Konan375Alright, chosen, it as requested, ya'll gomna have another friendly Chaos god to deal with. Didn't want 3 creation gods. You cool with that @Rtron?
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Fixed. 1 might. NO MORE THAN THAT I SAY.
@BBeast
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YOU JUST HAD TO BRING SCIENCE INTO THIS.
Can't we just go with 'As a God, he can tank it unless it's a specific attack.'
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YOU JUST HAD TO BRING SCIENCE INTO THIS.
Can't we just go with 'As a God, he can tank it unless it's a specific attack.'
@LokiLeo789
It's been decided that you will not be starting out as a God, and you'll have to start from level 1.
As for your Domain and Portfolio, the Portfolio is too broad. You infringe upon many Domains, including Life, Order, Death, Nature, and Cosmic, without any apparent limitations. If you wish to continue with this portfolio, see Zephyriom and/or Vowzra for ideas on how to limit it.
As for your personality, it seems to be a bit of a mess of lots of different things not tied together very well. . If you could clean it up, or show more that some things are an act, that would be great.
It's been decided that you will not be starting out as a God, and you'll have to start from level 1.
As for your Domain and Portfolio, the Portfolio is too broad. You infringe upon many Domains, including Life, Order, Death, Nature, and Cosmic, without any apparent limitations. If you wish to continue with this portfolio, see Zephyriom and/or Vowzra for ideas on how to limit it.
As for your personality, it seems to be a bit of a mess of lots of different things not tied together very well. . If you could clean it up, or show more that some things are an act, that would be great.
Shouldn't Vestec's shielding cost a might point to defend from Jvan's 1 might attack? Not that I think it would have hurt him anyway, but it feels a bit overpowered to just say "negating any damage" when it was a 1 might x 0 might defense. While I hate to bring number crushing to the RP (or battles, for that matter), I just feel like this whole chaos energy thing is getting on par with Marvel's chaos energy.
I read it as more of a 'Get Vestec away from here' shove rather than an attack. The shield was pretty much just for any excess that could have actually caused damage,
If I misread it I'll go back and add might cost.
@Antarctic Termite?
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Looking good. Thanks for that, Rtron!
The only thing I notice after re-reading my bits (apart from my own writing errors :S) is the bit on hain facial expressions. The quote from Termite with some extra stuff for express was unfortunately snipped.
Fixed!
Vestec, level 4 God of Chaos.
Might: 14
Freepoint: 2
Vestec became wary as soon as he heard Jvan's voice. It didn't sound like the voice of someone trying to help. Slowly his colors turned the red of violence, and he looked around. "Now Jvan...lets not do anything stupid." Somehow, he doubted that the Goddess of Beauty was going to be sensible about this. As the avatar suddenly burst into existence, he threw up a shield of chaos energy around him. It turned out to be a good decision. He only had a moment to brace, and suddenly he was being through through the world. Well, not precisely the world. More like the fabric of the world. Point was, his shield was gone and he was flying through the planet at a very fast speed. Something's going to die when I reach the other side. Vestec thought, giggling.
He could, of course, have just gone to his realm of Madness. But where would the fun have been in that?
BOOM!
Vestec exploded on the other side of the planet, evaporating hundreds of gallons of water in an instant. Of course, the waters all around him began to flood in to fill where the water had gone, but the Metatic ocean wouldn't be the same level for many years. Without missing a beat, Vestec drove himself through the planet, tearing a small hole through it and appearing back where he had been. "That was rude." Vestec giggled. "Amusing. But Rude." He cracked his neck, shaking bits of lava off himself. A completely unnecessary thing, given he could just will it all away, but it gave him something to do other than stand there looking at Jvan's horrific Avatar. "Don't do something like that again, or there will be consequences. I'm here to help, not harm...this time."
He looked up, just in time to catch Illunabar's fleeting essence. Refuse to help now, Sister, and I will make you regret it later. He called out.
Then of course, Vowzra had to shove his nose in the business. Without so much as a 'hello, it's me' or a 'goodbye' he entombed Slough, and took her and another grave away. "So many people being Rude today!" Vestec giggled, following Vowzra. In an instant he was in the far frigid north, looking down upon a very large forest, and a small clan of bears. Walking bears. "My, my. Vowzra, what have you been hiding from me?" Slough was safe in her cocoon, and evidently nothing was going to be getting to her anytime soon. Besides, he had much more interesting things to play with now.
It didn't take long for him to find a tribe. They were few, these Tree-minds, but there were several different tribes to choose from. "Yes...you'll all do nicely." In a flash of multicolored light, they were gone. The Tree-claw, the Hunters, the cubs, all of them. Nothing but an empty clearing where they had been.
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After many a long year of me not doing this, I have finally created a second 'Gathering of lore and creations' post in the character tab.
Please Peruse both the first one] and the second one and PM with what is missing from your individual God/Goddess's tab.
Lugu, you have your own post because your creations were the most and what I needed to move to fit everyone elses into one post.
Everyone elses second tab
Slough's second tab
After many a long year of me not doing this, I have finally created a second 'Gathering of lore and creations' post in the character tab.
Please Peruse both the first one] and the second one and PM with what is missing from your individual God/Goddess's tab.
Lugu, you have your own post because your creations were the most and what I needed to move to fit everyone elses into one post.
Everyone elses second tab
Slough's second tab
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