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Some seriously good stuff here, everyone. Good job, and thank you all for participating!
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Behold! The vote-ening has arrived!

I encourage everyone that cares about the Contests(and if you don't already, I encourage you to begin now) to read through all of the wonderful entries submitted in the past two weeks, and cast their vote for their favorite! The submission with the most votes will be posted in a stickied "Trophy Case" thread where it will be displayed for all to see, and its author added to the list of Meritorious Writers at the very top!

Of course, this thread is also for critiquing. Note I said critiquing, not shitslinging. Constructive criticism only, please. Feel free to go through any one or all of the entries and give your two cents in helping your fellow writers improve! Those that have entered this contest are absolutely allowed to critique each others' works, contestants can absolutely vote, though not for their own, obviously.

Needless to say, using multiple accounts to vote more than once is NOT ALLOWED, and if an author uses alts to vote for their own work, they will be disqualified on the spot and disbarred from entering any future Contests.

Please vote based on the merits of the work, not for the sake of a clique or just because the author happens to be your friend. And mostly certainly do not attempt to have an author falsely disqualified because you don't happen to like them, because I'll fucking find out and it won't be pretty.



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by @BrokenPromise
Due to how my own schedule works, and also because I prefer to have a bit of a grace period for entries, I usually have a soft deadline and a hard deadline. Soft deadline being what's in the OP of each Prompt and Entry thread. The "hard" deadline is typically sometime the day after(usually when I get off work, lel).

Speaking of, I believe the hard deadline for this contest has been reached. Thus, I shall close the Prompt and Entries thread and put together the voting thread!

Oh, and I will admit the rules for my specific contests are more like guidelines. Staying within them would be nice, but if you believe your entry can be made to be truly exceptional by bending them, then by all means, go ahead.

Though of course some rules are non-negotiable, such as the entry having to be in line with the prompt, obviously.

I do apologize to anyone that joins my contests in the future expecting some kind of rule-lawyered bloodsport where the losers' souls are fed to the user with the winning entry to gain their powers or something. Just isn't how I generally run stuff like this.
Pendants, armor, even clothes for Mara's sake, all made out of sparkling gold. Sagax never in his life had even imagined such opulence, not even in the chambers of the Emperor himself. In truth it was almost blinding, reflected light assaulting the Imperial's eyes from every conceivable direction. He was stuck somewhere between awe and disgust at the fat bastard's collection of riches, though Sagax would be lying if he said he didn't think about having a bit of it for himself, and that's when he spied a glistening robe hanging above a small pile of jewellery. He didn't need any of it...but...

To Oblivion with it, he was going to get something out of this suicide mission. Sagax swiped the robe and two rings out of the pile below it and stuffed them in his pack. It was a snug fit, but the locking strap had just enough length to be secured shut by the buckle. Well, at least it wasn't stealing. Not really, anyway. Only a little bit...technically. Besides, hadn't Sagax earned this? All he had given in his life, taking one or two pieces of gold shouldn't paint him as greedy. What had the Sload done to earn any of their riches, anyway? It wasn't theirs to begin with.

Then came the rumbling. Thunder? No, Sagax knew what he was feeling. Too well, as far as he was concerned. The airship was starting to come apart, geysers of flame erupting out of the massive balloon above and all across the hull of the vessel. When he reached the end of the deck closest to the Tear, the snapping of wood could be heard as the airship was starting to pull itself apart.

"Damn...!" Sagax muttered to himself with a weariness. The chains connecting the airship to the Kyne's Tear had broken off, that left him and the other mercenaries with one choice: jumping. The only sane choice was into the sea; he'd shatter every bone in his body trying to land on the deck of the Tear. But his bag would inhibit his ability to stay afloat...though what if Sagax were to send it to the Tear while he himself jumped overboard into the water? It was definitely worth a shot.

Gripping his bag tightly in one hand, Sagax backed up as far as he could for a running jump off of the airship. At the end of his run, he used a railing to propel him further upwards, hoping it would give him a better chance of hitting both of his marks simultaneously.
After lifting off, Sagax tossed his bag as hard as he could in the direction of the ship below. After that, it was in Kynareth's hands. Thinking of a short prayer for luck, the Imperial curled into a tight ball as he descended.

Back on the Kyne's ear, Piper had just barely held on enough to keep from being thrown overboard. A fortunate turn of events, given her armor, though not so fortunate for the others, though being brutally honest she didn't care much about those that did get thrown into the water. Besides, she wasn't exactly equipped for a search and rescue. She would need to stay on the ship.

Suddenly, something caught her attention. Flying through the sky towards the ship was a bundle of what looked like leather. When it landed just a few feet from her, she saw clearly that it was in face her brother's travel bag. Piper's heart sank when he looked up and saw the airship being torn apart, explosions ripping it asunder. Behind her helmet, tears washed across her face as the Imperial woman first searched the waters near the Tear, then looked back to the sky. There she saw another figure, clad in leather racing down from above into the sea, meeting the surface with a crash before disappearing. Gripping the railing of the deck, Piper's breathing stopped as she stared at the spot her brother landed, waiting for him to come back up. He would. He had to.

Cold as ice and black as sin was the water that engulfed Sagax. He was frozen in shock for but a moment before breaking free of the paralyzing grip of the ocean and finding his way upward. Small streaks of light breaking through the waves guided Sagax to the surface, where he was greeted by fire, debris, and most importantly, air.

"SAGAX!"

Above Sagax was the heavily-armored figure of his sister. He was glad to see she looked relatively unharmed after her scuffle with the werewolf. He waved over at Piper to signal that he heard her. "I'm over here! Hey, was I able to get my bag onto the ship?"

"Wha-your bag...FORGET YOUR STUPID FUCKING BAG, YOU TWAT! GET YOUR ASS BACK ON THE SHIP!" As she spoke, Piper's voice became higher and higher pitched. Her throat had begun to lock up on her from anxiety, and she was still fighting to get the tears to stop even though Piper saw with her own eyes that Sagax looked fine. What was he thinking, asking about his bag? How the hell was that important!?

"R-right...! Don't worry, I'm coming over now! I can still swim just fine!"

Though the waves kept beating him back, Sagax was eventually able to make it back on board the Kyne's Tear with the help of a couple of sailors and some rope. He barely had time to take a single step before Piper ran over to him and jerked him over to her in a tight, almost crushing embrace. Sagax could hear that his sister was breathing quickly and heavily, and he thought he heard sniffling from within her helmet as well.

It was a rare display of emotion Piper was going through, and Sagax didn't really know what to say. So instead he remained quiet and simply returned his sister's hug as the others began pulling more people back onto the ship. He could check on the others later.
@Frizan So I decided I just wasn't satisfied with my entry that I was working on. Can I still 'submit' an entry that isn't apart of the voting/selection process? Basically, just for those that were passingly interested. Wouldn't mind the critiques, though I'm basically acknowledging I hadn't gotten to the editing stage/unfinished product.


Sure, just put a disclaimer at the beginning of your entry that signifies it is not part of the voting process.
@Frizan Is the metal age defined in any way? Like is this based upon anything? Or can somebody construct this world, its technology, setting and the behavior of these "red-eyed" constructs in basically anyway they wanted?


In this instance the "metal age" is defined as an invading force. It could be a literal army, or it could even be a metaphorical "invasion", showing the change from a "natural" existence to an automated/industrial one.
Feel free to direct any feedback or questions here! Please keep discussion relevant to the associated contest. All other Guild posting rules also apply.

And whew, sorry this took so long to get out, guys! My brain's been seizing up a lot lately.

Also shut up a guy with a Thief avatar hosting a contest called Beware The Metal Age is just a coincidence don't talk to me or my wife's son ever again
Beware The Metal Age




Clink

Clank

Ding

Pssssht


Do you hear it? The sounds of the metal-men. The rumbling of their steel contraptions and the hissing of pipes, the buzzing of electricity traveling across vast networks of thin wires. The Metal Age has come, and none can escape its grasp. They are already chipping away at the stone foundations of the past and replacing them with iron-plated monstrosities that cover whole villages and even cities. The green fields of yesterday now flattened by smog-bloated factories, with red-eyed faux-humanoids watching their new slaves toil away.

So, will you lie down and obey, and hope to gain a few privileges along the way? Or will you go against the unstoppable and fight, content with death over servitude? Perhaps you will master their contraptions, know more about these invaders than they know themselves, and turn it all against them. That is up to you.




Contest Rules

1. There aren't really any major stipulations for this prompt, the only one being that obviously the "metal age", whatever it might be for your entry, should be the main focus. With that said, please set your entries to be during or after the arrival of the "metal age"

2. Please title your entries!

3. The metal age is a force to be reckoned with. Show the struggles between them and your characters! No win buttons please.

Grounds for disqualification

1. Plagiarism.

2. Your entry having no clear connection to the prompt.

3. Gratuitous violence or gore.

4. Explicit sex scenes. Fade to black is fine.




Please submit your entry here in the Prompt and Entries thread by Tuesday, August 28th. Direct all questions and feedback to my PM box or the associated Discussion thread, and I will gladly answer them.

Please hold off all votes and critiques until the proper thread has been erected for this prompt.
Rip and Tear

by @Mortarion, @Dervish and myself

7th of Last Seed
Aboard the airship



White. In an instant that lasted an era, that’s all Sagax could see. He was blind, but he felt the raw force of the blast across his body, and could feel himself being sent up into the air and then coming back down. His whole front flared up in searing pain, as if he had jumped into a furnace. Even as he landed, Sagax’s ears rang and the Imperial found himself dizzy and disoriented. All he could hear was a distant roaring, unable to make out what it was saying. Eventually his vision and full hearing returned, thrusting him into a horrifying nightmare.

The airship was gone, the Sload and its zombified warrior little more than a distant memory now replaced by another, but was as vivid as the day it happened. All around him was the all too familiar sights and sounds of Windhelm’s docks, once again surrounded by the screams of the scared and the dying. He felt the cold wind against his chest, which was bared as the armor that once protected it had long since been charred away. In the middle of the fog, staff swinging in all directions and sending spells flying recklessly through the air, was the Kamal sorcerer. Its roar had turned into guttural laughter at the sight of the weak and frail Imperial before it.

When Sagax locked eyes with the beast, he did not fear it. All of his terror was being washed away by something new. Something just and primal and instinctual but far, far more destructive; he was consumed by an all-encompassing rage. When he saw his blade dangling off the bastard’s belt like some trophy, all Sagax knew was that he wanted the demon dead. He would drape himself in its blood, even if it was the last thing he ever did.

There was a sailor in his way. They sounded familiar and their formed seemed to...shift, but Sagax didn’t pay him enough mind to get a proper look. He simply shoved the man to the side as he sprinted toward the sorcerer.

The first sign that Tsleeixth had that he was alive was the slight jolt that he felt course through his body. He knew the feeling, his thrall had been destroyed by magic and potent one if he had felt some of it even when he hadn’t been focusing all of his attention in controlling the undead Dreugh. However, Tsleeixth didn’t have much time to think about the implications behind the destruction of his thrall, as pain flared up in his bum knee and quickly began spreading throughout his entire leg.

Willing himself to ignore the pain, Tsleeixth stood on shaky legs, still trying to get his bearings after the explosion that had seemingly knocked them all out. The thing that brought him fully to his sense was the sound of running, and the sound of a body hitting the deck of the airship followed by a stream of curses. The source of the latter became clear soon, one of the surviving sailors was lying on the ground, as for the origin of the former sound, its origin became all too clear soon as soon as Tsleeixth laid eyes on Sagax charging at full speed towards the zombified form of Tennant Ibnazh.

The zombified warrior also had taken notice of the Imperial charging at him and began swinging its club-appendage in Sagax’s direction; and yet the Imperial didn’t seem to register the danger at which he was running towards. Tsleeixth tried to move in the direction of the Imperial runner, but as he tried to advance pain flared from his knee once more and caused him to drop to a kneeling position. “C’mon Tsleeixth, now’s not the moment to let your weakness overcome you, if you do nothing Sagax is as good as dead.” The Argonian thought to himself, inwardly chastising his body for its weakness. Forcing himself to stand, the pain in his knee increasing with every movement he took, the Saxhleel spellsword began to sprint towards his Imperial comrade until at last, with a cry of pain, he was close enough to tackle Sagax out of the way of one of the zombie’s clumsy attacks, which instead hit him in the back.

“AaaAAAAAGH!” Sagax shouted as he hit the ground. When he looked up, he saw another sailor standing above him. Where the hell did he come from?

Raising his legs up, Sagax looked the man dead in the eyes, feeling the most powerful anger he had ever experienced in his life. “OFF!” he screamed before letting his boots loose into the chest of his savior, completely oblivious to the pain and effort Tsleeixth went through to keep him from harm. Undeterred, Sagax scrambled to his feet with the speed of a raging wolf and continued his beeline for the Kamal. “I HAVE TO KILL IT!”

Getting booted on the lungs certainly wasn’t what Tsleeixth was expecting when he had tackled Sagax, but in hindsight he probably should have expected something along those lines given the way that he was behaving. “To oblivion with that, all you are going to do is get yourself killed.” The Argonian thought, wheezing as Sagax scrambled to his feet.

It took him a few seconds, and even more pain from his bum knee, but Tsleeixth managed to get up on his feet as well and to tackle Sagax a second time. “Get a grip Sagax!” The spellsword shouted, raising his fist and hitting Sagax square on the side of his face. “If you are...if you are…” The Argonian tried to speak but began wheezing midway through what he was saying and it wasn’t long before he was coughing blood, either due to the blow that he had taken tackling Sagax the first time or due to the hit that Sagax himself had managed to get off.

The coughing fit subsided for a moment and Tsleeixth took the chance to punch Sagax one more time. “If you are still insisting on getting yourself killed, you’ll have to go through...through me…” The Argonian managed to say, standing up on shaky legs before the coughing fits began once again.

Just who the hell was this guy!? That was the second time he had brought Sagax to the ground. Did he have a death wish? If so, Sagax unfortunately did not have the time to grant their request. He was completely single minded, and nothing would stop him from reaching his goal. He noticed his pursuer favored one of his legs, and could also notice a slight limp in their step.

“So BE IT!” He roared, unleashing a vicious sweep straight into the knee of the sailor’s bad leg.

He was absolutely giddy with rage. He had finally reached his target, and all the haphazard flailing in the world wouldn’t keep him from plunging steel deep into their insides. One strike after another Sagax dodged and weaved through before finally getting close enough to dive for his blade. It gleamed and shined, his reflection clear as day. A perfect instrument of vengeance.

After that, Sagax lost all track of time and place. The only thing driving him was his mad desire to rip and tear. He would bore into the ice demon’s massive guts and parade them around the coasts, stringing them all across the deck and mast of the Kyne’s Tear. Each stab, slash and hack was wilder than the previous, but Sagax wasn’t worried about his accuracy. He could feel the blood coat him, even if it to be an oddly small amount for what he was doing to the beast, and in that moment he felt an overwhelming sense of both pride and accomplishment.

Tsleeixth definitely hadn’t expected Sagax to hit him in his bum leg, but it had the desired effect as the Argonian crumpled into the ground as a result of Sagax’s kick. He laid there on the ground, his leg on fire, coughing blood into the deck of the airship, until the coughing fits subsided for good and his pain had diminished to the point where he could will himself to ignore it and stand up.

Unfortunately, the time that had taken him to recuperate had given Sagax the perfect window to reach the zombified Tennant. To the Imperial’s credit, he wasn’t yet hit but Tsleeixth wasn’t about to take a chance and let Sagax get himself killed in his blind-fury. Taking a moment to compose himself, the spellsword gathered his magicka on his palm and conjured a half-formed atronach which he promptly unleashed on the crazed Imperial with a single order: keep him pinned down. With Sagax out of the way, Tsleeixth recovered his sword from the ground and approached the zombie warrior before sending a blast of lightning in the direction of the Sload’s thrall.

The zombie warrior changed its course towards the spellsword, swinging it’s club-appendage wildly as it attacked Tsleeixth. For the first few moments, the Saxhleel managed to evade the attacks of his foe and even managed to score a few hits of his own but as the fight dragged on the hits that Sagax had managed to score began slowing down Tsleeixth and allowed the zombie Tennant to score a couple of hits. Fortunately, the heavier armor that Tsleeixth now wore offered him a much better degree of protection but it was clear to him that he had to finish the fight soon or otherwise the balance would shift in the zombie’s favour.

“A thousand curses upon you!” Sagax shouted at Tsleeixth as the atronach held him down, keeping him from his prize. “I was SO CLOSE! DAMN YOU!” At least now, it seem the fool would fully suffer for their intervention. The sorcerer outmatched the sailor tenfold, the idiot bastard becoming more sluggish with each step.

As the quarrel continued Sagax felt the pressure on him begin to weaken, and the atronach appeared to be slowly fading away. Eventually the Imperial was able to wriggle himself out of its grasp and once again retrieve his blade. Ignoring the sailor at his feet, Sagax leapt at the Kamal and climbed up its back for a final strike. When he had a good hold, he raised his sword, now holding it blade-down. With one swift motion, Sagax plunged his sword straight through the head of the kamal sorcerer. It was softer than he expected, but that just made it all the better. He continued to hang on as the beast twirled and spasmed, determined to take it down.

Tsleeixth hadn’t noticed his Atronach weakening, nor Sagax’s escape from its grip, until the Imperial’s blade came out of the other side of the zombified Tennant’s head. He didn’t stop to question what Sagax was doing and instead drove his sword through the zombie’s stomach, twisting the blade before pulling it out. It didn’t take too long for the zombie to topple backwards, finally dead.

With the threat of the zombie warrior finally over, Tsleeixth felt the adrenaline leave his veins and the pain return gradually. It didn’t take too long for the pain to become unbearable due to how much he had overexerted himself and his bum leg, and so the Saxhleel spellsword collapsed on the deck of the airship with a cry of pain.

He didn’t even notice that he fell. All Sagax knew was that he saw the form of the ice demon collapsed before him, blood seeping out of every part of its body. He took a moment to savor this victory before yanking his blade out of the corpse of his nemesis, raising it high in a stance of triumph.

“YES! DIE! AHAHA!” Undoubtedly unnerving to all but himself, Sagax let out loud, victorious laughter. He was overcome by a sense of jubilation, yet he was so tired. He held his head in his hands in an attempt to contain himself, but when he opened his eyes he became disoriented and confused. Around him was not the river of Windhelm, nor the cold stone walls of the city. The air was still cold, but he felt heat all around him. Thrust back into reality, the Imperial was now surrounded by the flaming wreckage of the airship. In front of him was not the kamal sorcerer, but the zombie warrior of the slug creature.

“I...what? Where am I?” His head felt like it was about to burst open, and it was difficult to breathe. “Tsleeixth…!” Sagax took one step, and only one step, before falling to the ground. His vision was blurred and everything around him spun; no matter how hard he tried to stand the weary man simply couldn’t find his ever-present balance.

His blade clanked to the ground in front of him, covered in blood and bile. What little Sagax could see of himself made his eyes go wide with horror. His face was absolutely coated with blood, and when he looked down at himself he saw more and more covering his whole body. What had he done? Everything was so fuzzy, and trying to recall anything made his head hurt even worse.

“Ts...Tsleeixth. What...ngh...what happened? I don’t...I don’t know what I did and...oh sweet Mara I feel like I’m going to be sick…”
Tsleeixth tried to stand up as he heard Sagax address him, letting out a relieved sigh when he noticed that the Imperial was back to normal. “Oh, thank the Hist that you are back to normal, Sagax.” The Argonian spoke, trying to stand up to help Sagax only to wind up falling to his knees. He panted for breath, trying to push the pain out of his mind, and after a few moments, the Argonian managed to stand up once again though it was evident by the shake of his legs that Tsleeixth was in a bad shape.

“I….I couldn’t rightly tell, you….you seemed to go mad with bloodlust.” The Argonian began to explain as he made his way towards Sagax with slow, measured, steps. “You charged towards the Sload’s thrall without a care in the world, as if your sole objective in life was its demise. I tried to stop you, but you resisted….violently so.” He continued on, wincing at the mention of the violent way that Sagax had resisted his attempts to keep him away from the zombie Tennant. “You only managed to get to the zombie once you struck me on my bad leg….after the explosion and all that had happened I didn’t had the strength to stand up in time to stop you.” He explained as he finally reached the Imperial.

“That doesn’t matters now though, what’s important is that you are back to normal and that the zombie is dead.” Said Tsleeixth, trying to smile towards Sagax but it was easy to tell that it was a strained, and somewhat fake, gesture. “Come, take my hand, I’ll help you to get up. We should probably get out of here as quickly as we can, we also need to figure a way to get Do’Karth out as well. The zombie knocked him out cold, so he won’t be able to make it down the chain by his own.” He said to the Imperial, offering him both hands to help him stand up.

The words had come and gone from Do’Karth’s mind, registering the shouting and words of his friends but not comprehending the words. The world slowly came back into focus from the darkness that had consumed him… how long had it been? The last thing he recalled was being forced into the deck and his vision blurring to black faster than he could react. His entire body screamed in pain, and he was aware of the blood dripping out of his muzzle. Suddenly, he realized he wasn’t breathing properly and he began to cough bloody spittle, driving his knuckles into the deck and pushing himself up. His mind began to clear, and soon he was looking around, trying to find his staff, the danger, anything. Another coughing fit, and more red-tinged fluid splattered violently from his diaphragm.

He caught sight of Tsleexith and Sagax moments later, and from their posture the fight was over. Trying to stand, he struggled, his legs feeling like lead weights. “...S-sorry.” he managed, amazed his throat was able to form words.

“Thank you, Tsleeixth...and uh, it probably doesn’t mean much, but I’m sorry for any...trouble I caused. I wish I could recall…” Slowly but surely, Sagax began to feel his strength return. The world steadied and his breaths slowed, though he still felt a bit strange. All he wanted to do was lie down and sleep. Unfortunately there was still quite a lot to do. The highest priority at that moment was getting off the airship.

When he saw movement, Sagax hobbled his way towards it, lo and behold, it was none other than Do’Karth. “Karth! There you are!” he said reaching down to help the singed cat up. “I’m glad you’re still among the living. Come on, we should go, there’s no telling how long this tub is going to stay up.”

Accepting the help, Do’Karth struggled to his feet. His head immediately began to throb. “This one needs to find his staff. What happened?” he asked, looking around for the sload and finding the monstrous ghoul.

Tsleeixth looked around the ruined deck of the airship, spotting Do’Karth’s staff laying perilously close to one of the holes that had been created during the explosion. The Saxhleel spellsword made his way to the staff and bent to pick it up, hissing as pain flared in his bum knee again, before returning to the Khajiit and Imperial. “Here’s your staff Do’Karth.” He said, presenting the staff to the Khajiit, “It probably must have rolled through the deck during all the commotion.” The spellsword speculated. “As to what happened….well, Sagax and I fought against the Sload’s thrall and managed to vanquish him.” Tsleeixth explained to Do’Karth, “As to what happened to the Sload….I believe that Alim and Sadri were fighting it and seeing as it's no longer present on the ship, I believe they were triumphant.”

“But we won’t know for sure until we leave the ship, I think.” He spoke, shaking his head slightly. “Oh, and Sagax, there’s no need to apologize, you weren’t yourself.” The Argonian said, turning to look at the Imperial. “But come now, we can continue this discussion once we are safely back on the Kyne’s Tear.”

“This one apologies for being so reckless. You could have been injured.” Do’Karth protested, looking crestfallen.

“Don’t feel too bad, Karth. You aren’t the only reckless one, as I’m sure you know.” Sagax said as he secured his blade to his person. “Now let’s get moving before we end up in the sea.”
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