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Like the changes, she's accepted now! You can move her on over.
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Well...I said I was going to try K Nine but I guess I'm just subborn.

This still needs some touching up in terms of format but here's another attempt at Crimson Setsuka in terms of story and information.



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@canaryrose you're fired
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Hey any chance I can join the Discord while I wait on a spot? I just like chatting along with the story.

Also I have a concept for Starbright as a background NPC character sort of thing. It won't take up narrative room but more just what hes up to now, if you all want that.
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Hey any chance I can join the Discord while I wait on a spot? I just like chatting along with the story.

Also I have a concept for Starbright as a background NPC character sort of thing. It won't take up narrative room but more just what hes up to now, if you all want that.


Good news for you, there now IS a new spot ready for you, so feel free to hop on in.
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Well...I said I was going to try K Nine but I guess I'm just subborn.

This still needs some touching up in terms of format but here's another attempt at Crimson Setsuka in terms of story and information.





Uh Hitman. Sorry if you missed this. I just needed an opinion on it.
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Uh Hitman. Sorry if you missed this. I just needed an opinion on it.


It does say in your OOC post that it still needs touching up. I'd prefer everything be complete before being presented.
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Hidden 3 yrs ago 3 yrs ago Post by DarkRecon
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Well...still here...somehow. For those reading, I maybe gone for a bit yet again though...got a storm coming in the east coast and I don't know if I'll lose power or not. But because of my job and the stress it's been building on me, I don't even know if I can make time for this now.

I apologize if I'm just going into a rant but I haven't been active either in here or in the discord. But at the same time, I need something to keep me creative. And doing this help over video games sometimes believe it or not ^_^.

Anyways, this might be my last attempt at making characters for this but here's my latest attempt. There's two now. Another attempt at Crimson Setsuka and the other, now veteran hero K Nine formely known as Alpha of Hero One. I don't know when I'll read a response to this so please be patient with me -__-'.

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@Hitman@canaryrose (and on the side @Rabidporcupine)

With Rabid's permission, and after having it looked over by them to ensure it is in-line with Grahm/Enkidu's lore and so forth, I present the calculating, the intelligent, and the young hero...Scarab!




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I'm not entirely sure if or when you'll get the chance to use him, but this is a great concept. Accepted!

Well...still here...somehow. For those reading, I maybe gone for a bit yet again though...got a storm coming in the east coast and I don't know if I'll lose power or not. But because of my job and the stress it's been building on me, I don't even know if I can make time for this now.

I apologize if I'm just going into a rant but I haven't been active either in here or in the discord. But at the same time, I need something to keep me creative. And doing this help over video games sometimes believe it or not ^_^.

Anyways, this might be my last attempt at making characters for this but here's my latest attempt. There's two now. Another attempt at Crimson Setsuka and the other, now veteran hero K Nine formely known as Alpha of Hero One. I don't know when I'll read a response to this so please be patient with me -__-'.

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Hate to make you fix anything again, but both personality sections need a lot of work. It needs to be either in bullet points or more than a few sentences. Additionally, Crimson's tier should be at a B-, and Alpha's "blue bomb technique" just won't work.

@Hitman@canaryrose (and on the side @Rabidporcupine)

With Rabid's permission, and after having it looked over by them to ensure it is in-line with Grahm/Enkidu's lore and so forth, I present the calculating, the intelligent, and the young hero...Scarab!





Looks good. I'd say tier should be C+. Accepted!
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@canaryrose @Hitman Felicitations, malefactors. I'm here with a sheet for a secondary character incase Shadow Scythe has to take a back seat for one reason or another.

There's kind of...a lot? Here? She's just a secondary and I got a little carried away with the Iron Man fantasy perhaps but, she's a self-made rich bitch with something to prove, so. I thought it might be fun. Let me know what you think


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@canaryrose @Hitman Felicitations, malefactors. I'm here with a sheet for a secondary character incase Shadow Scythe has to take a back seat for one reason or another.

There's kind of...a lot? Here? She's just a secondary and I got a little carried away with the Iron Man fantasy perhaps but, she's a self-made rich bitch with something to prove, so. I thought it might be fun. Let me know what you think



Love her! One small nitpick: you forgot to delete one of the filler paragraphs in the Abilities section as well as the example boxes below it. Other than that, she's accepted.
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Hey guys! Canary here. We've already discussed this at length in the Discord, but @Hitman has regretfully decided to leave RPG for the foreseeable future and has left me in charge. Although it says otherwise in the top bar, I am now GM and @Zoey Boey is the new Co-GM (thread status pending). We've already contacted a mod and it turns out that it's not possible to transfer thread ownership, so Hitman will remain the GM in the top portion unless we switch threads. The permission difference is fairly minimal, thankfully. There won't be much of a difference.

Please direct any and all questions to either me or Zoey! We're undergoing a period of reconstruction at the moment so things will be slow.
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hell yeah we in business now
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Who's ready for an inexplicable burst of focus? I wasn't. I had plans for tonight. Instead, Marco.

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At last, after days of (on and off) writing, I have finished.

EDIT: ok, few revisions to the guy.

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Hey, you guys- we've moved to a new thread. You can find it here. From here on out, all posts, CSes, and questions should be posted there. This thread will be locked shortly.
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