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7 yrs ago
Current Yes, I'm an oversize child. Deal with it. :P
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8 yrs ago
That moment you've got too many rp ideas floating in your head, but you don't want to overwhelm yourself? Yeah... I'm right there, suffering in silence.
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8 yrs ago
RP hunting is like finding the rare toy in the cereal box. Doable, but the time and effort is nearly more than I can bare!
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9 yrs ago
That amazing high when you realized how far you've come in improving your writing. It's impossible to describe, but drowns you in a positive glow.
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9 yrs ago
I love being a terrible person by making my PCs' lives miserable, it's art form that never gets old or boring.
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Username.....Fallenreaper
Nicknames....Fallen (preferred), Reaper, Devour of lost souls, etc.
Gender..........Female
Sign...............Libra (true to sign surprisingly)
Occupation....Wandering and exploring the caves of my insane mind
Location.........USA (Lost in the Cornfields!)

Status............Stable.



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Advance RP

Create-A-Hero
Accepting: GM/Co-GM Nitemare Shape, Hound55, & Dedonus


Formaroth Part 2: Throne of Lies
Still Accepting: GM TheDuncanMorgan


Casual RP

X-Men: The New Era - Issue II: Avalon Rising
Accepting: GM Almalthia, Co GM Pilatus


Legacy of Heroes: The New Age
Accepting: GM Jessie Targaryen, Co GMs Alfhedil and Apollosarcher


Nation RP

None

Arena RP

None yet.


Extra Stuff Featuring: Flight Rising.

Most Recent Posts

Some advice. Keep a post between 1200-1500 words maximum. Anything longer becomes a chore to read and hard for your opponent to keep track of everything you are actually doing among all the filler.


Alright making a list to remember for the future.
  • Keep posts between 100-1500 words max, meaning low wording and intentional detail for clarification.


Also note that your first post should include all pertinent information to your character, including equipment and whatnot.

  • Keep posts between 100-1500 words max, meaning low wording and intentional detail for clarification.
  • Include all important information to the character. Namely equipment, weapons, armor, and other important aspects.


Yes. Your intro is your stance post, you should always denote your weapons and armor so there is no confusion later. Even a cursory mention.

  • Keep posts between 100-1500 words max, meaning low wording and intentional detail for clarification.
  • Include all important information to the character. Namely equipment, weapons, armor, and other important aspects.
  • Include stance, weapons, armor, even if it's a brief mention.

I think I remember T1 originally only allowing you to use what you brought with you at the first post of the fight. Most likely when sheets are not being used.


Even when sheets are being used, you should always make note of it. I don't mind letting it slide this time, but that's because this ain't ranked and whatnot.


If you rather, I can rewrite the intro post completely as it doesn't meet expected standards. Namely as you won't be able to reply for at least this week.

The reason it took so long is that this match feels like a section taken out of a story for me, and so I don't know what I'm suppose to include or exclude. In addition I'm trying to transfer my mindset from story to tactical thinking, but also keep a balance. Not easy because, to be honest, if I focus too much on tactics then it becomes rather boring for me. I usually end up just wanting the match to end more than actually putting on a good fight. However I understand too much story creates unneeded 'fluff' with no regards to the actual fight and can bore my opponent to death. Right now, I'm seeking a decent balance between the two.

As for the CS, it has not been rewritten save for a few spelling errors corrections. Any edits I would do would be off screen and likely told that I clarified the abilities before editing it. PMing or pasting up a copy for the Judge/Opponent of both the original and the new copy, highlighting the changes made in a color that was easy to see. I also gave you a few days, in a pm, warning that I was aiming to alter the OP to make it easier to reference I believe. If you compare it to the original, only thing was altered was the fact the icicles need preps so I can't pull off the magical trick of 'oh look, incoming icicle to block your attack' routine you mentioned was a bit irking factor. I figure that would be easier then relying on pure guess work with that.

But this is some good advice stuff. :P Posts shouldn't be that long(I don't mind it, I like reading), just what you need to know. Pepper some story in it, but stretch it out over the course of the fight instead of blowing the load first. Always include what you'll be using in the fight, be it powers, weapons, armor, anything. If this was ranked, someone might not let you use - basically - anything that you didn't mention(competition and all).


*points above*

I also included the Mass rounds and their types in the OP since I wasn't sure how to naturally fit it int. Logically people don't always restate what they already know, and I actually like to make the scene flow from one thing to another smoothly. And including all that, Rilla... wouldn't that still make my post just as long as I currently have it? Namely if what you state is true, then if I don't mention exactly how or in what Jacer's abilities work, then it's not likely my opponent will allow me to use it at all.

My post will probably be closer to next week. I work for the rest of this week, including tonight(then get up early tomorrow for work). I don't know when my next day off will be.


No hurries and you did mention you were going to be busy, so I kinda wished I had held off on this until Thursday or Saturday now but..meh.

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I believe Fallen makes up for it by having a cute tush which Rilla is about to SMACK . . . . If ya can smeeeeelllellelel what the Rilla is cookin!


He can try, but the bad part... that match won't get finished to see who wins. :P

Intro post up, sorry it was actually a bit long. I wanted to really use it to set up the scene and get a feel for Jacer, which I think I did prettty well while also setting up the scene decently. Hope you enjoy it. The next one will be more about the arena set up, Jacer's equipment, and likely anything more fight related including setting Dom over the light area so the two can duke it out.
The Brother's Duty


The cave was still and quiet.

Jacer body was still. In the settling chaos he felt like nothing more than a living statue among the scene that showed clear signs of a life or death struggle. His memory reflecting over his failings while the cave’s cold temperature tried to pin him into place like a delicate butterfly, his over caution preventing him any sort of escape from this nightmare. If wasn’t for the fact he was just fighting for his life moments ago and his worries were just starting, he might’ve been proud. His mind was inwardly debating on his options. Deep in his heart was an unsettling sensation because he knew if he pulled away too soon and without absolute proof this fucker was dead, he could end up cutting his life span down to seconds. The thought was an unpopular notion compared to the years he aimed to live.

Was relaxing his guard worth the risk for both him and Dom?

Dom… at thinking of the name, Jacer's brown colored irises shifted to his peripheral vision for a moment. He could easily glimpse his step brother sitting in the cleared space about thirty feet in diameter. The fourteen year old was shivering and terrified, his figure was just five feet from where the struggle had ended. His blonde hair almost blended into the white around them, matted by the streak of blood and dirt down his face side. Dominik’s arms propped his torso upright, his blue eyes stared in complete shock at the monster his brother had become. His younger brother's left arm was bleeding from the cut underneath and staining the rips in the coat keeping him warm. It was obvious he was infected. Both of them knew it, and the sands of time ticked down to see what Jacer would do.

Inside, Jacer was debating on his choices. If he shall continue the duties he was saddled as an older brother or take the easiest and most obvious way out. It was a question the magnus dreaded answering the most.

The faint ache started in his extended right arm and at his half bent waist, bring his focus to the current matter. His hand rested near the blade base and his figure hunched over the Enslaved at his feet, the thing now bleeding out its mercury life. Every few moments his warm breath misted from his lips into the cold air and showed he was still alive. The frost nipped at his exposed skin above his collar, his face set in a blank expression, while the rest of the parka wrapped about his frame. Besides the heat from rapid activity, it was the only thing that kept him from freezing and did not hinder his movements. His coat’s bottom half reached down to his waist, stopping around where his utility belt was tracing the waist band. Several of the smaller pockets were flipped open to reveal the magazines remaining. His pants were cleaned of any dirt and grim thanks to him being shoved into the snow a few times, his thick boots wet from having to wade through the snow up to a foot deep.

Little red scratches and bleeding wounds were already mending rapidly, restoring him back to his original state. However, his muscles still registered the burn from his earlier activity and his chest heaving slightly.

He was using Ebium’s Pride to balance, a five foot by ten inches guan dao, with his right hand comfortable resting under the blade's base. The other was on the end about two hand widths from the middle, nearest the spiked end, while he used to pinn the corpse to the ground. The blade’s edge had buried itself into the chest cavity and pushed the metal casing inward, severing where the "heart" should be in half. To any organic being, this was a clearly a death blow.

Too bad, Jacer thought, this creature was no longer organic. Making that assumption almost got him killed last time, and it was a mistake he intended not to make again just to extend his existence even in this hell for a little bit longer.

Paranoia seeping into his instinct, Jacer began to rattle off his remaining supply for his Phoenix Mark V almost instinctively. His Nix, as he nicknamed it, was a specialized handgun with some pretty handy features: a DNA lock suited for him and Dom’s use, targeting laser pointer, and the capability to fire off MASS rounds without them exploding in the clip. MASS was short for Magik Activated Specialized Shots which in short were normal bullet rounds infused with his magik and sorted into four types: Ice, Splicer, Shocker, and Tracker.

Currently he had used a complete set of normal magazines and several Spicer rounds that had pelleted the metallic humanoid’s figure into scrap metal, making the surface appear like it had been hit by buckshot instead. This meant he had a fully loaded normal magazine of twenty bullets and the second with only nine left. Four MASS magazines, each with their own assignment of round types. First magazine he recalled had two splicer rounds left, causing him to recount the exact combination in each one. One held ten untouched Ice rounds, the second was a mix of five Trackers and Shockers, and finally last held four Ice and six Shockers.

It all amused him a bit. Originally he had been on a scouting task so he came prepared for human trouble and less for Ensalved, something he regretted. He had let another minute tick by before he dared to move. Jacer slowly brought his outstretched left leg forward, adjusting his balance to his right to compensate for his movement, then pressed his uplifted foot firmly into the Enslave’s shoulder. It didn’t move when he started to slid his left hand forward on the glowing guan dao. Jacer inhaled and started to tighten his fingers for grip then jerk it free. It made a protesting screech. He flinched at his being so close as his ears twitched at the high pitch sound. To ease the pain and complete his task, the man shut off his hearing for a moment letting it return to normal until he was done.

When his blade pulled completely out, the corpse shuddered then slumped on its back completely dead. Jacer was sent back a few steps because of the strength required to jerk it loose. His weapon hang loosely at his side while dripping the darken silver blood upon the grey rock. He moved his dark haired head to examine it briefly then flicked as much as he could off onto the body, his thick figure turning on heel toward his younger brother.

While each step was casually eating the distance between them, Jacer’s thoughts fell on how different they looked and how easily people were surprised they were brothers. The older man had dark hair cropped short on the sides and slightly wavy over top, his hairline parted on the left side on his head top. A slight shadow of a goatee was showing around his mouth and chin, making Jacer's soft features look much more mature compared to his twenty-four years in age.

A foot from his sibling, Jacer came to an abrupt stop and bent down on one knee to retrieve something. His arm stretched out and fingers dug against the stone while he scooped up the gun he had lost. The Enslaved had disarmed him during the fight forcing him to use his melee weapon. When placing his gun into the holster, his other hand had flipped his weapon over his tilted head and heard it click to the military grade magnetic clips on his back. Several of them were attached to a thick strap placed diagonally across his back. This kept his guan dao in place when not in use, making it easy to draw in milliseconds.

Normally Jacer would've powered down his senses but his nerves were so jittery, he felt more comfortable keeping them on. He even switched on his hearing again should his final kill shot had not been enough to finish the creature. His sober expression broke when he rose to his feet, ignoring the last rains of his ache, then bent over to give Dom a hand up. The fourteen year old's boot made a scuffing sound across the surface in his aid up.

"Talk quietly, I got the cat ears on," Jacer jested, referring to his enhanced ability, his right index finger pointed to his right ear.

It was obvious, of course, due to the magik molded on the outer edge and seemed to curve outward from his head. It give them a slight catty appearance at the side though this wasn't the only altercation in his looks. The bottom of his face and and eyes showed similar features, giving him a slight mismatch appearance, adding canine and hawk respectively. They enabled his own senses to mimic these particular animals without physically creating the organs that he lacked and permanently changing him completely. If any attempt were made to cut them off, the blade would go right through unhinged or affecting the senses.

Not hearing a word from Dom, Jacer paused long enough to spot Gizi scramble from his hiding spot among the pillars. The little genetic spliced cripple bobbed from deep snow bank to another, the winged otter nearly being smothered by white snow each time his face skimmed the surface. Jacer’s sight lingered on where the original dove like wings had been. He could only guess they had been lost to an unknown accident. Now they had been replaced with a poorer and more steampunk version on the back, the gears grinding slightly with each radical twitch. It didn't seem to dampen the little critter's spirit in the least. If anything, Gizi seemed blissfully ignorant of his loss.

Letting his brother's pet close the distance, Jacer continued. "Now..."

Whack!

"Shit Jacer, that hurt!" Dom blurted when Jacer thumped him upside the back of his head, the youth's hands pulled to rub away the hurt. He bend it enough to avoid Jacer's eye contact though that didn't stop the magnus from fuming or flinching at the sound.

"First off..watch your mouth. Next... what the hell were you thinking?!? And following me here of all places!” Jacer snapped with a quiet yet assertive tone.

He didn’t want to make his ears hurt again while he chewed out Dom, his face twisted up in a hard glare. Dom wasn’t paying attention as the teen’s arm fell to his side. His other arm cradled his wounded one, eyes staring away in guilt. Jacer still hoped there might be a chance his younger sibling wasn’t infect, his simple denial entering his mind, but his common sense dampened his hopeful spirit. Their conversation was quickly interrupted when the otter plowed into Dom’s legs. Immediately the kid tumbled into Jacer’s side causing the magnus to snap his right arm out and wrap about his brother’s middle, stopping Dom from stumbling into the hard ground.

A sound, soft and uninviting, caused Jacer’s cat eat to dart to the side where it adjusted to hear it better. It caught his attention causing his head to turn and try to locate the source’s. The whole time his gut getting a nasty sensation something was about to happen. His eyes still flickering about the scene to seek out someone who shouldn’t be there, he pushed Dom quickly back to his feet. While both males were ignoring the otter, it seemed Gizi had also sense their unwanted guest and was getting rather antsy, his short figure starting to retreat to the other side of the boys and toward the light.
Hopefully the Lea / Jewel collab will be up soon. Ish.


I'll do Xid tomorrow, I promise! And also, after Heat replies to the Collab I'll we can resume with it. I will likely have Jayda reply if no one else minds, @Dblade26, @Rtron, or @SpiritedDream? (knows there's another...somewhere. I think.)
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Is okay. :P


I'll just have Jayda torment Andri as an apology. ;)
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Andri is in that collab too, remember?


I forgot, i'm so sorry!!!
Typos suck... I mean I don't want to overwhelm, unless he forfeits because of it. XD
I usually keep my intro posts short and succinct. If it's supposed to have a story, maybe longer.


It is sort of does as it's adding and rewriting Jacer's start history. I just want to overwhelm Rilla with a shit ton to read, though I might end up rewriting some segments in his character sheet before things ever get fully started.
Still here, sick but here.


I'll skip over Denso then, and when you feel up to it make a mention here and we'll give you time to post. Sound alright Heat?
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