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10 mos ago
Current Attn teeny boppers: You realize adbots aren't ppl, yes? They randomly generate login info, then execute pre-programmed posts. Your rage-spam goes unheard by the machine. And is equally annoying.
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10 mos ago
*Loads gun* I will instantly kill anyone who says "cream."
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10 mos ago
Thank you, completely unnecessary forced software update, for BREAKING FUCKING EVERYTHING I was doing.
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11 mos ago
If you're going by UK conventions of knighthood/nobility, yes. It also would be pronounced like the "dam" in "madame," rather than like a Dick Tracy "daym."
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11 mos ago
Me: "Goku, thank God you're here!" Goku: "I heard a really strong guy was here! Lemme at him!" Me: "He's right there!" *Points at my Writer's Block* Goku: "... Sorry bud you're on your own."
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On CST time, United States. Working from home now, so I can typically get at least one response out per week if not more depending on how things are flowing.

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@King Cosmos
Rather than an actual wall or barrier, the aura that appears around the target is meant to be an indicator that the spell is active on them. What Shield actually does is a buff on the target—it essentially raises your Defense. So right now it wouldn’t allow all those creative uses—remember we’re still basically at level one. For higher ranks of the spell, or other spells you learn later on, barrier traps, platforms, etc may be possible. I like your thinking though!

@Guy0fV4lor
Calm down there, Zaheer. XD
@UltraCraftGames
When Peter left, the two goblins smirked to each other before cackling and pointing. They were apparently making fun of the other creature for giving up without a fight. But soon after that they turned back to their task--they began purposefully digging at the walls, pulling as many Mana Crystals out of the cluster as possible until they had depleted it entirely. Placing the crystals in a sack that looked to have been made out of some other creature's fur, they then began to haul it off. They noticed quite a bit of commotion going on over at the pool, and gave it a wide berth. It seemed they were headed for the bonfire...


@Kazemitsu
Asura seemed to move at his own pace, simply taking things in and not worrying too much about what else might be in the area. He was a fair distance away, then, from all the hullabaloo going on near the pool.

Then suddenly--!

A bright green light came shooting down at him, its magical trail making a sizzling sound in the air. The Wisp stopped just above the red slime, before firing a sphere of magic at him!


@Renny
As Yoda crept around the edge of the bonfire, it soon became clear that this was not a "campsite" for the goblins. It was some kind of...shrine? The cave wasn't that chilly, and the goblins seemed to stay well clear of the flames' radius, so they weren't using it for warmth. Nor were there any "beds" of smooth stone, dug out pits, or piles of dry herb leaves like the little green creatures seemed to prefer, so they didn't really "live" around the fire. Indeed, only one goblin ever got close to the fire--and he was clearly not like the others.

This goblin wore a basket-like hat of some sort made from woven cane, and a belt and loincloth made from vines and leaves. He even had sandals made from straw. All of his "clothing" was primitive, but the fact that he had it at all--and that it all seemed made of materials that did not exist here in the cave itself--placed him as a figure of some kind of importance. In one hand he carried a stick that had been dipped in what looked like pine resin, and then wrapped with straw. He shoved this into the fire until it lit, then began to wave his torch and cackle madly.

He turned, whirling in a mad dance, and Yoda saw his face.

At some point this Goblin had been burned--severely. One of his eyes had gone completely white, and the bubbly, purplish skin on that half of his face stretched down his neck, winding along one shoulder and then spreading across his chest like gnarled roots or infected veins. But then, around the edges of that scar tissue where it should have healed the most and faded back to green...instead, it was a bright, fiery red. Like a tattoo--despite there being nothing from which to make ink in these caves, so far as Yoda knew.

"More! More wood for Crispy's fire!" laughed the dancing goblin. A few others came onto the scene then, carrying bundles of sticks under their arms. They had come from the direction of that distant light--from outside the cave? And not long after these, two more with a sack made of animal hide approached. They dumped the contents of the sack in front of "Crispy," and several handfuls of blue crystals tumbled out. The flame-touched goblin grabbed some of them in one fist, raising the torch high in the other. He crushed them to dust, snorted them, and then cackled even louder.


@Guy0fV4lor@Rune_Alchemist
Ash's quick and intelligent action paid off, as upon instantly whirling to her back she saw the Mana Orb coming in time to dodge it. What was more, her counter attack was slightly faster--the Poison Spit doused the red Wisp with corrosive venom, and the glowing puffball let out a creening cry of pain.

And unexpectedly, the very slime she had been contemplating attacking now came to her aid. For who knew what reason, it decided to launch a rock at the attacking Wisp. Weakened as it was by the poison coating it, the foe couldn't get out of the way in time. The rock hit it with a soft impact, like punching a pillow--except the pillow was the Wisp's frail body. The puffball was pulverized, exploding into a cloud of sparks before something like a very thick dandelion head fell to the ground. The "head" in the middle seemed composed of white, featureless flesh, almost like the meat of a coconut.

And just like that, the Wisp was dead. Why had it attacked? For territory? For food? Who knew. And who cared? But now the Fanged Lizard and the Slime were no longer alone...


As Eric armed himself, he too would experience the strange mental "screen" informing him of what he had just done with his own self awareness.

Sharp Rock added to Inventory.
Sharp Rock Equipped.
System


As he sneaked around the battle between the Wisp, the Lizard, and the Slime, he began examining the strange herbs. Once again a message appeared.

1 Healing Herb added to Inventory.
Used Skill: Plant Analysis I.
---Healing Herb---
This green herb does not thrive on sunlight, but on ambient Mana. With good nutrients and clean water in its surroundings, it will synthesize pure healing energy. Low-grade item.
---Analysis Complete---
System



@Tatsu
As Nathaniel struggled to make sense of his surroundings, watching the other creatures moving around below his perch, he eventually came to a number of conclusions:

The various monsters seemed highly primitive, and if there was any communication at all between them it was mostly between those of the same species. If any form of “social interaction” existed among these beings, it was no more than what the earliest of cave men must have used to communicate the necessities of life and the willingness to kill in pursuit or defense of them. However, it seemed that a particular group near the pond was beginning to defy these things--had that Slime intentionally helped that Fanged Lizard? Or was it simply a free-for all? What would they do next?

In addition, the blue crystals seemed quite valuable. Here and there around the cave, the Pixies and Wisps especially seem to gather about them. But the Goblins also seem to be actively mining them. And they always carry their spoils back to the bonfire. What could they be, and what were they used for? If he remembered the circumstances of his "childhood," so to speak, the energy inside these crystals had somehow sustained him as a substitute for mother's milk or actual food.

And finally, the cave was either very deep underground, or very large. The distant light only seemed to shine for a few hours out of each "day," and any shafts through the ceiling or walls seemed rare and far between. Just how far did this place stretch--and where was the exit?


@Duoya
A strange message inside his head interrupted Marc's vegetarian feast. Perhaps for the best, as it didn't seem to be the most filling thing for a Dire Rat to eat, and its minty flavor was almost overpowering to his sensitive nose.

Used 5 Healing Herbs. Your HP is full.
2 Healing Herbs added to Inventory.
System


But now he had realized he was not alone. As he watched, the Slime and the Fanged Lizard killed the red Wisp, while he and the Goblin looked on as hidden observers. Yet, how long would they stay hidden? Now that they had killed one creature, would the lizard and slime pair kill again? Meanwhile, the goblin seemed more enamored with the strange Healing Herbs, looking at them intently for several long, silent moments. And as Marc himself examined the creatures around him, another message appeared.

Used Skill: Monster Analysis I
---Slime---
A monster made of living bioplasm, able to adjust its shape and membranous forms at will to a limited extent. It is resistant to physical damage. This one is unusual.
---Fanged Lizard---
A reptilian monster with potent venom. When injected via a bite, it acts as a neurotoxin to paralyze the prey. When exposed to the air, it becomes a highly acidic liquid. The lizard can spit at a distance. This one is unusual.
---Goblin---
A semi-intelligent monster with the limb dexterity and mental capacity to use tools. By comparison, usually as large, strong, and intelligent as a human child, but far more vicious. This one is unusual.
---Analysis Complete---
System



@ReusableSword
During Ardur's little "training sessions," at one point he realized something had happened inside his head. And he wasn't the one that caused it.

You are experiencing a fast of rate of Skill Progression.
You have no MP remaining.
System


But just as he comprehended the meaning of that message, he dropped the blue crystal into the water. Down, down into the depths it went. With a small bubble of light around it, it illuminated simple walls of smooth stone, an occasional drifting mass of some kind of plant matter...

And then something large that flitted out from under the rock wall at some point, across the open space of the pool, and then back into the wall. Or perhaps just a tunnel that opened up down there. It did not look like a fish.

At this point, perhaps the sounds of battle would distract him from his little experiment. It seemed like a slime and a lizard had just ganged up on one of those little floating balls of light--and from his higher altitude, Ardur could see what looked like a mangy rat, and a green imp-like humanoid.
@ReusableSword
It's good! Very clever use of the Minor Heal spell!

@King Cosmos
At first glance you don't seem like much, but I get the feeling these "computers" in your world are almost like magic in mine. How interesting--but if these stereotypes about "computer geeks" are true, I get the feeling you're going to have a difficult time with the very first Boss.

Skill Gain: Magic Analysis I - Computer programming is a language of logic and mathematics. Mathematics and logic are objective truths of the universe. How does this relate to analyzing magical energies that manipulate the fabric of reality? You tell me, smart guy. At this level, after seeing a spell used you can only gain generalized information about it.
The Demon King
@Guy0fV4lor
Sure, but the spitting part won’t have enough pressure to count as a projectile attack or anything. Not yet anyway.
@Guy0fV4lor
You can now, yes. Sorry, the initial bit about absorbing information from your surroundings was just meant to emphasize the sort of difference in a slimes perception, so to speak. And when things are first born they often don’t have full use of their senses. You DO actually have sight, though.
@King Cosmos
Between the information that appeared in the unknown language when the Demon King gave you the choices—-which you can now understand—-and your own instinct, yes you can automatically know most things about your new forms. Unless you just feel like the narrative would be better for them if they had to figure it out. Up to you!

Your character is accepted, I’ll have to look at his backstory in more detail after work for your skill!

@Rune_Alchemist
It wasn’t too overboard, no worries! Longer posts are fine by me so long as they aren’t overly fluffed to the point one uses a thesaurus for every word.
@UltraCraftGames
As Peter experimented with the crystals, he found them to be a bit like hard candy—they could certainly chip a tooth, if the Wisp had possessed any, but with a bit of effort they were easily broken or cracked. Too easily, in fact—they didn’t seem like they would be of any long-term use as building materials, weapons, or even jewelry.

When he blasted one with his Mana Orb, however, two things happened. First, the crystal let out an odd ringing sound, like feedback on a microphone or speaker, and went dark as the light inside it died. Secondly, a floating screen suddenly appeared as if he were in a sci-fi film—except the screen wasn’t in front of his eyes. It was inside his mind.

Your MP is low.
System


And when he used his Lesser Force after that, carving himself some crystal eyes, it appeared again.

You have no MP remaining.
System


Suddenly he felt himself becoming exhausted, and he began drifting down towards the earth—then, the crystal eyes flashed. Like sugar crystals in water they began to dissolve, sinking into Peter’s body!

You have used a Mana Crystal. MP is fully restored.
System


And then he felt fine.

But before the newly reborn Wisp had a chance to consider all of this in detail, he heard a pair of crude voices. Two Goblins wandered up to the wall, right beneath Peter and his crystal cluster. One of them held a knapped stone in its fist, and growled at the Wisp.

“Get way from theres, you!” It waved its other hand as if shooing a fly. “These our shinies!” The second Goblin began to gather up fragments from the crystals Peter had broken off the ground, clutching them in its arms the way one might hold valuable coins.


@Guy0fV4lor
As Jason broke off a chunk of crystal, he found that he could hold things inside his body without them being instantly dissolved if he focused on wrapping them in a membrane beforehand. The same occurred with the plants—and then, like Peter, he experienced the odd sensation of a digitized hallucination.

1 Mana Crystal has been added to your Inventory.
1 Healing Herb has been added to your Inventory.
System


When he entered the pool, he discovered two more things—but neither of these were to his advantage. First, the equilibrium of water pressure on all sides of him and the air he was breathing through the membrane of his skin rendered him unable to actually submerge himself. Like a ball, he floated as a perfect sphere, his pseudopods only barely able to move enough water for him to slowly, ever so slowly, paddle along.

Second, the pool was very deep. The clear water did not look black because of the stone or a lack of light by itself. It looked black because it’s depths stretched down far, far out of sight. And was it Jason’s imagination, or was there something in those depths, flickering at the corners of his vision?


@Rune_Alchemist
As Ash watched and waited, she could see other creatures going about whatever business they had all around the cave. A Wisp seemed to be playing around a cluster of those glowing crystals, until two Goblins began to growl and flail their arms at it. And as she hid, a green slime flopped along past her, picking some of the herbs and seemingly enveloping them into its gelatinous body. Was that how they ate? Surely if the herb were poisonous that slime would keel over soon? But as she watched, the slime simply plopped into the pool of water, then began to drift in slow circles as its pseudopods paddled near-uselessly. If she were so inclined...it might make easy prey.

But then—!

A buzzing sound reached Ash’s ear holes as something approached from behind her. If she turned, she would see another Wisp, glowing an angry shade of red. It seemed to swell up for an instant, then it discharged an orb of crackling light at the Fanged Lizard!
@Gobby
Nice find on the pic! Again it's still good, he can go in the tab whenever you're ready.

A smile that never faded, even as your body atrophied to nothing? Well aren't you just an inspiration to all the cripples and invalids out there. Why can't they just suck it up and be happy like you, eh? And in the end you just accepted death, so peaceful--after all, it was your time, right?

Grow a spine. Life isn't something given to you that just fades away. You rip it from the world with everything you have and take it for yourself, and hold on to it until someone else rips it from you. There aren't many Skills that can be gained from life in a hospital bed...but I hope that you, more than some of the others, will have something that counts more than any skill: Drive.
The Demon King


@UltraCraftGames
Can you give me a little bit more to work with? Try using third-person, descriptive writing, and give us a little more insight into what Peter's doing and thinking?
@Tatsu
Looks good, put them in whenever you're ready!

@Kazemitsu@Gobby@King Cosmos@UltraCraftGames@Duoya@Knox@Guy0fV4lor@Tatsu@Rune_Alchemist@ReusableSword@Gareth@Renny
Sorry for the wait everyone, I went ahead and started working on both of them, and lost track of time! But at least this way maybe I've done the impossible and pleased everybody?

As I list out the skills, I'm going into "demon king" mode--the things I write about each character are NOT my personal opinions, they're from the Demon King himself. So don't feel like I'm downing anyone's character with all his edginess or anything, okay?


Hopefully I didn't miss anyone, I know I didn't include Gobby since he said he was working on his character again.

IC will be up shortly!
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