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Dawn Beyond Tomorrow: A Magitech distant postapocalyptic action-adventure RP

@Dead Cruiser: I'm going to be honest here.

I wanted to avoid causing further drama, but the concerns I've received were not only about your second character but about you as a player as well. Considering I received them from multiple other potential players who I will not be naming as that will only feed more drama, I have to keep this in mind as well.

After receiving these concerns, I am going to have to ask you politely to leave.

@Bartimaeus: While she mostly checks out, I'll point out not everyone needs an artifact. So if it's weak for an artifact it doesn't need to be one.

@ERode: Power level will vary a bit, but I'm intending for monsters of that caliber to be a significant threat that will take most of the party to take on to start with. Character progression will very much be a thing.

Dawn Beyond Tomorrow: A Magitech distant postapocalyptic action-adventure RP

@Dark Cloud: That would be fine.

@ERode: This is a pretty interesting idea, I like it.

Dawn Beyond Tomorrow: A Magitech distant postapocalyptic action-adventure RP

@Searat: Alright, this looks pretty good. Just want to make sure, before I accept, that it's clear this setting is not much like Fallout, with the plentiful magic and magitech elements, the widespread forests and some quite advanced cities, and literal sky whales.

Since I can see there's some inspiration here, and just wanted to make sure you knew what it was going to be like before we got going so as to avoid any confusion.

With that in mind, accepted.

@Dark Cloud: @Raineh Daze covered it pretty well.

Dawn Beyond Tomorrow: A Magitech distant postapocalyptic action-adventure RP

@Dark Cloud: Multiple spells are the norm. Multiple types of magic depends on complexity.

@Searat: Will check when I'm back on my computer properly!

Dawn Beyond Tomorrow: A Magitech distant postapocalyptic action-adventure RP

@Pyromania99: Accepted.

@Searat: To clarify a little bit if you make the changes I asked for you'll probably be accepted.

Dawn Beyond Tomorrow: A Magitech distant postapocalyptic action-adventure RP

@Dead Cruiser: If you want me to be clearer, I do immediately have to take issues with you forcing in the man-eating snake angle after being told to remove it as an action your character takes by shifting it to your snake summon. Sure, maybe having a snake that could chomp people wouldn't have been an issue on its own, but the way this has been handled certainly is to me.

Honestly this is less to do with the trait at this point and more to do with the fact that it feels like you're trying to work around my word as a GM rather then listening to what I ask you do to. Getting you to make your character appearance fall in line with what beastfolk are meant to be like in the setting took more tries then it should have and you've still tried to keep as many details in as possible, including waxing his entire body to remove all hair for some reason.

Worming around my word is not going to endear me to your attempts to join my RP and it's in part why I've been hesitant this entire time.

Most importantly, however, I've already had one player publicly state concerns about your character and that isn't the only person, both in terms of people who have already signed up and who are considering signing up, who have done the same privately.

In this light I'm not inclined to continue working at this character.

Dawn Beyond Tomorrow: A Magitech distant postapocalyptic action-adventure RP

@Dead Cruiser: While I did endeavor to keep the plot relatively under wraps and thus did not include too much of it in the OP, that doesn't mean considerations in regards to this are irrelevant.

And I'm currently not certain how well your character will fit.

Dawn Beyond Tomorrow: A Magitech distant postapocalyptic action-adventure RP

@Dead Cruiser: Okay, I apologize for failing to look over the whole bio properly now aside from the specific details that stood out to me.

But I'm not certain any further recommendations would have him fit into the plot for this RP very neatly, and I can't really support multiple character groups as a single GM.

I apologize for my failure in terms of bio analysis, I've actually been sort of preoccupied with some other stuff and thus I screwed up here.

Dawn Beyond Tomorrow: A Magitech distant postapocalyptic action-adventure RP

@Searat: Hmmm, I think I could go with the personality being a bit more fleshed out at least, and I do want to point out Alhein's not a city or territory, it's a paramilitary organization operating in any territories that give it permission.

@Dead Cruiser: I'm going to be honest and say something I've been a little hesitant to: I still kind of want to see @Bartimaeus's take on the idea before I go ahead.

Since your ideas are so close to one another, I think it's fair to see both.

Dawn Beyond Tomorrow: A Magitech distant postapocalyptic action-adventure RP

Sorry for the delay, I'll take a look at everything soon!