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The gap in the door... it's a separate reality.
The only me is me.
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I would maybe consider bumping his age up to 12 or 13, but otherwise you've fixed all the major quandaries we discussed. Accepted! Go ahead and move him into the characters tab when you'er ready.

Working on the opening IC post and I have 2 more sheet reviews pending, apologies @Poet and @Fetzen for being so tardy with them. Hopefully IC launches this weekend! Latest Monday, as that's my next day off.
@sovi3t
@Mistress Dizzy
@Fetzen

I’d like to discuss your sheets further with each of you; expect PM’s tomorrow. I’m currently travelling but won’t be getting into anything heavy this evening as it’s a fairly long journey.
Just a quick note; I’ve noticed a couple of the accepted sheets thus far have been posed in their hiders, presumably from being copied from where I’ve put them in hiders when accepting them. I made that choice purely so not to clutter or overly extend the OOC more than necessary; when posting in the characters tab please remove them from the hiders, as it offers a cleaner, smoother read-through and will be better when I come to list the active cast in a roll-call.
@Liseran Thistle
@Searat
@GreivousKhan

There are a few things I’d like to go over with you regarding each of your sheets. Unfortunately I’m away this weekend in Brighton and can’t effectively manage any extended sheet editing and discussion on my phone, so expect a PM each on Monday. I just wanted to update you so you don’t think you are being ignored or have been rejected.


Accepted! I like him. It’s a bit tropey and a bit Thief-y (especially the rope-arrows) but ultimately tropes are tools to be used, not avoided, and there’s nothing wrong with taking a bit of inspiration from outside sources. It’ll be interesting to have a professional outlaw in the party alongside some more noble characters. Pop him in the characters tab when you’re able.


I’d like a little more backstory; at 54 he will likely be one of the oldest of the cast, having lived through multiple diseases sweeping Vassidia and having a long and presumably decorated career in the military. What we have at the moment feels vague, and a little rushed.

Cautiously accepted with hopes we’ll see some more depth to the Bear soon, whether through IC or updates to your sheet. Go ahead and pop him into the characters tab.


Accepted; feel free to put your sheet into the Characters tab when you can. Well written, some solid personality built up with clear motivations and values. Excited to have Wri explore the world beyond Eerum.
@Liseran Thistle What if he stumbled onto the main plot without even realizing it regarding the hidden road? Shoot, that's good. Guess I know how I'd rope him into the main plot if I were writing this in a book.


All characters will begin the RP in Vasilius after an audience with High Lord Jocun, and will choose their first destination from there. Vasilius and the Palace will be consistent centerpoints to the RP and the plot-at-large.

Also, a (related) question for @Roman: Does slavery exist in-world? If so, where, and in what forms?


Yes and no, and I really don't want to say much more; if it's something you need for your sheet specifically, PM me and we'll discuss.

@Roman //
I know you've got sheets to review and a lot more world expansion details, i.e factions and all. but, do me a favour and expand on the Mountain-Brave with me? Mostly in regards to the particular trials you briefly mentioned. I have some simplified ideas, terribly spartan and medieval really, but I'd like to get some generalized feed back about them.

My concept is loosely relative to the mountains and Mornfell, so.


Expect a PM shortly.

On a separate note, to everyone who's submitted sheets I extend a most gracious thank you for your fervent interest in this little over-baked cake of a world of mine. Reviews start this weekend.
A man works, sees Infinity War, sleeps, and then goes back to work, and he comes back to 55 new posts and more sheets to review. I’ll get there! I will! Just not until at least 2pm GMT. Bear with me!
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