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@Lady Lila Hey there. So here's the things you need to change -
  • This isn't officially in the CS yet, but can you make a note of how many years she was at the mansion? Just put it under affiliation or next to it
  • So in her history....It's not clear where she picked up all of those fighting skills.
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@Morose Thanks for the info! I've made the above adjustments as requested, and look forward to joining the team soon! :D
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Looks good to me, move her over to the CS tab
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@Lady Lila: Day 7 (+2 day extension) so get your post in before your counter hits day 10
@Nallore: Day 6
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Are you still accepting new players, or is the game too far in?
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@Draven Hello! At the moment I believe we are past the point of accepting new players. However, this arc is nearing its climax/close, so once the next arc begins, would you like to be contacted? (As that will be an ideal point to bring in new people)
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Sounds great, thanks!
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I would love to be included in the "perhaps joining after current arc" list lol. This game is impressive and seems like everything I'm looking for in a RP :).
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Sure, I'll let you know when we are wrapping up the current story arc which would be when I'd allow new characters
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@17th Day You have been removed from the RP due to your counter hitting day 8. This is actually the second time this has happened, and I'm generally a little more lenient the first time around, but this is your second time in a row, so you have been removed. Good luck in all future roleplays you are in.
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Hello!!! So thinking of joining.
What do i need to read to catch up on? Read the zeroth post as well as the tid bits for arch one and arch two.

Can I make a female character?
Where do you need more characters?
SHIELD, X-men? Mutants or X-men?

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Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Eviledd1984
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Hello is their room for one more?

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So, you can join, however it would likely be the next update for your character to be able to jump in, I'd recommend having your character ready by next week sometime so I have a little time to add them to the RP...
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Okay no problem, I will try to get character sheet done today or tomorrow.
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@Eviledd1984 Okay, few things....
1) You need to stick with the CS form layout. The linebreaks need to go back in, as do the bolding in the code. Take a look at completed CS's in the CS tab for an example if you are lost.
2) BlueSky44 is trying to phase out Brotherhood members, so putting no affiliation would be better. They're not going to be an option anymore coming up as the story focuses on the X-Men primarily.
3) (I have to ask this, and I really hate that I have to...) But can you write a neo-Nazi properly? There's a thin line between writing a racist character and writing racist-ly that a lot of people have trouble with.
4) In terms of backstory, a Nazi joining the Brotherhood doesn't make sense. Magneto is jewish - he was sent to concentration camps and founded the Brotherhood essentially to prevent a second Holocaust. Magneto never would have accepted a character like him into the ranks.
5) Additionally, just as an FYI to you, the Hellfire Club is not slated to appear in this RP.
6) Look again in the rules, you are missing things
7) Personal opinion here, but I don't think this type of character matches the vibe of this RP at all. I think it'll be painful for you to write this individual and not conducive to a good RP experience...And the GM and I want everyone here to have the best experience possible.

Given this and everything above...The GM and I do not feel that you would be a good fit for this RP.
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@FantasyChic@LadyRunic@Morose@Nallore@KazAlkemi

Skill rewards! Since, you know, the arc is almost over. You have a little while to edit these in or not. For most, one is general, one is combat, but for Annie she just gets a combat skill upgrade

Marygold: Leadership / Running
Guin: Engineering Design / Archery
Ayita: Sleight of Hand / Hand to Hand Combat
Allison: Perception / Hand to Hand Combat
Carolina: Singing / Stealth
Richard: Intimidation / Wrestling
Mira: Basic First Aid / Staff Fighting
Lance: First Aid -> Advanced First Aid / Pistols
Sara: Strategy / Parkour
Dean: Basic First Aid -> Combat First Aid / Boxing
Beth: Intuition / Knife Fighting
Antoinette: Basic Hand to Hand -> Advanced Hand to Hand Combat
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So I saw the advertisement for this RP and am considering joining, but I do have a it of a question;

Do not submit WIP's - Final CS's only

^I've always edited my WIPs and put them up as a backup, it will be edited and I am not submitting it, but WIPs are great for feedback and to communicate ideas. As long as it's not being submitted as a final product is it okay to edit CS piece by piece on here and ask for feedback? Again it also nice to have a backup if Google Docs or Word has a failure the sheet is always present on the Guild.
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@AngelofOctober By that I mean I dont want Character sheets that are halfways done. Ask all the questions you like. Send me a broad idea, and fill in details to resubmit for a final okay. Just not something that's a half baked idea and has gaping plot holes you can keep changing and thus have change your character
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