@Shadow Daedalus: I'll talk this over with my co-GM in a bit.
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STATUS: I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography. 3 yrs ago
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I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
3 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
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I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
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As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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@Seirei No Hai: Five Masters, since it's counting the list.
@Mercurial: I'm honestly stuck on what to do. I think you might want to just do a fresh intro post instead and we'll discount what happened because the character kind of leading the scene is gone.
"... Haaaah?!"
Akane was rendered speechless when the girl standing before her suddenly transformed and became... That was The Ripper! It was definitely Magical Girl The Ripper! there was no mistaking her when she saw that outfit and jumped away. That was... that was incredible! That was almost impossibly incredible! The redhead felt her heart hammering in her chest with excitement, her hands trembling... Was that real? Was that really real? She wasn't dreaming, right? Akane pinched herself and confirmed the fact as she did. She wasn't dreaming at all. This was real. This was actually happening to her.
She took a deep breath, trembling, and then shook her head. What could she do now after that? What could she... what could she...
... Maybe... If there were people in trouble... if it was a large Negari, would the magical girls be able to keep an eye on everyone? And... and she knew where the fight was... if she could see it...
... Against all her instincts, Akane took a deep breath and ran straight for danger, kicking herself for her own stupidity the whole time.
@Raineh Daze@shagranoz@Feyblue@Duoya
Something seemed a little strange, even as the Negari was clearly injured. Perhaps the fairies would feel that the atmosphere felt a little... dark? As if there was, perhaps, not only one Negari...
Akane was rendered speechless when the girl standing before her suddenly transformed and became... That was The Ripper! It was definitely Magical Girl The Ripper! there was no mistaking her when she saw that outfit and jumped away. That was... that was incredible! That was almost impossibly incredible! The redhead felt her heart hammering in her chest with excitement, her hands trembling... Was that real? Was that really real? She wasn't dreaming, right? Akane pinched herself and confirmed the fact as she did. She wasn't dreaming at all. This was real. This was actually happening to her.
She took a deep breath, trembling, and then shook her head. What could she do now after that? What could she... what could she...
... Maybe... If there were people in trouble... if it was a large Negari, would the magical girls be able to keep an eye on everyone? And... and she knew where the fight was... if she could see it...
... Against all her instincts, Akane took a deep breath and ran straight for danger, kicking herself for her own stupidity the whole time.
@Raineh Daze@shagranoz@Feyblue@Duoya
Something seemed a little strange, even as the Negari was clearly injured. Perhaps the fairies would feel that the atmosphere felt a little... dark? As if there was, perhaps, not only one Negari...
Estelle Varianbec, Master of Berserker
"Of course. It only makes sense that a Servant summoned by a powerful Master would be able to protect their Master," Estelle commented with a smile as she glanced up to her Servant, then back towards her maids. She could see the concern her maids felt, of course, but they really didn't need to worry at all. Smiling up at her Servant once again, the small, white-haired girl proceeded onwards through the halls and downwards.
Shortly before she arrived, she decided to tease her Servant once more about her garb.
"Does it feel liberating, running around like that~?" she asked, before giggling and heading further inside.
Indeed, she kept quite when she listened to the Wizard Marshall spoke. The haughty girl still respected the man, after all, as out of any magi he was the most deserving of being respected, and this was important information by far. And indeed, as he spoke, she found herself intrigued. Greece? The Age of Gods? A place where her Servant would be incredibly powerful? It was almost too perfect for their first outing!
Nodding to her Servant, the child magus(at least, in appearance) headed through the portal...
... And found herself disoriented as she stepped onto grassy hill thousands of years in the past. Shaking her head, she looked about, and quite quickly noticed the moving skeletons.
"Berserker, that's where we'll be heading!"
She stepped forward and pointed immediately.
@Riegal
And with that, we have four out of seven Servants(plus an extra 'Fake'!), four out of seven Masters, and two out of seven pairings!
@Shadow Daedalus: Hmmm. I think 36 is still a bit much, an hour is a long time in a Grail War.
@Shadow Daedalus: Hmmm. I think 36 is still a bit much, an hour is a long time in a Grail War.
@Feyblue: Okay, fair enough. She's fine then, I think.
@Feyblue: Okay, let's see...
For the most part(it's hard to read from length but I like it) I don't see much of a problem, I'm just a little worried about her level of power stacking the offensive curses with her bounded field. You obviously shouldn't get rid of them but I think that they should be mitigated a bit.
Otherwise I like her a lot.
For the most part(it's hard to read from length but I like it) I don't see much of a problem, I'm just a little worried about her level of power stacking the offensive curses with her bounded field. You obviously shouldn't get rid of them but I think that they should be mitigated a bit.
Otherwise I like her a lot.
I knew it was because they ran out of manga. I mean I didn't know for sure but it felt like the kind of ending you have when you run out of manga. ^^;
Anyway hopefully will have a post up later.
Anyway hopefully will have a post up later.
@WanderingSpirit: Accepted.
@Shadow Daedalus: Having 72 bullets which can disrupt Servants to that extent doesn't sit well with me, honestly. ^^; For the most part the cases where a Master can actually combat a Servant are meant to be outliers to quite an extent. On top of this, most Servants with the exception of proper Casters and Arturia Saber don't have magic circuits. Well, Saber has a Mana Core but yeah.
@Cu Chulainn: Accepted.
@Shadow Daedalus: Having 72 bullets which can disrupt Servants to that extent doesn't sit well with me, honestly. ^^; For the most part the cases where a Master can actually combat a Servant are meant to be outliers to quite an extent. On top of this, most Servants with the exception of proper Casters and Arturia Saber don't have magic circuits. Well, Saber has a Mana Core but yeah.
@Cu Chulainn: Accepted.
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