@POOHEAD189@MilkmanAfter reviewing both CSes, I had to give Blade Master to Milkman. The reason why was the way he tailored his character was very believable. I can also tell that he took his time with it and didn't write it all in one go, allowing him to come up with a good story. All of his skills revolved around the Blade Master and didn't dip into other classes. I felt that Eladar's technique "Whirlwind Tiger (Unarmed)" was Kung Fu Master, "Forge Fire" Force Master, "Predator's Glare" I don't know what exactly that would be but it wouldn't be a chi move if it affects someone else without the user needing to lay hands on the person. If you mention any "Summon Of X," even metaphorically or it might have been literal without the actual summon, you're playing Summoner. Eladar is a name from Tolkien fiction and isn't Asian at all. I told everyone that they needed Asian names in this game, so you didn't thoroughly read the OOC or you simply forgot. You used the same "Young Brother gone evil" concept as your competitor. Regardless, Poo your CS looked absolutely rushed and you tried to make a hybrid of techniques, which is not allowed. It makes me wonder if you even have time for this game since it took you so long to write a CS. In the end, the CS was rushed and forced into one day, and not even formidable to compete with a juicy SL. If you don't have time for this game, then don't join. It is rude when someone who clearly has no time for another RP joins a game and then up and leaves. It puts a major gap in the story, especially in a game with only six people in it. So if you're planning to do that or if anyone is planning to pull that move, please leave now. I rather put a writer who actually has time for this game in your spot.
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