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Since we've been at this for a while now I figured I'd take a moment to hand out some comments. @Savato & @Pirouette, I think the combo of Kyoka and Rumia has been pretty great so far. They're like a better Fuji and Ayame. Except more funny. @BladeSS4, you've been in several of my RP's now and this is the first time I'm not a GM when you're around. I think you've improved a lot as a roleplayer and would definitely implore you to keep writing and improving. @GlitchyBugger, this is the first time we've roleplayed together (I think?) but I am pleasantly surprised with your IC capabilities and your agreeable nature OOC. We seem to align pretty well in our desires and wishes for roleplay in general so I hope to see you around. @Spanner & @Write, I've found you both to also be agreeable and easy to work with. I can't say anything about the way you've improved or so, but I like how you both have managed to intertwine your characters with mine to the point where they are connected beyond just 'oh they're friends... sorta... sorta...'. The same goes for @Ganryu, but we're old 'friends' from the Naruto: the Next Generation days. I've said a few times before that it's Ganryu who pushed me towards being a better writer and pushed me to write in an advanced level. Perhaps it's sappy but I've remembered it and it's motivated me to keep going - really, it's true.

Overall, I've had my ups and downs with this roleplay. There are many things I enjoy about it and I enjoy having the freedom to do what I want to do. There are also things I'd improve if I could, and currently it's the communication that's a NR. 1 issue for me. However if we all keep doing our best perhaps we can improve that and become better roleplayers in the process.
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"Hime got a hit in so she deserves s rank"
- Syn, 2017

Character: Hime Yuki

Name: FULL POWER FAIRY!
Rank: S
Range: Self - 10 metres
Nature: Ice
Type: Ninjutsu

Effect: Hime becomes coated head to toe in a thin, protective layer of ice and emanates a sizeable aura that follows her which causes a drop to sub-zero temperatures to anything within range, the layer of ice coating her body will grant some protection against most physical damage, but it is far from impenetrable.
The reduction of temperature allows her to easily create ice projectiles of varying size and strength (From small pellets of hail to traffic-cone sized spikes) and fire them from around herself like a gatling gun and maintain a form of control over their movements and trajectory whilst in her 10 metre range. Pre-existing ice can be used instead of creating ice, to reduce chakra costs whilst creating projectiles.

The power behind the projectiles varies based on their size (smaller shots hit like bb pellets, larger shots hit like low-to-mid calibre bullets), but move about as fast as wind-boosted throwing weapons. Projectiles moving as such speeds tend to leave her range quickly, meaning her control over them is lost within a matter of seconds if she's not careful and requiring the creation of more projectiles.
When used in conjunction with her ice wings she can now gain about a metre and a half of lift off the ground, granting her a limited form of flight.

Weakness: Hime's body, albeit aligned with the Ice nature, cannot support this cold for long unless supplemented with heating of some kind, meaning if she uses the technique for too long she's highly likely to develop hypothermia and become more of a hindrance than a help. The time limit is about three minutes (between 6 or 7 posts, give or take depending on the time scale.)
High level fire techniques can also cancel out her technique by melting away any ice she creates.
And such a technique can drain chakra quite easily, especially when lots of projectiles are being created. Pre-existing ice can be used to reduce the chakra cost, but it's still a taxing technique to maintain.

Why I think she deserves this: Hime's fight with Havoc ended up being a case of whomever was in the other's range first, putting Hime in greater danger than she should be based on her combat focus of ice projectiles and high speed manoeuvrability. A tech like this greatly helps with amplifying her ability in these areas with some, but still very little focus on her own personal safety and protection.
The hypothermia issue is also a display of how she lacks in looking out for her own safety at the cost of achieving her aim.

Also because Havoc doesn't believe in fairies, she's gotta go full fairy to prove him otherwise.
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@Odin
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@GlitchyBugger
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@Olira
IS THAT SHINOBU?!?!?
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@Syn remember the rule, lots of plot isn't a valid reason to accept incomplete characters.

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@SynYEAH IT IS BOIIIIII
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@Olira
You could have Edo Tensei and Rinnegan and I'd still approve it
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@Olira
He's telling the truth. Doc would probably beat him and veto the character tho.
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No need for vetoes.

My merciless judgement is enough to deter even the head GM!!!!!
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@Syn
ALRIGHTY! Valora's ready for review, but to be honest... I'm not done because I have one more character... Her daughter...
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@Olira

Quoting myself from discord, I hope you're using the best shinobu version (young adult) as fc or you're getting a fight.
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@Olira
Seems legit. Accepted. Do you have Discord?
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@SynYeah. Dual#9216
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@SpannerAlso, YA Shinobu will be used for the daughter.
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@Olira

I like your style, new person. Btw, join the Official Discord Server for a better OOC. Most of the planing, iddle conversation and bullshiting happens there.
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Character: Kaito Chosokabe

Name: Water Release: Water Prison Jutsu
Rank: C
Range: Close
Nature: Water
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect:
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(Mostly uses it on himself)
Weakness:
Sufficient force

Reason: After his defeat, Kaito decided he needed a jutsu to slow down an enemy, and a water shield would be the most effective. He learned this to delay opponents, mostly by casting it on himself.

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@Savato

Alternatively there is tables, but they're so god awful broken on this website that I can't help you with problems we'll run into using it. Tables would look like this.

Konohagakure no Sato












Character name Opinion
daddy hokage what evil twin? PLOT TWIST
daddy hokagewhat evil twin? PLOT TWIST
daddy hokagewhat evil twin? PLOT TWIST
daddy hokagewhat evil twin? PLOT TWIST
daddy hokagewhat evil twin? PLOT TWIST
daddy hokagewhat evil twin? PLOT TWIST
daddy hokagewhat evil twin? PLOT TWIST
daddy hokagewhat evil twin? PLOT TWIST
daddy hokagewhat evil twin? PLOT TWIST
daddy hokagewhat evil twin? PLOT TWIST
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Started the sheet. Will add more as I think of things. Relations aren't completely fleshed out. Didn't add people from other villages with whom she did not interact yet.

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