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That's fine, I primarily had the changing appearance aspect as a reflection of her magic being (very) loosely based on reincarnation in Hinduism as opposed to say a phoenix's reincarnation. Possible hijinks were also on my mind, though I can see how drastically differing appearances could extend beyond just that into OOC annoyance. I've updated it so while it still changes, it has strong tendencies towards her old attributes so hopefully that will allow for the best of both worlds!

In regards to updating images, I prefer to keep things as upkeep-free as possible. Perhaps a good way would be just to update the one icon image above the CS in the characters tab as opposed to the three inside? It'd also be nice to have the finished image waiting before a reincarnation so I can base the new appearance on the image instead of the other way around, then get a new one for the next incarnation


Having to update the image may be tedious to keep up with on both sides, so if nothing else, you could just have a recognizable permanent mark on her face (or something equivalent) that is consistent no matter which form she takes. So people (and the players) familiar with Manny can be like, "Oh, that's just Manny" Whereas other people unfamiliar with her can be confused or tricked because they don't know her mark or key feature that people familiar with her do. That way, you can just describe her new form IC, but we will know its her automatically cause of this distinguishable "mark" or something to that avail.
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Having to update the image may be tedious to keep up with on both sides, so if nothing else, you could just have a recognizable permanent mark on her face (or something equivalent) that is consistent no matter which form she takes. So people (and the players) familiar with Manny can be like, "Oh, that's just Manny" Whereas other people unfamiliar with her can be confused or tricked because they don't know her mark or key feature that people familiar with her do. That way, you can just describe her new form IC, but we will know its her automatically cause of this distinguishable "mark" or something to that avail.


Deja gave this exact suggestion as well actually. That made me consider that it could make sense for Manny's aeonheart to manifest itself more visually for her than others, since hers acts similarly to a symbiote rather than a traditional organ, given that it controls her magic automatically. Even her "consciously willing" to reincarnate is just sending Vitesse into it, activating the "interfered with" clause.

I did like the idea of wildly varying appearances, so if you don't think it'll be bothersome for people then I've went ahead and updated Manny's character sheet again.

Out of curiosity, are aeonhearts literal organs located in the same place for every mystic, or does its location vary from mystic to mystic? Since there are some people with two I imagine there's some degree of variance to it. Additionally, are there Earth animals as well as fantasy animals, or are all animals unique in this world? I've been assuming they would all be unique (and look forward to making plenty of new creatures for her incarnations), but specified her mark as a butterfly to represent the transformative rebirth aspect of the magic.
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I've made the edits to mine.



Also BlackroseSiren made her changes but she's having trouble logging on. She asked me to post with mine.


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Deja gave this exact suggestion as well actually. That made me consider that it could make sense for Manny's aeonheart to manifest itself more visually for her than others, since hers acts similarly to a symbiote rather than a traditional organ, given that it controls her magic automatically. Even her "consciously willing" to reincarnate is just sending Vitesse into it, activating the "interfered with" clause.

I did like the idea of wildly varying appearances, so if you don't think it'll be bothersome for people then I've went ahead and updated Manny's character sheet again.

Out of curiosity, are aeonhearts literal organs located in the same place for every mystic, or does its location vary from mystic to mystic? Since there are some people with two I imagine there's some degree of variance to it. Additionally, are there Earth animals as well as fantasy animals, or are all animals unique in this world? I've been assuming they would all be unique (and look forward to making plenty of new creatures for her incarnations), but specified her mark as a butterfly to represent the transformative rebirth aspect of the magic.


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Okay. Just saw your changes. I think almost all mystics have their aeonhearts in the same place, side by side where hearts typically are in the chest. These are still humans at their core, after all, but the location of Manny's second aeonheart can be a biological anomaly unique to her. I mean, Raffaella's aeonhearts are conjoined, so it could just be an extremely rare thing that sometimes these kinds of medical anomalies/mutations occur with a Mystic's second aeonhearts - Rafaella and Manny being the only current recognizable examples of that.

And yes, there are both "Earth" animals and "Fantasy" animals unique to Lekë. When you have some unique animal transformation ideas, run them by me first so we can be sure they're a good fit for this world.

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Okay. Just saw your changes. I think almost all mystics have their aeonhearts in the same place, side by side where hearts typically are in the chest. These are still humans at their core, after all, but the location of Manny's second aeonheart can be a biological anomaly unique to her. I mean, Raffaella's aeonhearts are conjoined, so it could just be an extremely rare thing that sometimes these kinds of medical anomalies/mutations occur with a Mystic's second aeonhearts - Rafaella and Manny being the only current recognizable examples of that.

And yes, there are both "Earth" animals and "Fantasy" animals unique to Lekë. When you have some unique animal transformation ideas, run them by me first so we can be sure they're a good fit for this world.


Manny only has one aeonheart, so I'll just leave her mark as a mark instead of an indication of her aeonheart's location.

The current list of fantasy animals I made up for Manny's character sheet:
Bungral - A thick, stubby eel that grows to be longer than a man is tall. Its infamously messy eating process leads to meal residue buildup especially on its catfish-like whiskers, causing them to droop even underwater. This makes bungral look grumpy, though it's impossible to tell how they actually feel about it.
Wipwiper - A tiny whiskered fish found in schools that develop symbiotic relationships with larger ocean creatures, where it cleans the scales of the creature in exchange for protection from predators. Sailors used to think wipwipers were baby bungral due to their matching whiskers and common grouping.
Scorpiotross - A grey seabird known for the venom in its spurs, which allows it to catch larger than normal prey thanks to the paralytic toxin preventing the fish from struggling and breaking free.
Frigidon - A massive stealth predator that looks like a furry crocodile and is native to the snowdrift covered islands in the far north. Its heavy weight and lean build allows it to maneuver along the ground beneath deep snow unnoticed, and its length allows it to stand on its back legs and grasp prey walking atop the snow in its powerful jaws.
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Hello All,

Today is the day to go over the character sheets that need some relatively minor changes before we can approve them. Aside from @Alfhedil, whom we've already discussed with in private, please look at the required adjustments for your character and make the necessary changes to your character sheet. Please resend your revised character sheet to @Aeolian in PM or repost it in the OOC thread by EOD Sunday Jul 2, EST.

@Alfhedil Go ahead and move your character sheet over to the character tab. Once your character art is done, you can add it retroactively; that's when we'll make the character blurb for Corrina too. Aesthetically, it doesn't work without the character art. lol Thanks!


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Taegan “Tae” Granlock

1. The reputation section should be 1 to 2 well-written paragraphs, so please expand on this.

2. Expand the goals section to a few more sentences. Gives us more insight into what Tae wants to accomplish, whether that be during his time at Harold's Academy or after graduation, and why?

3. Expand the "Mystic Code" section to at least a paragraph. Give us more details about what his light manipulation can do.


Sorry for taking so long. But I think I fixed it.

In their heart, Tae is still an Illuminaire
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The staff is looking neat! Can't wait! And @Ebil Bunny snowgator?? didn't know I needed it
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Now that I can finally log in I have asked Echotech to delete the sheet off his to post it on mine.
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This looks perfect! It should be posted as an official roleplay here.
It's the only one that looks good on the forums so far.
I wish this could be posted at Umbra Roleplaying as well.
When will this be finished?
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This looks perfect! It should be posted as an official roleplay here.
It's the only one that looks good on the forums so far.
I wish this could be posted at Umbra Roleplaying as well.
When will this be finished?


Hello,

Thank you for the kind words, though there are many other wonderful roleplays posted on this forum as well.

I'm not familiar with Umbra Roleplaying, but I do not use that site and plan to remain here. :)

There is no telling how long an RP will last. It will last as long as the players continue to participate, but we are full and not open to new participants for the time being.

Thank you for your interest.

Cheers!
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This rp looks great all around, unfortunately I’m just now seeing this a week after applications closed.

Most likely the idea of a waitlist is something you’ve probably haven’t given much thought, but if this were open back up in the future I’d love to join.

I’ve grown quite fond of the world building, characters, and overall vibe of this rp. I’m definitely going to be keeping up with this in my free time. I’m looking forward to how interactions between characters as well as how the story will play out.

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Hello All, here is the
Fifth Batch
of Approved Characters. For all the players who made changes to their character sheets by the due date, thank you for the effort, and welcome to Harold's Academy. Please move your character sheet over to the character tab at your earliest convenience.

A special note: @pkken While applications did close technically, we seemed to have lost two applicants during the application review process. After consulting with the players (who spoke favorably of you), I've decided you can create an application for this roleplay, but ONLY under the condition that your character has to be male. I can't make any exceptions to this requirement, as our cast is overwhelmingly female and needs a little more balance in this regard. If you're okay with that, I look forward to seeing your completed character sheet. :) FYI, there are no more positions open for Illuminaire.


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Taegan “Tae” Granlock

The golden-haired Noblesse from the famous Granlock Family has reached their 5th year in the House of Harold, and their reputation as one of the richest students has not dimmed, and neither has the lights they wield to illuminate their presence for all to admire.


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Manny Ryi

No one could have imagined that a first year from the House of Seraphine would unlock the secrets to immortality; her unimaginable gift to reincarnate over and over again has proven to be a true mystical anomaly within the community.


@McKennaJ71
Beatrix Gyre

This vibrant dreamer has always got her head deep within the pages of a fantasy book, but as a 5th year from the House of Seraphine, she might have come back to reality to continue mastering her power over lightning.


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Aurora Celeste

The vitesse of a performer has a different feel to it; you can sense it from this fifth year from the House of Harold; she's got her flute in one hand, her feet dancing away, and a stack of playing cards supercharged for one hell of an explosive finale.



@BlackRoseSiren@McKennaJ71 The visual updates that I requested for you both to make to your character sheets were not quite as they needed to be according to the original template. But no worries. I have taken the liberty of transposing both of your sheets into the proper formatting. Please copy and paste your character sheet from here into the character tab. Thank you! :)

@McKennaJ71





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∘ Where did you get all these pictures and text?∘ ப்
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Wow I was not expecting a spot to open anytime soon so I am caught a bit off guard. Thank you for the opportunity. I am also totally fine with making a male character!

Also a special thanks to those who vouched for me

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Hi, I'm still following along with this as I think it looks fun. I'll be happy to be put on a waitlist if that is possible. I don't mind waiting as that would give me more time to develop a character
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Made up a relation list for Walter, based largely on about a week's worth of impressions or so. More of a surface impression than anything too deep.


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@Jumbus We seemed to have lost a second player as well, so you can create a character application too. But as I told pkken, I will only accept a character that is male because we need more male characters to balance out the roster. If you're okay with making a male character, then I look forward to reviewing your character sheet! :)

Cheers!



@pkken No problem. Looking forward to reviewing your application.



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Thanks, I'll try to have something written up in a couple of days. I do have a few questions that I didn't pick up from my reading of the OOC and just want to confirm.

- Is being a Mystic a genetic thing/are you more likely to be a Mystic is a family member was one? Would you be likely to have a similar ability as them?
- While it is implied, is the academy a floating sky island? How much of the world consists of those?

My idea with the character is that he didn't sign up for about a year after his gift manifested. During that time he went on a spree of incredibly petty theft and all around being a public nuisance. During which time he did try getting recruited by a Daemon, but he rejected them.

- would be possible? I imagine there are some parts of the world where the Academy reach doesn't go as far and the Daemon academy tends to find more recruits?

- Would petty theft constitute someone being regarded as a Daemon. Because I would like to avoid that?

Sorry it's a lot of questions lol. Just wanting to make sure some of my core ideas are okay before I write up my concept.

Thanks

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Thanks, I'll try to have something written up in a couple of days. I do have a few questions that I didn't pick up from my reading of the OOC and just want to confirm.

- Is being a Mystic a genetic thing/are you more likely to be a Mystic is a family member was one? Would you be likely to have a similar ability as them?
- While it is implied, is the academy a floating sky island? How much of the world consists of those?

My idea with the character is that he didn't sign up for about a year after his gift manifested. During that time he went on a spree of incredibly petty theft and all around being a public nuisance. During which time he did try getting recruited by a Daemon, but he rejected them.

- would be possible? I imagine there are some parts of the world where the Academy reach doesn't go as far and the Daemon academy tends to find more recruits?

- Would petty theft constitute someone being regarded as a Daemon. Because I would like to avoid that?

Sorry it's a lot of questions lol. Just wanting to make sure some of my core ideas are okay before I write up my concept.

Thanks


Hello,

1. Being a Mystic is a mutation and random, though sometimes it is hereditary, as a family with several Mystics has a greater chance of passing down that gene or even the same power. But there's no guarantee.

2. All the islands in this world are floating in the sky, called Sky Islands. So yes, the Academy sits upon a sky island, as does every other place in this world. There are no islands down below. The only thing down below is a vast endless ocean.

3. You don't sign up for the Academy. It is compulsory. Once your gift manifests (for most people, that's in adolescence), you are required to attend the Academy for 8 hours. It is mandatory, so you can't delay it. The label of Daemon is only given to Mystics who use their gifts to commit really evil/treasonous acts. Petty theft would not get you classified as a Daemon, but it might get you sent to a juvenile facility until your gift manifested, at which point, you'd be sent to Harold's Academy. But your character can't be a Daemon anyways, just a regular Mystic. Your character is still a teen, so if they committed petty theft in the past, they wouldn't be labeled a Daemon, though the Headmistress would likely know about their past and make provisions. Some teens come from troubled pasts, so I'm not against the idea of a character who used to steal. And yes, the Academy reaches most, but not every part of the world. But be mindful that the Academy's influence is very far-reaching, especially as it has the backing of Parliament. Very few parts of the world are out of their reach. It is possible, though, that when their gift manifested, a Daemon tried to recruit them, but they rejected it. Although in this world, there is no guarantee that Daemon academies even exist. It is considered a myth.

Let's just be thoughtful not to create a character that causes trouble just for the sake of causing trouble. Create a character with nuances -- whose troubled past may explain why they are the way they are, but it shouldn't dictate everything that they do. This means, try to avoid creating sociopaths or psychopaths, as it just doesn't add much other than bottomless friction for the cast, with little room for nuanced character development. But yes,
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Thanks for the clarification.

My idea is that his grandmother told him to run from the Academy recruitment due to losing her husband to the war. He initially did so leading to some time period (I'm flexible on how long that could realistically be) where he manifested his power and was brought into the Academy. He went around doing some petty thefts after that at which point some shady guy would have tried to recruit him to something. Only due to hearing about the myth would he have guessed its related to Daemons.

I want him to be a trouble maker but certainly not a bad person. He is conflicted between was he was told about the war as he grew up and the harsh reality of it that he learns from class. Rebel without a cause type of deal

Let me know if this is all good with you. Thanks

Edit: He would have gifts around wind and flying so he is a bit harder to catch if that helps. Also he would be in his second year so I plan for him to be more calmed down than what he would have been in his first. I don't want to be disruptive to the RP or anything, just have him be teen rebellious like stay out past curfew and things like that
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