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This doesn't explain why he would become a master. Strength doesn't necessarily have anything to do with fighting skills. Demons generally don't respect human skills.


Demons don't generally have respect for humans in general, nor angels for that matter. They're weakling to them, not worth associating with, only useful for torturing for their amusement or as lamb to the slaughter.

Azeal is different from the other Demons in that particular respect, mostly due to his father being a moral role model, as I have mentioned in the CS itself. He has respect for the qualities these "weaklings" DO have, as oppose to disinterest in what they don't.

Again, If you wish, I'll have it be Expert instead, if that is more reasonable.

I get that this isn't a separate skill. But it sounds like this might be different from the white flames so I need to know if it is.


It is different only in that it's an upgrade of his white flames, nothing more.

I don't expect him to be confident in everything. I do need an idea of where his confidence is. His laziness could be a problem.


I see... His confidence is likely in his strength and fighting prowess. I know how that sounds like it goes against his morals, and it is, but Pride is something hardwired into Demons, it's an inherent instinct for all demons, and a treasured one at that. It's something he can't really help in that regard.

As for the Laziness, however bad you think it is, I guarantee you he's not THAT far gone. Due to his inherent power of Wrath, he has to keep himself tranquil and relaxed outside of battle so that he doesn't start a fire due to getting angry over something minor. He NEEDS to keep himself calm and relaxed, even if that sometimes means exhaustion so that said inherent power doesn't cause anyone problems. This of course means, he's laid-back and lazy. Of course when the time comes that he's actually needed, he's not gonna just ignore it.

If anything, think of this as a potential for comedy.

You can't invent a weapon like this without a reason.


A Fair point. I want to say I can come up with a reason before this RP begins, but realistically, that probably will not happen. I've stalled this enough as it is with these CSes, I'd rather not stall it even more for something like this.

So I'll instead split it up, giving him a Scythe (Cause he's a Reaper, It's as standard for him as the side arm is for a normal BoSA agent.) and if possible a Magnum revolver. If that's not possible, then the standard-issue Side-arm will do.

"The Reaper's Touch"- if you cant tell me what it does then you can't use it.


I apologize but...I thought I was pretty clear about this ability.

Concealed inside his black gloves are hands entirely of bones and irradiating a dark and cold aura of magic around them. Aside from hunting the lost souls and undead, a reaper's task is to reap the souls of the recently departed from their soon-to-be corpses, ending what little life they have left to free them from their coil. The Reaper's touch is the key to this; a reaper's real hands are irradiated with the magic of Death. On its own, a touch from a Reaper's true hand can cause decay upon the surface, and can cause death to the near-dying. In addition, it is by these hands that death spells can be used.

It is however, inferior to the genuine article, the Touch of Death. The rate of decay much slower, life energy is drained at a slow rate as oppose to being instantaneous, and to top it off, the reapers are heavily restricted and rule-bound by their god's opposite, the God of Life. They, Sora included, must abide by these rules and avoid draining life from anyone who isn't ready or necessary for it to be used on, or face obliteration and their rule-breaking reversed.

(In other words, unless it's specifically required for the job, if Sora attempts to use this to kill someone who isn't already about to die, then he himself will die and the attempt will be reversed. My own personal consequence for the potential god-modding that this kind of power may imply.)


If you need me to be more detailed, than very well...I'm sure you've at least heard of the idea that a Touch from Death kills a man. You can think of the Reaper's Touch as an inferior version of that. The Reaper's touch drains and decays a life until it dies. It's like literal life-sucking parasite eating at the life force of a person. Which is why he's required to keep those gloves on at all times unless needed. Using these hands is how the Reapers extract souls from people who are just about to die, as per their job.

Let's say, for example, that Sora had no gloves, and walked into a flower field with those bony hands exposed. Any flower he touched, any flower that is within about a 6 inch diameter range from his hands, would start to decay and age slowly until they eventually wilt and die.

Believe me when I say I KNOW how bad that sounds. Which is why I added that second Last paragraph. The decay is very slow, and beyond that, he is required to kill a person with this ONLY when their time is almost up and they're about to die. Any earlier, and he himself will die. Again, my own countermeasure for the potential problems this power can cause.

the only weakness I see for this character is someone being stronger than him. That isn't enough.


I...Beg your pardon? O_o

Weakness/Limits: There's always someone stronger- The law of progressive strength applies even to the supernatural world. No matter how strong someone is, there can always be someone who is stronger. There can be multiple creatures and beings that are physically better than Sora.

The Downsides of being a Spirit Medium- Not all spirits are friendly or cooperative. His natural connection with the spirit world makes him able to sense and be spiritually attacked by hostile/vengeful spirits, phantoms, specters or wraiths. Prolonged exposure to the spirit world can be dangerous even for him due to these potential attacks on the mind and soul.

Light/Life Magic- Reapers are not like demons; while they are cruel and monstrous in their job to do what must be done, they are not necessarily malevolent in nature. However, they are still creatures of darkness and Death, physical manifestations of that inevitable truth. Ergo, the magic of light can weaken their dark powers, while the magic of life, such as the magic of blood, water, and plants, is negating factor of their existence and as such, is essentially kyptonite for them. The laws of recovery is reversed for these entities as a result.

(To be clear, this does not mean they can't be anywhere near these things, it'd make their work excruciatingly difficult if that was the case. It simply means magic involving these things is damaging for them.)


I gave THREE of them, and I was careful to organize them to make them clear and concise.

If you mean that the first one is the only one you find that's viable? Well, I can understand why the second may not be seen as a Weakness, but I fail to see why you don't see Light/Life energy...Ok, maybe the Life energy, but I fail to see why you don't see Light as a reasonable weakness for someone like him.

Weapon:- Pick a weapon. You can't be vague. There is a reason for everything.while killers might not 'need' a certain type of weapon they usually have a reason for the weapon they use.


Yet I am allowed to make Baal's weakness unknown.

It's ok if you say I can't be vague for you, the GM. I understand that you HAVE to know this stuff, and perhaps I should have PMed all of these in specific light to you like I did with Baal. I sincerely apologize for not having the Foresight to do so. That is entirely my fault, and I will take responsibility for that.

But please don't sound hypocritical as to tell me I can't be vague in general when you yourself allowed me to be with Baal's weakness.

I can't "Pick" a specific weapon in this case. I would prefer to keep this a secret, but if you insist: The weapons they have is a part of their power. Their cellular manipulation allows them to shape and crystalize their blood into whatever shape they desire it to be. Like the T-1000, it can't be TOO complex, like guns. It usually has to be melee weapons like swords, knives, scythes, spears, etc.

Chainsaws can be formed too, and I know what you're going to say next: "But you just said they can't make complex weapons." Note the "TOO" complex. Guns and other weapons like it requires a lot more than just a shape in order to function properly which is why T-1000 and the Vampire both can't make them. Chainsaws on the other hand, when you get down to the basic structure of one, can be done with their power. it would require a lot of focus-diversity to make the mini-blades move like a chainsaw, and so would need their up most focus to make it work, but it can be done.

As for the reason why a chainsaw? Sometimes they get in a real bad or sadistic mood and decide to be a little extra intense in their murders.

Not good enough? Psychopathic killers may have a "reason" for what they do, but I don't believe it has to be a "good" one. That's what makes them so terrifying, the idea that someone would do something as horrifying as killing people, and not being able to comprehend their reasoning why due to their own madness.

As a certain character from Danganrompa once said: "To judge others by your own standards is the height of folly. Even if you can't comprehend it, they obviously can. That's all there is to it."

Weakness/limits: The downsides of Cellular Manipulation- I don't understand this doesn't seem like a weakness.


That's probably because of the wording of it, as again, I tried to make it seem as if it was being written down by someone who doesn't exactly know what it's like...which is harder than it sounds. It's difficult to play dumb and try to play it out like you're trying to figure it out yourself when you already know everything about the power. ...Or maybe that's just me.

Again, I would show you the actual weakness via PM. But like I said before, You've told me before you were aware of Cellular Manipulation powers and their respective weakness. So I imagined you could connect the dots regarding its weakness. Assuming you were telling me the truth when you told me that, I don't believe it's any different from what you've come to see in the past.

But Very well... Here's a more definitive version of its weakness. ...It's what you've seen before from, but slightly modified to fit this particular character and RP. Nothing too noticeable, just omitted unnecessary species details and changed their gender third-person to an androgynous style.

For starters, the usage of their cells requires energy from their body, and unfortunately for them, energy and the mitochondria of the cells is the one thing they can't manipulate inside their own body, and even if they could, there's only so much the Mitochondria if the energy they store is used up.

The Crystallization of blood is also dependent on that energy and mental concentration. The weaker their concentration and focus, the weaker and more liquefied the crystal blood becomes, until it reverts back into regular blood and loses solidity, and its threat level by extension, as a result. (Which, again, is why the Chainsaw-making requires the up most focus above any other.)

Not to mention the fact that when their attacks are using blood, more often than not, it's their own. Unfortunately, they're not immune to the effects of blood loss. Using too much blood will lead to them becoming disoriented, light-headed, losing consciousness, and possibly even death if they're not careful.


Appearance: You need an appearance. They would have a description of him. You can't look for a person if you don't know what they look like.


Hmm...Putting it that way, you have a point. If they've been searching for this killer for a while now, they should have had at least have a vague outline of what they would look like by what little information would be given by the neighbors of the victims. Maybe even a list of potential suspects as well. At the very least, it IS hard to believe the BoSA would work with the police and FBI for months on end and have nothing to look for.

Truth be told, I wanted to keep the Appearance a secret, as I believed it would be entertaining to have a mystery element to the finding and capturing of them. Look at any Mystery novel enthusiast, and I'm sure they'll tell you that they wouldn't like it if the reveal of the killer is spoiled for them. I'd like to think that if anyone here was interested in catching a Serial Killer, they'd be the same way in that respect.

Still, you do have a point as mentioned before. So I'll edit that to make some kind of description.

Age: Because it's a requirement. It's part of the characters history.


And if a character does not know how old he is? You suggest they get slaps or electro-therapy until they go "Oh hey, I remember!"? Also, nothing really wrong with this, but I simply find it humorous how making my character's Age unknown is perfectly fine with you, but it's keeping it vague and in a range that you find troubling.

But very well, any specific age you'd prefer, or can I go with the highest Age in the spectrum I provided, which is an actual age of 10,000, and physically 40?

Last time he turned himself in. Next time he might not.


...Point taken.

There is no such thing as an airtight container.




Just because they can open, does not null the fact that they're airtight when closed.

Now I can understand that these things probably aren't technically designed for a formless mass that would possibly try to break out.

But you cannot tell me that the BoSA, A division of MIB designed SPECIFICALLY to take down demons, Vampires and possibly even Gods, Can't upgrade an Air-tight room or container to contain malevolent blob monster or gaseous demon that may or may not show up.

In Blackade's case, all you'd need is an Air-tight room, with intense light perpetually on 24/7, and you're good.

But very well, I'll humor you and assume that Air-tight is "not existent". Blackade has Mass like I said before so he's not technically a gaseous entity. He's more of a blob monster in his formless state, so really, a Water-tight container or room would be just as effective.
@KatherinWinter

...Ok, let's go through this one step at a time...

Skills: White Flame Magic- how far can his flames go? How long can he hold his flame?


It depends on how he uses it. I must apologize in advance as I'm not that good at envisioning measurements. But I would have to say roughly around 2 feet to a meter as a fire stream. As a fireball, I would say it could be thrown at a distance of about three or so meters before the flames die out...which transitions to the next question: He can hold the stream for about 30 seconds to a minute under normal circumstances before it starts to retract and die out due to exhaustion. The fireball meanwhile, has a half-life of about 1-2 minutes when thrown before it bursts and dies out.

Master Martial Artist- why?

Strength is the gold standard of demons, Might makes right in Hell, and learning how to use strength properly gives one an advantage against the raw and more instinctive demons, not to mention other entities. Plus for someone like him, who is a demon who was raised in such a world, it would make sense he'd learn about humanity through the learning of their combat, no?

The Meta-Reason is that I prefer making him fight with his fist. No real reason for that. As for why he's a master, well, I can imagine the experience would make him able to be one. If you wish, though, I suppose "Expert" would do as well.

The Deadly Sin of Wrath- not much info. I dont understand what he can do with this.

I can tell you never heard of Asura's Wrath. Fair enough, it's not a very popular game much to my personal dismay. But I imagine you at least know of the Hulk? How he turns into a green giant when angry and simply gets stronger the more angry he is?

To put it simply: Azeal grows more powerful as he gets more enraged. Take the power he has as a Demon, say for example, punching a giant dent in a metal wall or car, and keep amplifying that as he gets more and more upset. Honestly there's not much more to it then that.

The Flames of Wrath- how is this different from the white flame?

It isn't. Note how the names of my skills are marked like this. That not having that mark is no accident; the flames of wrath is a part of the Deadly Sin of Wrath, merely separated for the sake of clean organization of the CS itself.

All it simply means is that his White Flames, like his physical power, gets amplified with his anger.

Personality: This 'On the other hand when he's not like that, he's confident to the point of boastful, and seems to have a great pride in his skills as a fighter and in his powers as a Demon. So much pride, in fact, that he becomes incredibly upset when when one damages that pride.' Contradicts this 'Often times, he can be quite laid-back and relaxed to the point of slothful and lazy. As such, he is also a bit carefree and always seems to have confidence that things will always turn out just fine in the end.

Hmm...That is a problem. Writing personality is a flaw I have. I'm not that good at it, which is partly why this took me so long.

Maybe if I add that the first part's during actual combat...would that work?

Name: Sora Grimoire

Weapon: both scythes are actually long-barreled magnum revolvers- why?

Mainly the meta-reason is because that's how I envisioned his weapons to be upon his creation. I'll admit Sora's one of my lesser developed characters. So I never came up with how he got those weapons yet.

Skills:"The Reaper's Touch"- need more details.

Gonna need specifics on what you need details on.

Weakness/Limits: There's always someone stronger- this is not an acceptable weakness.

And Enhanced body is hardly an acceptable skill. Still I felt compelled to make a weakness for every skill I hold, and so felt compelled to make one for the Enhanced body...Not an easy feat considering it's not a "skill" more than it is a natural aspect, and it's difficult to find weakness for it, for enhanced strength is as natural to a supernatural entity as normal strength is for humans.

Name: "The Vampire"
Weapon: Ergo, they suspect the perp carries around bladed weapons, far larger than a knife and thicker than your average sword, possibly more than one given how different the wounds seem to be. It's possible that one of these weapons is a Chainsaw- why would a vampire need a weapon like this?

Note that the Vampire isn't actually a vampire, as I mentioned in the species section. "The Vampire" is just a code-name due to the nature of their killings. In a world like this it's confusing, I know, but there wasn't really any other thing I could think of to call them that fits as well as that does. If anybody has any other suggestion for a code-name, I'm all ears.

More to the point: "Why they would need it" is a fair, but ultimately irrelevant question. They don't "need" a chainsaw, in fact you can argue they don't "need" any of these weapons. All they'd "need" is something sharp and let their power do the rest. An insane killer of this level doesn't need a reason for why they use what they use exactly? Is it because of their victim's body-weight? Is it because the Victim pissed them off enough to warrant a gruesome death-by-chainsaw? Is it simply because she 'feels' like using a Chainsaw today?

There's no exact reason that's known at the moment, and what reason there could be likely won't make any sense to the logical mind of common sense anyways. That's what makes a killer of this level so scary.

Skills: Cellular Manipulation- Need more information

Weakness/limits: The downsides of Cellular Manipulation- I don't understand this doesn't seem like a weakness.

Appearance: "you need an appearance

I confess that the vagueness was intentional, and I apologize for that. My intention was to make it look like the Dossier of a criminal they know little about. A serial killer on the loose wouldn't be quite as grand if everything about them were revealed outright.

If you'd like, I'll PM you the details of that particular power, as well as the appearance, but I'd prefer the vagueness to stay. I'd like to simply treat it like an actual file, and update it as the RP goes along. Same for the other Criminals really.

Name: Blackade Scotus/Codename: "Shadow King"

Age: pick an age

Any particular reason why you'd want it to be specific exact age?

How do they catch something with no form?

Technically he turned himself in. But I understand that that's irrelevant. While he has no form or shape, he DOES have Mass...Magic Mass, but mass none the less. By "formless" I mean he's something of a giant black blob. There are plenty of ways to contain something like that in that respect. For instance, trapping it in an air-tight room or container where there's no cracks or holes to crawl out of. His weakness to light may help in that respect as well.
@KatherinWinter

I apologize for the wait. But here they are, I hope they are to your liking.

Note: "Baal" is a special case that I had approved by the GM in advance. She already knows the Weaknesses and that he has weaknesses, so don't worry about that.



@The Jest Lol that's cool man ! Might wanna turn in one you have completed and then add the rest as you finish so we can get started earlier.


I'm a perfectionist. It's a flaw of mine. I don't like to turn in stuff until it's actually complete... I've done that too many times with my RP OOCs and it never goes out well when rushed. X_X

Fortunately, I am Almost done. I just need a little more work on one of them, and they'll be ready to go. ^^
@The Jest how're the characters coming?


Taking longer, but is getting better than I expected.

I was working on three of them, and before I knew it, I was adding two more. ^^;
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That is basically how I felt in a nutshell. So thanks for that.

@Stormheart I see...Good answer. XD

And Good luck on that @luna558.

Right, now then, Things came up on my end that I have to take care of first and foremost. And like everyone else who is...Appreciatively trying to keep this RP alive, my patience is starting to reach its Zenith.

So, here's what's going to happen. @Tal0n has explained her situation, so I will be saving her character's life.

The following people has until I am done with everything else I need to do, (Which can be anywhere between 3 days to another week depending on circumstance.) to get a post in the IC. I don't care WHAT you post, so long as its relevant to the situation, nor do I care how long or short it is, It's the free section after all. Just give me a sign you're alive and still in this.

@Windstormugly @Bishop @Silvir @Hazy @Kimmininja @ReusableSword @Vortex @BKburke @Elevation @Warborn123 @Kessir Tarkin

Failure to do so will result in termination.

Failure for all or most to do so? ...Well then we have a bit of a problem. Cause that's a lot of people that'll be declared AWOL, and unless the more active of you has any other ideas, I may have to close down this RP.

(But, know that if I DO close down this RP, I'll likely attempt to reboot it...Most likely in the Casual Section. But it will likely not be for a While. X_X )
@The Jest where you at with your CS?


Almost finished with two of them, the third for the villain's gonna take a while.
@tal0nI see...Well, here's hoping we can still keep this RP afloat until then. ^_^

Speaking of which, @Stormheart, Would you mind explaining the meaning of your IC post? Because it sounds like you just made the engine room spontaneously start exploding and the ship and crew minutes away from death...In other words, it sounds like you just Doomed this entire roster out of the blue. o.o;
@EurmalEye

Well well, I like you already. XD

@KatherinWinter

One more question, actually. ...Is it alright to add a "criminal"/"Rogue" or two as well?
I see... Excellent.

I'll make my CSes in a while, I need to think about who to bring into this. ^^
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