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I'm looking to make a Krogan. Not sure if this was already asked, but does everyone on the team need to have been recently awakened. I was thinking of making a Krogan who chose to stay with the initiative, even when his brothers and sisters left.
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I'm looking to make a Krogan. Not sure if this was already asked, but does everyone on the team need to have been recently awakened. I was thinking of making a Krogan who chose to stay with the initiative, even when his brothers and sisters left.


You can decide exactly when they were awakened, but you'll need to keep in mind canon events and justify why your character would have been awake at a certain point. Most of the krogan workforce was brought out of cryo when the Nexus was stabilized for heavy construction and lifting jobs, for instance. You'll also need to come up with a plausible justification for a krogan staying behind rather than leaving with the rest.
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@Dervish Generally my thought was he was awakened as part of the work force, when all the other krogans left he selfishly thought that he would be able to show how strong he was better if he stayed than running away to some barren planet with other Krogans. "They ran, they were weak, too scared to fight. I'm staying, I'll show you all what I'm capable of."
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@Fury Panda Which is fair, but a large part of it is clan politics and the fact the krogan had all been lied to and perceive that the same shit they tried to escape in the Milky Way that was supposed to be left behind is carrying on with the new leadership because the krogan are being treated almost exactly the same.
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We'll have the reviews up in a couple hours; just have to wait for Tricks to get home to look at the newest submissions.
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@Dervish That's all true. Within that line of thinking I have the idea that he wasn't ever going to find more respect in his Clan. Even though he is the first to beat his chest, he doesn't necessarily have the skill to back it up, and was primarily being used for labor. His being part of a clan never stopped him from being a grunt. By staying, he can look at the other Krogan as weak, due to their choice to leave, and compare himself to frail humans and such. He almost has more power due to not being one of many.

Maybe he enjoys implying that they should have just taken over the whole colony instead of leaving to begin with. Would have been like "the good old days".
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So many humans. Almost makes me want to rewrite my entire character to be a quarian different species.




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Hey all, just wanted to introduce myself here! Mass Effect is my most cherished game series so I thought I'd give making a character a chance for nostalgia and warm tingles if nothing else.

I'm in the works of drafting up a character right now! A salarian acquisition specialist is kind of the direction I'm looking to take things, and I'm always open to opinions, ideas, etc.

Anyway, I'm really excited to see all of the characters being submitted, and also excited to participate in the stories being told here (as a player or just a spectator).
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Awww I'm not the oldest now :(
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IT'S REVIEW TIME! HANG ONTO YOUR BUUUUUUUTTS!


Worth reminding none of this is final verdict; this part-way review for early sheets is so people have a chance to go over and address concerns without being shafted at the end. Without further delay, here you go!

1.@DJAtomika



2. @Lauder



3.@Fallenreaper



4. @Stormflyx



5. @Sofaking Fancy



6. @Monochromatic Rainbow



7. @Rtron



8. @POOHEAD189


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*facepalms* Of course, he's AI! I got set into his Alliance background. That's on me. I'll alter it.

Thank you for clarifying, I'll definitely fix those. Yeah, non-Navy rankings are weird to find on ME wikis. Or if they show up, they contradict themselves.

I'll fix it in the character.

Edited for rambling.
Long day. Work laid off 300 people.

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Clarified the issues, excised a problem mech, expanded some more. Hope this suffices. @Dervish @DearTrickster @Mortarion



Edits: Cleaned up some of the writing, expanded others.
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@Dervish @DearTrickster @Mortarion: Made the needed edits, I believe I covered most the issues with the additions and changes in the character sheet. I also replaced the old sheet with the new revision to avoid cluttering up the OOC with continual new posts up of the CS. And yes, I told you over discord and know you're aware... but I figured I state it over the OC so it's aware I DID make edits and it's not the same old sheet. XD

roleplayerguild.com/posts/4568367- and Link to make it easy to find.
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Thank you so much for your feedback!

I really appreciate it, and yes - you called me out on rushing the last half! I've made a few tweaks here and there - hopefully this closes any gaps you had with it :)

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHH SO FRICKIN' EXCITED
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Thank you guys for that awesome critique, I hope this meets the problems that y’all brought up!

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If your still accepting I plan to make a rich biotic aristocrat, I just need a reason to wake him up from Cyro.
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If your still accepting I plan to make a rich biotic aristocrat, I just need a reason to wake him up from Cyro.


Primary thing is they need to have a background in military or security and a valid reason for being accepted into an APEX team.
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@BlackSam3091 I see you lurkin'.

Care to join in another Mass Effecty rollick under the stars?
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@Dervish Curses, seems I'm not quite the shadow I thought I was.

I've been considering it. I might have a sheet up before the 12th.
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I feel like this is relevant

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