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Since it seems like you still haven't got it, I'll try to provide some minimal floor plans by tomorrow. It'll not be anything as detailed as a blueprint but it should do the trick.

Don't get used to it thought, because I feel like this kind of extra effort shouldn't be necessary. I just want to make my description clear and avoid miscommunication between us.
And there's Meteora, trying to buy a bit more time for her to find out what's happening. It may not work, but this is within the plans as well, since Meteora is kind of the comedy relief.
METEORA ÖSTERREICH

Well, the battle had finally come to an end. For the most part, Meteora resigned herself to stand aside, or as close to aside as possible while remaining close to Sanaki, and observe the other's behavior—perhaps even try to help the smallish empress in her attempts to negotiate with the authorities. Or so Meteora would like the others to think. In truth, the Sage of the End of the World, the most impressive mage not only of the world of the RPG Avalken of Reminiscence, but also the de facto main character of the Re:Creators anime project, the very own beautiful mage named Meteora Österreich was using her unique skills to analyze each and every one of them—recording, or rather unveiling the information contained in her magical book— at this very moment.

"... it's much better than searching the internet..."

When Meteora said those words to the spineless Souta while explaining the abilities of her grimoire, The Book of a Thousand Miles, she wasn't lying.

Anyone observing her right now would merely see Meteora lazily flipping pages of her book while using it to cover her face from the eyes downwards. Adding her hood and fidgety movements to the equation, it was unlikely that anyone who wasn't very intimate with her character design would see through Meteora's sheepish facade. Even if they did see through it, Meteora had a few tricks up her sleeve such as projecting an illusion of herself—in her civilian garments— leaving the store along with some of the onlookers that were naturally going to be dispersed by the police.

Even then, if something—like Mr. Bucket possibly recognizing her before Meteora could ascertain her thoughts on this incident— happened, it was a matter of improvising and hoping for the best. And this is exactly what Meteora did when she spoke with lower, more nasal voice as she replied to him saying, "Excuse me Sir, Metal Man, have we ever met before? I don't think I would forget a face such as yours. It certainly would have been bolted to my memory."

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@Lmpkio

ok.
Did no one read my last post completely?

There are no copy paste dorm rooms in the Academy. Your characters are staying in a proper military like dorm, with everyone's beds under the same roof.

I have to bring this up before the confusion snowballs into something that wasn't meant to.

Please, correct your posts.
@Sync

He's alright. Move him to the CS tab and then you can post IC.
@Gardevoiran

It's alright for me.
@Awesomoman64

Roland really wants Reiko to teach him a special lesson, doesn't he?
@Sync

I think that your character will need some adjustments before he can be approved. Here are the points you'll need to address, in no specific order:

- Make the text more readable. There are quite a few grammar mistakes as well as typos, it makes your writing confusing to decipher. We don't require a high level of linguistic skills,however, more readability would be appreciated.

- There's no such thing as mana circuits (if that's what you meant by "man circuits") in this setting. Unless that's a very specific characteristic of your character's power it doesn't need to be mentioned.

- That personality section is unnecessary as well. For this RP, we'd prefer to see the characters personalities in action, rather than in their CSs. A matter of "show, don't tell". Using the Sample post to showcase your character's personality would be much more appreciated.

- We prefer if you do IC posts, as well as the Sample, in the 3rd person. 1st person posts are disorienting because of the change in perspective from a character to another as well as giving the false impression that your character was any degree of protagonist status when compared to the other PCs which is rather undesirable.

As soon as you have addressed those issues, the CS will be ready for a second round of evaluations.
@Awesomoman64

You can do whatever you feel like. If there was going to have an immediate timeskip, it would have happened already. We are at least giving the chance for people to react.
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