Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Rex
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@Savo
I'm still interested.

Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by KoL
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Actually, after I've read that deadline announcement again, I guess you can count me outta here.

I signed for a RP, not a writing contest. If we aren't all getting the chance to play, I won't even bother to rewrite a CS.

Sorry but I really don't wanna this much work for something that should be made for fun.

See ya'll.
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@Savo
I'm here
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@KoL bai
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@Savo

Present and accounted for.
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Hmm. I think I'm gonna take leave from this. My interest has declined and it'll free up one more spot if someone else wants to join. Hope the RP goes well. Until next time then.
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I'll get to criticizing everyone's sheet after class and get to everyone from last night who said something; @Sho Minazuki I haven't exactly given the yes or no yet, so no need to post yours yet. I know the aura stuff looks pretty neat on paper, but I feel that it is rather... obsolete considering that it takes away from aura. I'm sure a much simpler method can work through having a weapon that hardens the dust and turns it into a projectile that performs the features you mentioned from earlier. In short, it drains energy (I believe) when there are easier, simpler methods to use at least in my opinion.

Anyways, Allen and I have decided to spice things up for the final two spots! If you haven't been accepted yet and feel might be lagging behind (or if I'm a friggin' moron and treated you like Kellam from Fire Emblem Awakening), there is a last chance to get in!... and stuff. Deadline is by Friday as that's when we will start grading everyone's sheets! Here's the rubric!

Interest : Backstory and Personality! NA/20
Balance : Weapons and Semblance! NA/20
Writing Quality : Did you spellcheck? NA/10

So I implore anyone I haven't accepted yet to rework their character sheet or if they feel confident about it, post it in the ooc again! Or for that one hidden person, pm it! I will say once you post it, that sheet is final and we aren't taking any redos! So really, do read over it and personally criticize yourself!... but not too much. On a side note, we will be getting started on Sunday, so there's that xP

Happy hunting!


But first just to make sure some people are still here/or interested...

@Aquaknight@Scarifar@floodtalon@TheWindel@tanderbolt@NecroKnight@CadenGallic@Rekaigan@Raijinslayer@Mr Allen J

Just in case call to see if you guys are still here/interested!


It's not his only form of combat as he still has his twin knives and hidden knives, and his crows can gather small amounts of energy for him to replenish that aura for a few throws if need be. Him using his aura freely like this isn't a problem, since it's a very small amount anyways. A tiny drop in the bucket so to speak. I can't think of an easier form of this without making his semblance even stronger really.
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I'm still interested.
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Well I guess I'll reword/work basil's semblance and do a grammar/spelling check by tomorrow.
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I'm afraid that I share a similar opinion with KoL on this matter.

Please don't misunderstand, the GM's have the right to implement whatever system they deem necessary when running their roleplay. I will always respect that even if I don't agree with the choices made.

I do see the benefit of only picking a handful of your best CS submissions, but that judging process makes me incredibly uncomfortable. Not to say that I have a problem with receiving criticism, it's just this particular system is not one I like to participate in.

Regardless, thank you @Savo and @Mr Allen J for having me. I hope you all enjoy the RP!
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Okay I've redone Basil's semblance, done a quick spelling/grammar check and added a few bits in the extra category






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If it touches an enemy, it will either begin to damage their body, if they remain in the fog for too long, that time ranging from a few minutes if the victim has a low aura reserve to hours if they have a very large aura reserve, it will begin to do permanent damage, amputating fingers or even limbs and in rare cases killing them.


I'm personally trying to figure out what this means. lol

Also, there's a lot of run-on sentences in the sheet. As a rule of thumb; you should try to use periods more than commas.
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@Mr Allen J Basically if it were a video game mechanic, it would hurt them whenever they're in the mist; people with larger aura reserves take less damage than people with smaller aura reserves, I think that's the best way to think about it.

And yeaaah I've never really got into the habit of using periods so I just kinda drop in commas; probably something I should work on.
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@Mr Allen J Basically if it were a video game mechanic, it would hurt them whenever they're in the mist; people with larger aura reserves take less damage than people with smaller aura reserves, I think that's the best way to think about it.


Oh.

That was just really weirdly worded in his sheet. lol
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@Mr Allen J Yeah I'm kinda horrible at explaining things, haha. I'll try to think of a better way of wording it.
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Which character likes buttstuff the most?
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Hello everyone!

Most of you guys probably dont know me so just to explain why I suddenly post a CS here out of nowhere... Well I've been contacting the GMs via PMs about it.

Anyway, considering the deadline is closing in I decided that now would be a reasonable time to post my CS in the OoC and say hello to you all!

So... Hello!

Now without further ado...


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@Zoldyck
Musical weapons yesssssssssss.
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Posting again for exposure/to secure myself a spot. A lot of the groundwork is still the same, but I'm hoping the story is more Beacon-Friendly now.

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Alright, so I'm getting to the teams tonight, but for now, the three people who are in the roleplay are @gohKamikaze @Zoldyck @Pyromaniacwolf

Move your sheets over to the tab. Apologies to the others who participated, but if you want, ping me and I'll add you to the reserves list.

I'll get to pinging everyone over their teams sometime tonight.
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