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@Damo021 Unfortunately, we are full. I'll keep you updated if we have any openings, though!
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Here is my app! (finally)

In truth I do need help deciding a ranking for him, so under that category I made note of what I am initially thinking of giving him. I finished this app rather late at night so I also hope I got the general rating system right. ^^;

Regardless, if anything needs to be fixed or such just say the word and I'll do it! :D


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I like the concept, but there needs to be more elaboration in the appearance section as well as the powers section. You say 'fireworks manipulation' but fireworks are manmade explosives. Does she carry around fireworks with her to manipulate, or is it more a power like Jubilee's in Marvel? You could add some concrete limitations and elaboration in the ability sections too. Additionally, you need to clean up the grammar in this sheet.

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Here is my app! (finally)

In truth I do need help deciding a ranking for him, so under that category I made note of what I am initially thinking of giving him. I finished this app rather late at night so I also hope I got the general rating system right. ^^;

Regardless, if anything needs to be fixed or such just say the word and I'll do it! :D



Accepted! I think he should be A Tier.



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With a help with Akaya, she help me change Beth powers so that she have limitations. I also fix the grammar
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With sort of spellcraft at his side, the Modern Warlock takes center stage!

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Hi all. While I had NPC ideas, I FINALLY got around to making an actual character. Though this is still WIP, I'd like opinions on it before I continue:

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My non gm opinion thinks robo messiah is interesting.
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Interactions would certainly be interesting.
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Hey, whole team is back. Mind if I read along in my off time?

Also I could probably manage a character if space opens up.
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epic.

With sort of spellcraft at his side, the Modern Warlock takes center stage!



Really like Owen and the idea of a mage-hero seems super neat! If possible, I would like to see maybe some other type of restriction in the Imagination power. From where I'm at it seems that so long as the complexities of the Imagination power are put into writing, there's really no end to the potential of the power. There really should be some sort of 'top end' or time limit or some sort of cap on how much imagination he could use. Outside of that though, really do love him, he'll fit in great!

Hi all. While I had NPC ideas, I FINALLY got around to making an actual character. Though this is still WIP, I'd like opinions on it before I continue:



Interesting concept, but there's a lot that's missing from the table right now.

  • The whole powers/abilities section is absent, and that's kind of a must-have.
  • The classified intel should be DMed to me and Canary. Let me know if I missed it, but I don't think I've received anything of the sort.
  • HERO is not an international organization. HERO would have zero jurisdiction as to Japan's hero activity- that would belong to PHANTOM. As such, she can't just travel the globe willy-nilly.
  • Again, full backstory should be DMed to me and Canary before I can accept the character. ​
  • The entire concept of "e-Heroes" isn't clear to me, as your bio references both traditional law enforcement and hero companies as being Crimson Satsuka's employer. The former would really make her just a special forces ekop, while the latter wouldn't make much sense from a logical perspective. Hero companies employ metahumans, not robots, and robots are in fact singlehandedly weighing down the broader hero community. Hero companies would see no need to, and would in fact be STRONGLY opposed to, any form of electronic hero.
  • Going by the former point's logic, it would also make zero sense why one hero company would ship what they view as a defective robot off to another continent. Wouldn't she just have been destroyed on the spot, or at least re-programmed in some way? Just saying 'here, we'll send the potentially compromised goods to another company to deal with' doesn't really make any sense.

A good idea, but there are a lot of flaws in the blueprint.

Hey, whole team is back. Mind if I read along in my off time?

Also I could probably manage a character if space opens up.


Of course! I couldn't consider myself a GM if I didn't make an exception for Starbright tbh
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Cool cool I'll wait on a spot. Unfortunately, I probably won't go with a Starbright clone. Though the legacy characters are cool to see.
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Who needs a clone? Just bring back the OG! Then he can look at Leon’s personality and cringe at how he used to look to everyone else!
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@Rabidporcupine yesss, fallen pop star
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Fallen? With the way his character had been developing by the time it died, I would’ve assumed he was basically All Might/Captain America by now! He should be more popular than ever!
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The later plan was for him to go like a 90s singer, go a bit crazy then fall off the map. But I'm not opposed to the character having some presence
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Interesting concept, but there's a lot that's missing from the table right now.

  • The whole powers/abilities section is absent, and that's kind of a must-have.
  • The classified intel should be DMed to me and Canary. Let me know if I missed it, but I don't think I've received anything of the sort.
  • HERO is not an international organization. HERO would have zero jurisdiction as to Japan's hero activity- that would belong to PHANTOM. As such, she can't just travel the globe willy-nilly.
  • Again, full backstory should be DMed to me and Canary before I can accept the character. ​
  • The entire concept of "e-Heroes" isn't clear to me, as your bio references both traditional law enforcement and hero companies as being Crimson Satsuka's employer. The former would really make her just a special forces ekop, while the latter wouldn't make much sense from a logical perspective. Hero companies employ metahumans, not robots, and robots are in fact singlehandedly weighing down the broader hero community. Hero companies would see no need to, and would in fact be STRONGLY opposed to, any form of electronic hero.
  • Going by the former point's logic, it would also make zero sense why one hero company would ship what they view as a defective robot off to another continent. Wouldn't she just have been destroyed on the spot, or at least re-programmed in some way? Just saying 'here, we'll send the potentially compromised goods to another company to deal with' doesn't really make any sense.

A good idea, but there are a lot of flaws in the blueprint.


So yeah. After this explanation and what you told me, trying to make a "good robot" wouldn't work at all with the lore of this RP.

...*sigh*...well back to the drawing board. Might as well re-vamp K Nine then. Jesus though I've lost my edge with character design here.
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