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Apologies for the longer than usual delay.

Let me see what I have to address, before having the IC up and running.

@Parallel Hearts@floodtalon@Moonlit Sonata@DocRock@Crusader Lord@Reflection@1Charak2@SubjectVision@Pyromania99@Cu Chulainn@Breo@Rune_Alchemist@Duoya
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@Red Alice

Thanks. I'll take a look at this later, when I have some proper time.

@Cu Chulainn@Pyromania99@1Charak2
If you wish to change characters for some reason, you are welcome to do so. Just be sure to make a choice you feel comfortable with, since that's the most important thing.

@Froppy
D'Artagnan seems alright, you can move him to the Character's tab if you want.

So just a quick question.

Due to issues with Neil(mostly worrying I couldn't do him justice), decided to look at Henry Ford as I think I noted before, unsure. But anyway, did some digging and found someone had done him before in the make a servant thread. Not planning to take the entire sheet of course, no no, but I was wondering if it'd be fine to use some elements from it? For inspiration, since I'm doing Rider, rather than Caster.

If there's an issue with that, I'll work completely on my own of course.

http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/6950-Create-A-Servant-2?s=4e46536aa078646bb099ed9826938475&p=2463309&viewfull=1#post2463309

@DocRock

Well, I have nothing against taking inspiration from someone else's version of an OC Servant. Creativity isn't a limitless resource, after all, especially when it comes to this issue. You are free to do as you wish.

@Breo
He's alright now. You can post him in the CS tab as well.

@GreenGoat
Hanzo is ok as well. You can do as the others.

@Player 2
I'll take a better look at this Asterios later since it's a modified version of his already existing canon self, so I have to analyze him with a bit of caution.

@1Charak2
If Quetz is your final choice, she's ok. Just bear in mind what I said above since changing characters after they are already in the IC will likely not be possible.

@SSW
This choice is rather unexpected to say the truth, but I don't see anything out of the ordinary with it. And, given that Atalanta is a precedent of beastly looking Servant, you can go forward with it. You can move her to the CS tab like the others.

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Anyway, with this number of approved Servants, I guess that I can announce what I came up with in terms of plot.

An unknown enemy naming themselves the "Moon Dominion" hijacked the control of the Moon Cell's core following Velber's last fly-by. In order to protect its integrity, the Moon Cell locked its core behind seven layers of encryption (sealing the Moon Dominion inside of it) and spread the access keys through several different points of the SERAPH. The Dominion selected a number of agents (Servants) to try and recover the encryption keys. Without any other choice, the Moon Cell had to do the same and summon a number of Servants to recover the keys before the Moon Dominion ones, in order to have them fight the Dominion head on and try to eliminate the threat.

The location of the 1st key is going to a land where traditional folklore meets classic mythology. A mix of North (and perhaps Central and South) American legends with Greek Classics. Though I'm yet to come up with a fitting name.

This is the gist of it so far.

Anyway, if there's any questions or suggestion you can make them here. I'll try to be back tomorrow with the IC already up so that we can get going.

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@Parallel Hearts

While I'll move medusa into the cs tab as is, I might app a couple skills seperately for you to review in order to better distinguishify her kit, Mostly because the base is done, I think I can attempt to add a few creative replacements,

Namely replacing IA, and MS with slightly differing forms, having decided this medusa is closer to gorgon then rider medusa

(Also her alignments Chaotic neutral now)

@1Charak2

I don't know if allowing to change her now that she has been approved would be fair with everyone else that already got an approved character. I'll think about it, though.

@SubjectVision

I like this Servant idea. Also, I don't see any problems with the CS, so you can move him to the Characters' tab as well.

@floodtalon

Siegfried is alright as well. You can add him to the Characters' tab.

That moment everyone on the allied team, bar Scathach is vulnerable to Cybele so far.

Seems like medusa might actually end up killing her allies by accident.

@1Charak2

I'm pretty much sure that MR will help anyone who has it and Constantine is a Ruler so...

@Parallel Hearts A question, if i may ask out of sheer curiosity:

Would "El Dorado" be applicable as a servant? The mythical priest-king who spawned the legend, specifically.

@Crusader Lord

I don't see why not. You are welcome to do it, if want.

@Parallel Hearts

Will we be getting a discord?

@Red Alice

It's as @Moonlit Sonata said. If you want it, you can do one and send me a link as well. But, I'll not be there most of the time so try to ask any important questions over here preferentially.

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@Red Alice

I hope this helps with your questions from the interest check.

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Ok, for the (probable) last update of today, I'll give you all a glimpse of one of the enemies that'll appear in the 1st chapter of the story. Hopefully, this will be a fun game, since this cast is giving me some interesting ideas:

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Character Sheet

Class: Alterego
True Name: Alterego W
Origin: North American Folklore
Height/Weight: 230cm/157kg
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Description: A cruel and violent beast that's the combination of a number of beings spoken of in stories told by the Natives of the land of North America. It's a fiercely cannibalistic creature with the power of consuming and stealing the very flesh and essence of its victims in order to pose as them. Certainly, an alien existence whose sole purpose is to spread malice and contempt.

— Parameters —
STR: ??? | END: ??? | AGI: ??? | MAG: ??? | LCK: ??? | NP: ???

— Class Skills —
Territory Creation (Forest) A
Presence Concealment A+
Magic Resistance B

— Personal Skills —
Cannibalism A
Shamanism B
Skinwalker A++
Battle Continuation A

— Armaments —
???

— Noble Phantasms —
True Name: ???
Type: ???
Rank: ???
Range: ???
Maximum number of targets: ???
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@Cu Chulainn

Like I said before, I think that Constantine is alright. You can add him to the Characters tab.

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@floodtalon

Well, almost everything there is alright. I just have a couple questions:

1st, why is it that he has Clairvoyance when he's neither an Archer, nor a Caster, and (as far as I remember Siegfried's backstory in Fate) he's a very short-sighted individual who takes bad decisions at the drop of a hat if he thinks that he's doing good? In its place, he probably could have Disengage, or maybe something else in its place. Unless of course you have a reason behind it.

2nd, the Luck rank down on his last Noble Phantasm is too harsh. Perhaps something like "Two-Three ranks down to a minimum of E" would be a little bit more fair, I think. After all, there are some Servants that are born just so lucky that even the greatest curse of them all wouldn't be that much of an issue to them.

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@Duoya@BlueHelix@floodtalon@Yukitamas@Crusader Lord@Love Detective@Sunglass

If any of you are still interested, the link to the main thread is a couple posts above.

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@Parallel Hearts

Sorry this is clearly a fault on my part. This is the 'blackened' version of medusa lancer your referring which is technicallly a altered form (The kind we see in the OVa) Regular medusa lancer does exist (one of her varients being lily (But the ova proves the adult form doee exist)) I was just a bit strangled for good medusa art outside of her rider self.

This one is unblackened and thus her alignment remains unchanged.

If it makes it easier I can change her art to that of her rider self. I simply liked the different in spirit dress for telling them apart.

That said the presence of gorgon breaker makes this one a bit further from her monstrous self, (Its mostly there to avoid insta gimping the other PC's by accident, Cybele is one hell of a op mystic eyes

@1Charak2

No problem, it was just a misinterpretation issue.

Like I said before, she's ok. You can move her to the CS tab.

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Since this is likely the last time I come over here today, let me say that the IC will be going up no later than this weekend. Those who are still doing characters don't need to worry, though, since the first few posts will be most likely just exposition to prepare everyone for the quest.