dream in her head. But when she looked at them all, she could not help but feel akin to them, in someway. She felt a general concern for them, when she barely even knew them...

Keyla then noticed Goehearth's gaze at last, he was waiting for her reply. "I-I am Keyla." Her voice went silent as she heard the old man state they needed to leave. Out of the eyes of prying mortals... She began to hyperventilate again. They weren't going to take her were they? Anxiety and fear began to build in her, she could feel it rising to the point where the only thing she wanted to do was hide but her legs were unmoving once more. Something deep inside of her suddenly snapped then, sending the warmth that was deep down inside, erupting throughout her body in a warm tingling sensation. When it the tingling sensation stopped, Keyla felt relaxed and calm. All of her anxiety and fear was gone in an instant.

She smiled, somehow she knew everything was going to be okay.

The Mountain's Visitors

Amos

The air rippled and suddenly before him came Cyl'Nyarlith, the youngest child of his parents. His youngest sibling. No wonder why the portal had been stirring, Cyl was the master of magic. Amos had seen them in action firsthand, but found their duel personality to be troublesome and unpredictable. To be honest, he hadn't made contact with Cyl since before the fall. Once the humans arrived, her absence was noted. It was a surprise to see Cyl, that much he knew but Amos would have to watch them carefully.

He approached Cyl, making himself noticeable and spoke. "Hello Cyl'Nyarlith, it's been awhile."

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