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10 mos ago
Current Attn teeny boppers: You realize adbots aren't ppl, yes? They randomly generate login info, then execute pre-programmed posts. Your rage-spam goes unheard by the machine. And is equally annoying.
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10 mos ago
*Loads gun* I will instantly kill anyone who says "cream."
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10 mos ago
Thank you, completely unnecessary forced software update, for BREAKING FUCKING EVERYTHING I was doing.
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10 mos ago
If you're going by UK conventions of knighthood/nobility, yes. It also would be pronounced like the "dam" in "madame," rather than like a Dick Tracy "daym."
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11 mos ago
Me: "Goku, thank God you're here!" Goku: "I heard a really strong guy was here! Lemme at him!" Me: "He's right there!" *Points at my Writer's Block* Goku: "... Sorry bud you're on your own."
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On CST time, United States. Working from home now, so I can typically get at least one response out per week if not more depending on how things are flowing.

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Changed the rank. Re fortifying, yes, ideally she'd have done all three. But I dunno how viable a tactic of augmenting buildings is to make them more defensible (esp. if you could do the same to siege engines, also seems energy exhausting, so no clue if it's sensible at all). If yes, it'd have been one of those 'she hadn't moved an inch' moments where monsters try to get her to break through what she's protecting, but she just cut em down all.


Yes, the larger the object you channel Aura through, the more exhausting it is. Covering a weapon, one's body or armor, AND the gate OR a single wall of a fortress might just be doable, but not for the stretch of an entire battle without killing the user. If you want to go for a bloodbath at a chokepoint where the monsters just can't get past her, it's more likely she just kept them from getting through the gate/breaching the wall by stacking bodies all around her while being a whirling storm of death.

I've posted Vincent's profile in the CHAR tab; if it wasn't clear before (sorry!) it's open to posts now. If you have any issues with his "relationship" listings, let me know and I'll change it to whatever your preference is for your characters!


I'd like to officially start the RP tomorrow (Sat 4/19) despite it being Easter weekend; I figure we're not in too much rush anyway so it'll give people breathing room instead of feeling worried about being left behind in that "fresh RP flood."

I will also be adding a Discord link to the first OOC post later!


The only thing my CS really needs is that I can't think of a good skill


She uses a rapier, right? What about something like... "Auger Fang: A thrust from nearly hip level, driving the body's full weight into the blow while rotating the forearm and wrist. The concentrated force at the blade's point aims to drill a perfect hole into the target."

@Zeroth I'll let you figure out the lore stuff and abilities. I may or may not add a few war related events (no idea if it's feasible, but had in mind her doing sth like augmenting a whole fortification of some place and just creating a bloodbath despite monsters and demons swarming her at some point).

@OwO, @Rune_Alchemist Feel free to add in to this. As far as I'm concerned, she's a NPC shared between the four of us.


Glavios Captain: "Ah, Lord Kaides, what brings you to the training grounds tod--"

Patriarch: "The Big Woman still here?"

XD

The only thing I'd like to change is that, given power levels to rarity ratios in the setting, I think Grandmaster ranking would be better than Saint level. There are exactly 5 Divine-ranked warriors currently, and the number of Saints barely breaks into double digits. Not all of those at that level are Humans, either.

If you want her to create a bloodbath, shouldn't she be Augmenting her weapon and maybe her own armor? If she augmented a defensive structure, it would make it tougher and whatnot, but wouldn't really do anything to damage enemies.

I can handle establishing some extra lore and skills, no issue. And the Patriarch having to step in to stop her rampage after Estelle was poisoned 6 months ago gives me some ideas! Overall I really really like her!

@Atlas946 I can make the NPC then, no problem. As far as the changes to your sheet, everything's good, just make sure the illusion spell's noise and images are limited---by "noises," we're not talking about spoken words, and by "still image" we're not talking about like, an ultra-high-poly 3D projection of a deity or an entire castle's map layout, Etc.

How much input do we get in making the NPCs for our characters?


The NPC sheet is under the CS in the first OOC post; you can pretty much make them however you'd like, but if you want something spoilery or very plot-centered feel free to discuss it with me over PM!

@King Cosmos What you've got is great, no issues here! Since his Physical Strength and Aura both reached 1st Rate, he definitely could've Awakened his Aura after the age of 21. Whether or not he developed an Aura Type, I'll leave up to you---while 1st Rate physical strength is definitely a requirement to Awaken Aura for the "overall physical enhancement" techniques, further developing Aura into one of the five (known) types is less dependent on just raw strength or "grinding" of skills. Pre-approved!

@Thunder999999@Teyao You two are awesome, many thanks! That "scene that happens when the beat drops during the anime-OP" is fire! XD

Everyone, the opener is pretty much done, I just have to do a few background things. If your character has been pre-approved and you're comfortable with established relationships, shared plot elements, etc, you may add your sheet to the Character Tab!
Alright, slapping this down as a possible parentage connection, just to get things outta the way. Zeroth, chime in if you want.

Since Sherry is half-sisters with Estelle, and since Estelle is currently born between 1st Wife and Patriarch, that would necessitate her being associated the Patriarch.


Estelle, Ophelia, and Isana are all confirmed at this point as being born of the 2nd Wife. My suggestion was that Sherry and Vincent and possibly others were born of the 1st wife, though @Silver Carrot hasn't confirmed.

In the meanwhile, Rowan and Ferrucio are half-brothers. Ferrucio himself is born from a non-Kaides and a wife in House Kaides, so for half-brother status to be maintained, they'd have to share a mother.

Rowan is 2 years older than Ferrucio, so thankfully, there aren't any funny not-twins hijinks going on, but he IS the same age as Sherry, whom Ferrucio was basically let into the House to support/serve, so they'd have to be something wonky. On the plus side, Sherry and Rowan both have similar colored hair, so maybe they can pull off the fraternal twins look.


Rowan and Sherry could work as fraternal twins, if both players are good with that, but I must've missed when you guys sorted out Ferrucio and Rowan being half-brothers. I thought you were going to have Ferrucio's mother be one of the adult children of Deividas who came back to the family without the father being in the picture? If that's the case, then like you say they'd need to share a mother, but that would make it impossible for Rowan and Sherry to be twins. (When making the suggestions I did in the timeline update, I never assumed twins cause nobody intentionally made their characters strongly resemble each other or anything.)

The Third Wife is of a more willful stock than the 1st and the 2nd, her defiance made more so due to how the Patriarch certainly treats every one of his wives as disappointing breeding stock more than anything else. Despite having gone through a painful labor to give birth to twins (Rowan and Sherry), the man was too busy "rousing the troops" (read: fucking his secretary mistress) to pay attention to his actual wife.

I'm not good with this part cause it ascribes a lot more villainous traits to the Patriarch than he's intended to have. An NPC profile of him is up in the 0th Post of the CHAR tab, but the short of it is that he's a man from a prestigious bloodline known solely for its military prowess, living in a world where battling monstrous creatures is a common occurrence, at a time where cultural standards are by and large medieval with the handful of anachronisms one could expect for "rule of cool" in these types of stories.

EDIT: Apparently that 0th Post being "hidden" is not the same as minimizing it. It should be visible now, that's mah B dawg

He would've been under to pressure to marry as soon as possible, to sire multiple heirs, and to expand the family's power and influence in any of a multitude of ways. The 2nd Wife has been established at this point as being a skilled commoner that became a knight and caught the Patriarch's eye---while it's not set in stone, I think the strongest option is that the other 2 wives, especially the 1st, are high-status noblewomen. They could've been from Branch families, to "keep the bloodline strong," or they could've been from other families that would've made good mutual alliances for the Kaides. The Mistress could just as easily be from a noble family herself, the term "mistress" doesn't have to imply that she's a camp follower, prostitute, etc that he just picked up somewhere.

The man's seemingly cold, overly stoic, may have a Spartan warrior's aesthetic thing going on, etc, but all this talk of "breeding stock" leans too far in my opinion. He's not meant to be the BBEG of the story, though he'll play a somewhat antagonistic role in some cases. He's also not meant to be the "Big Good," either, but he "is what he is," that being a figure who must uphold numerous titles---loyal knight of the crown, head of a clan, leader of soldiers, father, and so forth.

Now, if the PCs who end up confirming their parentage as the 3rd Wife are also cool with it, I'm cool with her being more ambitious and willful or whatever. Maybe HER family forced her into this arranged marriage for the sake of trying to move up in the world, or maybe if there was some romance between her and the Patriarch she feels the flame's gone cold, or any number of reasons. Feeling pressured, and anxious that outsiders blame her and the other wives for the "Failed Generation" is definitely something I could see. So if you wanna change Ferrucio's parentage based on that, it's all good. If she takes part in the war effort and dies against one of the Demon Generals that's cool too.

As far as name suggestions, lol, I pretty much gave everything I had for SilverPaw's character.

Besides the family tree, I feel like I might soon need a flowchart of who did what to whom lmao. Also, I know our sister trio's mom (who is btw the 2nd wife not the first) is a redhead, but looking at the other kids, either Martenos is one too (or his parents) and/or he has a thing for redheads lol.


Regarding redheads, for ease of things given how far across the web the genes are spread, we'll say that there are other redheads in the Kaides line and the Patriarch has a type, lol XD
@Olive FontaineOne more thing I missed the first time through; your backstory has him falling at Kaidysium, but for plot-purposes none of the PCs actually died until the final battle at Port Hadrum, shortly after the Demon King shows up. So that's one more minor change to add in.
@Olive FontaineYes, the rod having partial inscriptions of formula would be along the lines of what I was getting at, that part's fine. And as far as the rod/amber orb being a focus, that's also fine; wood, bone, and many other natural materials are used as spell foci because they're conductors of Mana. I was just more getting at the fact that the rod itself wouldn't have like, a battery to store these spells he learned from it or anything--it doesn't contain Mana.

Lol I completely forgot about Austenos, I had originally gone back and added Fulvya but somehow skipped over him! Yes, he'd be a good choice for any Players who still haven't decided their parentage!

Gotcha! I will send over what I've got once I organize it along with the rest of the chaos, lol.

@MooiEen Lucille's pre-approved, everything still looks good! Feel free to chime in with how she would have related to the rest of the cast we've got so far; the updated timeline should hopefully give everyone a better sense of who they might've been sharing classrooms and cafeterias with during their formative years!

@Olive Fontaine Go, wizard boy, go! I'm loving the app as a whole, just got a few things to ask about/iron out:

Once all these are addressed, I'm ready to call him pre-approved!
@King Cosmos@Sanity43217@Crowvette@Olive Fontaine@Redacted@Iten

No rush, just wanted to check in with everyone we haven't heard from in a bit. If anyone needs anything clarified or wants to discuss plot-stuff, please let me know or drop a PM!
grandpa don't got game no more :(

More like Grandma decided enough was enough, and announced this decision to Grandpa in such a way that the younger generation seem to have decided polygyny was a safer reproductive strategy XD

@KazemitsuAs of your most recent edits, here's what I've got for feedback:


@Thunder999999 Excellent work! I can tell you incorporated some of the more obscure lore stuff, like the lucid dreams, into his backstory. I always worry that I overthink way too much with my worldbuilding, so I appreciate seeing it put to use. Also really liking the mention of various NPCs, I'd like to see some of them show up in some capacity in the second life. Just get us either a text description or an Appearance Image and he'll be good to go!

@Remram Very nice exploration of his inferiority complex! Everything else adds up, so we can add him to the pile of pre-approved!

Here's what we seem to have thus far, if it helps anyone. I have included some suggestions, but they're not set in stone:



I have most assuredly missed some things, but I tried to hit most of the major events; events that would've affected multiple siblings; events that we'd all remember; so on and so forth. Adding in every single minor detail, such as the Awakenings of those who finally achieved it or Allied NPC deaths, would probably bog us down too much. With that said, though, feel free to chip in wherever you think there's a potential for more story threads!

Since we have 11 characters currently in progress, most of which are fairly far along if not pre-approved, let's work on making our finalizations. I will be working on the first IC post soon and should have it done either tomorrow or Thursday; however, it may not be posted immediately.
@Zeroth

Just a quick thing. Does this imply that Deivida's wife was a light elf and that anyone from this side of the family is a half elf?


No, in order for you to be half-elf, one of his children would've had to marry an elf. Deividas is in his 70s, his sons/daughters are all adults. Any PCs who are direct descendants from him would be his grandkids. EDIT: The exact number of Deividas's children isn't confirmed either.
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