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@Duoya I like the idea of a magic smartphone (I played with the idea in other RPs). He's good in my book.

A Bit of a Pickle...

@VidyaParamia

This site sucks all together.

Can you just please give me a list of any other Text-Based RP Sites that you know of?(One where serious writers like me are actually appreciated.)

@Hyperium

> Roleplaying site.

> Serious writer.

Pick one.

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@SurtrThan do you got any suggestions?

@Suku

Well, if we were to apply the power realistically... her throat/vocal chords/whatever would get sore after singing for awhile (unless she does it a lot, but even then there's a limit). Probably hurt for a few days if she doesn't give it a rest.

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@Atroposer There's a question I have about Marabel's power. What if someone else harms her, what would happen?

@Suku I kind of think her power needs a bit more explanation, because as it stands, it's a little too vague for me. Especially when you gotta factor in things like how long it takes to have an affect, what volume, and how long she can keep it going.

"They have to hear her!" isn't that big of a weakness to me tbh since it's like... no shit. lol

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@Pirouette I don't have anything to add, she's cool in my book.

I'll be working on two other characters.

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Maria Cúneo-Vidal

Profile : Student

Name:

Maria Cúneo-Vidal

Age:

17

Gender:

Female

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Basic Information

Appearance:

Maria is definitely Spanish from the very first look you give her. Her thick accent (which is questionable whether or not it's forced or not) isn't the only thing that gives it away. She has Mexican facial features, and her skin is a darker shade of brown. She walks with an air of confidence... even though she is short. Like four-eleven. One thing that she gets from her Mexican heritage is the fact that she's short. Consistent with Mexican people. When other girls stand alongside Maria, even average heighted girls look massive compared to her.

She gives off an aura of confidence... and indifference. She usually has a blank look on her face as if she's bored, unless you manage to get a chuckle out of her. Or even anger. This makes it look as if she's unapproachable, or even bitchy. But, this is far away from the truth. Maria's emotion changes are quick, and hard to notice even if you blink. This leads into her confident disposition that helps Maria stay calm even in the worst situations. Lets her stare down a killer, and let's her lead people to success.

She's also very stylish in her manner of dress. Wearing all the name brands you've probably seen before.

Personality:

> Confident.

> Calm.
> Aggressive.
> Has resting Bitch Face.
> Arrogant.
> A bit of a control freak.
> Caring.
> Kind.

Backstory:

Maria was born in Mexico, but when she was around five, her father got a job in America and her family moved there. It was a bit of a hard adjustment to make for the girl, but she made due. It came easier for her than her family since she basically grew up in America. But, as she grew up, she made the transition from a sweet kid to something else. When her good looks developed, she fell into the crowd of popular girls very quickly. And she quickly developed an attitude like no other, but at the same time, she retained the morals presented by her parents.

However, things changed once, while going to a party, she got into a car accident with some friends. It was a nasty accident that left her best friend, Lucia, dead. But, it caused something inside of her to awaken. The ability to duplicate herself. She was pinned by a chunk of metal, but a clone of herself manifested from her body. Not only was it not pinned down, but it was completely fine. The clone went to get help, but it quickly merged back with Maria before anyone asked any questions.

She was rushed to the hospital where she was going to recover, but Maria was approached by a member of ATLAS when she was just about recovered. They told her that witness accounts revealed that she was a superhuman. Then, they invited her to the Academy... which Maria accepted.

Other Skills:

> Can speak spanish.
> Stays calm in even the worst situations.
> Soccer.
> Excellent people skills.

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Power Set

Name:

Self-Duplication.

Abilities:

At will, Maria can create an identical duplication of herself, up to give. They're somewhat independent, or even somewhat intelligent. Maria has a telepathic link with each of the clones, and can order them to do whatever she pleases. From there, the clones possess enough intelligence to carry out her orders, and she has the ability to see through their eyes (and even communicate through them). Of course, to compensate, Maria has a bit of extra brainpower, but only when she activates her ability. They possess the same amount of strength as Maria, too. So, they basically can do whatever she can do. It's impossible to distinguish the clones from the original as they are the same on every level. Maria can also copy what the clones are holding (which is why the clones aren't naked when she creates them). When she is finished with them, she can reabsorb them back into her body. Eventually, Maria will be able to create more clones, regenerate through them, and swap consciousness with another clone.

Weaknesses:

There are quite a few drawbacks to her ability. For starters, they all feel the same things. Which means all the clones feel pain. If one gets brutally killed, each of the clones, and Maria, will get the same feeling. It could even knock Maria out if the pain is intense enough. While a clone dying won't kill Maria, it'll definitely send her a severe backlash that'll bring her to her knees. Not something she can consecutively do without passing out. The more clones that Maria creates, the harder it'll be to keep track of all of them. It'll cause Maria to expend so much mental power that she'll find it difficult to control them all, and make complex tastes difficult.

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Other:

(Anything else you want to let us know?)

Palladium Academy:

Clone Wars Edition.

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@Kiyran I didn't have any real problems with Galen (other than me being anal retentive), but he looks better now. I give him my seal of approval.

@Dead Cruiser If you wish... just add Savo and Rune to the conversation.

Now, I'm trying to write up my own character while also writing reviews... so I'm gonna try to get her up tonight, and see what other characters I can come up with.

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I figured that'd be the snag.

@Pirouette

I don't think she's a bad character (well, I think she's a little edgy, but hey), I just don't think being a teacher would be natural for her. I see her as a student brought here to control her bloodlust or weird ghoul powers (which I think are cool, but some of the others have concerns).

@Surtr

I see what you mean. It was meant to be his body's reaction to his ability, allowing him to heal people with somewhat severe injuries without completely incapacitating himself for long periods of time. It's more of a self-preservation thing than anything else. If need-be I can change it to where he only regenerates when healing wounds he got through Sacrifice, rather that all wounds he receives.

@Kiyran

Personally, you could just merge both abilities together, and that'd work better in my eyes. Up Sacrifice a bit so that he transfers wounds to himself, and then regenerates them. You can also keep the regeneration that way. He'd fill a better role power-wise in my opinion that way.

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@Dead Cruiser Okay, I gave his sheet a read over, while his personality/history is... okay, I think he's overpowered. Like, he has waaaaaay too much in his powerset. On one hand, you give some pretty impressive physical abilities that would be strong on their own. Strong, sharp claws that can cut through metal, can move very fast and dodge bullets (which is preeeeeeetty bullshit), a poison, and a variety of other moves.

Then, you add on the mind powers. Which allow him to control people to a small (but very noticeable) extent, and induce hypnotism - but before I continue, let me go on about this real quick: powers like this will never end well. Because, one; nobody wants their character to be controlled, and two; everyone has a different interpretation of such abilities. You'll never be able to use it the way you envision without either powerplaying (or basically telling people how they should write their characters), or a shitstorm starting.

And I think it's dumb.

But, his mental powers have a lot tacked on when, once again, it feels more natural for him to have illusion powers? Maybe telepathy, too? He can fire psychic blasts, and create telekinetic explosions.

Like, it would be cool if he had one of theses (toned down, yeah), but both is unacceptable in my eyes. I'd honestly suggest cutting all of his physical abilities, and focus on his mental ones, because that's what feels natural for his character. And nerf his mental powers.

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@Pirouette Okay, I gave your sheet a thorough read (I'm a very fast reader), and there's a few things that come to mind. I'm gonna let Savo and Rune tackle some of the other things they brought up, but I have one big problem with her sheet:

To put it simply; it makes little sense for Margaret to be a teacher. Like, personally-wise, she is literally the last option I'd choose for a teaching role. She is described as demented, childish (but also intelligent, but idk), while also having a bloodlust. I just can't buy her as a teacher.

@Kiyran Galen is p good in my book... I just don't get the connection between pain manipulation and regeneration (The regeneration seems a little tacked on to me, but that's just my opinion).

@wxps350 Your characters are really gay accepted. They're pretty cool in my book.