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You got to be kidding me. What are the odds that someone using the same abilities and class that I planned on using for my dude. lol.

Guess its time to try out Krogan.
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You got to be kidding me. What are the odds that someone using the same abilities and class that I planned on using for my dude. lol.

Guess its time to try out Krogan.


Considering there's six classes and a relatively modest pool of skills based on three types, pretty high lol. Don't be discouraged if you're passionate about an idea and someone presents something similar.
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I don’t think Amaranth plopped up a Discord server yet, so here’s a link:

discord.gg/TMyx5jh

I’ll tell her to add it onto the OOC.
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I don’t think Amaranth plopped up a Discord server yet, so here’s a link:

discord.gg/TMyx5jh

I’ll tell her to add it onto the OOC.


Do we need to wait until we're accepted to join it? I'm asking since I personally like checking things over a character through Discord rather than pms or over the OC. It gets things done faster, but I also don't want to invade if I'm not allowed. XD
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Do we need to wait until we're accepted to join it? I'm asking since I personally like checking things over a character through Discord rather than pms or over the OC. It gets things done faster, but I also don't want to invade if I'm not allowed. XD


No you can join at any time. We're setting a deadline of 3 days from now to submit a character, at which point Scrub and I will go through and review all the sheets and go from there.
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Still got openings for characters? I'm debating between a Vanguard and Sentinel at the moment
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Alright, finally got something put together, criticism, suggestions, and the like are welcome and encouraged.

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expressing interest in the case you consider opening applications
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After careful consideration and hours of scraping through Dossiers, @Amaranth and I have determined which of you folk would be most suited for our current mission.

To start, we'll list those who we felt did not make the cut. Comments here will be rather barebones because of HIPAA. If you are curious about your case, please submit a PM to @Scrub Mage.

@DJAtomika Hazan does not meet the standards set by other applicants.
@Fallenreaper Vellios does not meet the standards set by other applicants.
@Lotrix Molick Tinari does not meet the standards set by other applicants.

@Star Lord Yanagita Shunji is a fine character, but unfortunately, there are a few issues which prevent us from accepting him at this time. If there is an opening, you'll be kept in mind.
@Eisenhorn While we quite liked Voto'tos, we feel that the role he fills is occupied by other characters of just slightly higher quality. Should their be an opening, you'll be kept in mind.
@Rtron I absolutely adore Key. I don't dish out this comment often at all, so please take it for all that it is worth. If there is an opening, you'll be kept in mind.


Now for the rest of you lot. Again, I'll keep my comments rather plain in comparison to what I want to write, but this is simply because I have spent the last two days stewing over your characters and cannot wait to take a break. As with above, PM me if you'd like more specificity regarding my thoughts.

@Dervish Ardan is a straight-edge with a bit of neurosis. From the application you've submitted it is clear that you crafted your character with an eye aimed toward the rich Turian culture and with a desire to have a fully realized individual. All that I would recommend is doing a quick proofread before switching Ardan over to the characters tab.

@Stormflyx Naryxa is the mother the group needs. Her view seems to be much more tame than some of the others, but her long history will give her an insight that the other characters seem to lack. Personally, I am interested in seeing how you handle PTSD with an Asari. Just about the only notes I would before switching her over to the character tabs would be mostly just to do some light proofreading. Personally, the second-to-last paragraph raises some questions about the seriousness of her Mercenary career for me, but I will leave that to your discretion.

@Spoopy Scary Shy is a golden god. Move her over. The only thing I'd have you do is some proofreading. It feels like you got tired while writing the application, so just clean some of that up so it flows better, thanks.

@Hank Kyo is, aside from Key, the character which screams Shadowrun the most to me. His background in Corporate Espionage also makes him a prime candidate for the work the crew will be doing. The only thing I'd really like to see out of him is more specificity regarding the philosophies he draws from, but as it stands now I am fine with him moving over to the characters tab. Also, even though it is a joke, please remove the line regarding Kai Leng from the misc.

@Mortarion Khosin is a great foil to Ardan, given his reformed racism. His character reminds me of Gaichu from Shadowrun: Hong Kong, and his viewpoints will provide a nice contrast to just about everyone in the party. His philosophy of war offers combined with the aforementioned reformed racism offer an interesting character dynamic that I don't think is present in the others. Just do some proofreading and cleaning up before moving him on over.

@Heat Zaash provides an interesting take on a Vorcha. Not only that, but considering the amount of people who hate Vorcha for no good reason in this party, it will be interesting to see how they change with him in their lives. While we're not exactly sure what the extent of Vorcha biotics is in-universe, I am willing to take a leap and let the Vanguard get through. Aside from proofreading, all that we require you to do is carefully consider the effects of addiction on a Vorcha. A part of me wonders if it would be possible for a Vorcha to become addicted to Red Sand in the first place, considering their physiology is hyper-adaptable to conditions including resource scarcity. I'd say you are accepted, but before moving over to the Character Tab let's have a discussion to figure that bit out.


Alright, now that you're all out of the way, I suppose I can devote time to planning the rest of the RP. : ^ )
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I just wanna say, as someone who GMs a lot and has gone through a number of application processes on the other side, I appreciate the hard work you guys did reviewing all of the heavy tomes of submissions the past few days and all of the careful work you guys put into this.

I'm honoured to be here. Let's make a story to remember!
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I appreciate the hard work you guys did reviewing all of the heavy tomes of submissions the past few days and all of the careful work you guys put into this.


"*Groan of pain* why does everyone in advanced write novels?" - Scrub Mage on spending 4+ hours reviewing characters in one sitting before getting up to violently play random instruments, 11/01/2019.
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@Burger We write novels because we need something to read in the bathroom.
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