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What's even going on in Hell anymore.


It has become a Pandemonium, that's all I know.
I'll issue more replies after work.
So when exactly will the next battle take place?


This weekend, very much likely. Depends mostly on what everyone and @TheWindel wants to do.
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I swear if Victoire shows up in this Syphax will reenact his lewd time with Eve on her. Except with more blood and organ removal.


Don't look at me, I have nothing to do with that. Plus she seems far nicer than Victoire, you don't have to worry about what will happen if a nympho vampire capture's you character... yet.
IT LIVEEEEES!!!
Since the Vessels are this RP's major gimmick and my ideas about them didn't seem to get through as well as I wanted, for my own lack of skill to describe them, expect a better explanation on this issue as soon as I have some free time.

PS: The explanation will come on Friday, once I get the actual OOC up and we can start to roll things officially.
@KoL
I'd like to put my interest here but since you have a lot of applicants already I'd be fine with being a benchwarmer.


I'm not sure of the numbers yet, but I'm more or less certain that we are still under 12, which shall be the limit for PCs around the beginning of the story. It's always good to start with a decent head count since drops are nearly impossible to avoid over the course of any RP, after all. Having more players mean that the story can keep on going even if one or two quit.


Ight, I'mma do this for now. Feel free to ransack it for all it's flaws and general problems. This is more or less what I'm after, though I feel like I'm missing the tone of the rp. Honestly, I'm not sure if I can play the monster I created, but I love her so much. xD


Well, this character really needs a few clarifications. The first is, she's really a normal human, right? Because we aren't having non-human characters for this story, given that fantastic races are nearly inexistent on this world.

Second, are those powers permanent? Because I'd like you to set a duration to them (and take away the conditions for targets to gain immunity to it), since they feel rather powerful the way they are now.

Third, what's the range? Does she need to touch the targets o mark them or can she do it from afar?

That should pretty much be it for now. The rest of the character is ok, though I advise you to not play a too much antagonistic character. That'll likely lead to more problems than any possible entertainment, for everyone.

@Onarax and I are probably interested in this shebang.


Oh, fine, that's good to hear. If you make up your mind just drop in.

A bit of time and I'll have a sheet up. This certainly looks a good ol' time and I have always found your RPs a bit interesting, @KoL.


Take your time, we aren't moving until the weekend or so. Also, thanks for the compliment, I just like to do things that I'd want to see around here more often. Also, most of what I do these days is more or less inspired by things I got from this site over the time, especially from @TheWindel. Really, all I do is be the tape that unites it. Either way thanks again.

I am considering it, though if I don't join, it is probably because I am already in several other rps.


Oh, fine. We will be here if you decide to join in. Take your time to think.

Definitely interesting.


Nice to hear. We'll wait your final say.

@TheWindel @Mega Birb

Are you beginning the lewd talk before the RP is even officially open? And you dare call me the pervert, heh!

@KoL

I made a magical plague doctor girl.

edit: one a scale of dumb to awesome where would adding a baseball bat as a third form lay?



Oh, an interesting choice of character we have here. Though, I have a few things to say about her as well, just to be sure.

First, her abilities are quite alright but perhaps a bit too broad in scope. Maybe you could add some limitations, or trim the less important effects for the time being. Everyone will have opportunities to develop as the story progresses, there's no need to try to cover too much ground at this point.

Well, regarding your question, I feel like it would be rather weird, at least at this point. But you don't need to drop the idea yet, like I said there's the possibility of evolving powers. I can clearly see that it could look interesting, the idea of delivering grenade like attack via batting.

On an unrelated note, a character based around chemical attacks that get stronger with time, uh? That certainly is a source of nightmares to the people at a very different War. Those two lewd rabbits above know it all too well. Hehehe.
@KoL Do Vassals have to have at least two forms? Or can it just be a single item?


At least a normal form and an active form. Think of it kinda like Bleach's Zanpakutou (just not necessarily blades/weapons), if it helps you have an idea.

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...That was the plan, force a Manakete in. Gerhardt shall stay.


You may surprise yourself. I can't really tell you why yet, though.

@Hammerman

That said, you may like to reform that CS. I mean in and of itself it's ok, but visually it's very had to read. Even just adding paragraphs between the sections and bolding the headings would already make it immensely better to read. Just compare this:



With this:



Much better, right?


@KoL Yeet, also I have an idea that may override this if Vessels can be used to transform the wielder.


Your character seems good as well. As for your question, that's not out of the realm of possibilities, but it shouldn't be anything too drastic like turning into a dragon. Though, becoming a dragon girl may be more acceptable.
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