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I have more than enough anime estrogen to make up for it, dw.
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@Hero @Conscripts @webboysurf @Raging Fenrir

I think you're all good to go... with one thing for those of you that picked blue as a dialogue color. Can some of you change it around to another color, any dialogue between your characters will seem hard to follow – so it's probably important for you guys to decide amongst yourselves on how to sort that out. Ryuuto and Amari both have brown hair so maybe something in that spectrum? Figure it out, but ye, great stuff all around.

Once that's sorted out, do the thing. Move it to the characters tab.

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A little bit more detail and you need to finish up some sections, otherwise it's a good draft.
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I don't mind switching to orange or something. Do you mind if I leave the sheet as is, though?
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I don't mind switching to orange or something. Do you mind if I leave the sheet as is, though?

Yeah, that'd be fine. Just figure out the color issue before the IC launches!
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I will have my little lady up sometime tomorrow c:
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Here ya go, @Inkarnate. Took me like nearly half a day. I'm dead. Sleep.jpg

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@Althiel The middle section is a different gray than the other two sections.
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@Sola Much gray. Such thorough analysis. Le fixed.
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I don't mind going for a more purplish color, but there are some particular reasons why I choose that color. If you guys insist on staying with blue, then I'll consider adjusting it a bit
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I'll go orange. I don't mind.
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@ConscriptsI was thinking purple, so you can stay blue if you want. If you've chosen it purposefully I don't mind, as purple probably fits mine more than blue.
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@InkarnateI've added to my sections, is there any more detail you want adding?
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I'll probably have Ren up sometime tomorrow night.
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Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by Ogo
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wElL lOokY hEre!

So uh...Imma 100% down. I'll work on converting my sheets in a bit ^-^

-edit- Progress has been made! But like...I should probably sleep.
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I'll figure out a color tonight. Kept blue cause of that hair, but I'll figure a different color out for text.
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So I'm gonna assumed I've been denied, which is perfectly alright; I just kind of need someone to confirm this denial.

(also I edited my cs to make the height normal. still trying to understand color, if that is anything.)
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So I'm gonna assumed I've been denied, which is perfectly alright; I just kind of need someone to confirm this denial.

(also I edited my cs to make the height normal. still trying to understand color, if that is anything.)

I told you I wouldn't do a proper review until I got to you – but I did give you loose advice on what I thought needed fixing.

I'll figure out a color tonight. Kept blue cause of that hair, but I'll figure a different color out for text.

Honestly, I think Yujiro's color fits him the best. I don't think you need to change the blue out of everyone who applied with the color.
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Ok I changed mine to a lighter and more dull blue.
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@InkarnateI've added to my sections, is there any more detail you want adding?

I would probably merge the sentences in physical description as it looks a bit weird with only one line break. The rest seems serviceable to me unless @Sola has some concerns he would like addressed.

As for @Althiel and @HokumPocus, I don't really have any issues with your sheets, so, y'know. I do think the choice of gray dialogue is a bit weird, but okay.

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