Savo

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@Savo
Hey, I'm working on my CS, and was wondering if you and your Co-GM decided to let me substitute a weapon for a stronger semblance! If you'd like, I can finish it all up and post it here, and if you deem it too OP, I can just change it! ^_^

@Framing A Moose

You're good to go on this, though I hope it isn't too overpowering.

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@Vongola_Hasayo you said you need help with an idea for semblance, right? What about something that exemplifies his wild attacks? Like something along the lines of making temporary duplicates of himself that can easily be destroyed (one or two hits) but their power is in numbers and overwhelming opponents. They will probably be a lot weaker than the original Leaf and are wild cards. This means they will and can attack anything, except their other clones and Leaf himself. Leaf has no control over how any of them act and can attack any without repercussion to himself. Probably have five to ten at once and depending on how many they are x times weaker than Leaf (ex. ten Leafs would mean their attacks would be 10x weaker). Maybe call it Pack Mentality?

That's my recommendation. I would say to iron it out if you wish to choose it as it's rather... rough from my viewpoint and might not be balanced.

On a side note, gonna try and get thirty minutes in to review more, but once that's up I'm out for an hour or so.

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@TheWindel there is enough room, however I wish not to bite off more than I can chew. There are only a few compromises I can come to, one of which is once the roleplay is full, you can make a reservation to get in if someone is absent or decides to leave the roleplay. That's the only type of reservation I'll take.

The better I can sustain this story, the more spots I will open up. This will possibly start after we finish chapter one.

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@Scarifar Carnel is making me think of Caramel. If that's what you were going for then you are good to go.

@Mercurial I would evaluate one or two minutes for a full recharge. There should be some sort of risk and reward for both your chary and their opponent. And with that some strategic planning can go into effect using this timer. However the amount of posts it goes up to I would say... leave it at one to two. I just wanted some tangible time to balance it out.

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Apologies for the double post.

@PatrickDrummer I know this is a little late, but just heed Aqua's advice. Just roll with that and you're good to go.

On a side note, if any one is struggling to come up with a name, use this generator. It should help hopefully.

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@Savo

Just to make sure, is this basically just a successor to Illuminate? If so, I'll just reuse Gradon.

@TheWindel

Not quite considering that Beacon Academy is in use here versus Illuminate Academy. I would say it's more of a replacement versus successor since we are following the plot of RWBY in a sense but in an au perspective.

@Framing A Moose apologies, but I'm probably not going to accept any reservations for spots in the roleplay due to multiple people already putting up their apps. It wouldn't truly be fair to them. And as much as I trust you guys I don't want a million reservations xP

I hope you understand.

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@Savo There's nothing mentioned in the rules section as far as I can see, but are we allowed to write up a second character or would you prefer we stick to 1?

I'm okay with sticking to just 1, but I do have an idea for another character.

@Leslie Hall

I would say stick to one for now as I'm setting the maximum at twelve for now; I won't be making a character to participate, however.

On a side note, sorry for not getting up any responses for applications and such; I'm gonna be a little bit busy this week due to college stuff, but I can attempt to get some people in tonight.

@Sho Minazuki yes, or at least I'm going to try to.

🅸 🆁🅴🅼🅰🅸🅽 (Horror/High Casual)

@sakurasan Fucking accepted.

I can't wait to write her getting fucked by the slasher.

@Mr Allen J

Slasher confirmed to have a dong... or maybe a strap on.

🅸 🆁🅴🅼🅰🅸🅽 (Horror/High Casual)

Either today or tomorrow I'll have a chary up who gets killed within my first post of this do : ^ )

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@Aquaknight All I can say is that your character is like a moth to the flame... and that flame is known as the characters section.... to put it straight, accepted.

@Mercurial To be frank, the Substitution seems a bit... iffy, at least from my end. Sure the cooldown is a few seconds, but how many seconds is a few? Few to the point where it can be spammed? Or something that allows for more that enough time to properly react and counter?

@PatrickDrummer Uh, what color does her name relate to or make you think of off the top of your head if any? Also the semblance is just basically speed, right? That's what I got from it. If I'm incorrect and it is basically controlling time in a way, then I would implore you to rework/reword her semblance or at the very least come up with a new one.

@Scarifar Like Drummers, what color does their name relate to or makes you think of? Other than that he seems ok for the most part.

So those are the people I've reviewed so far! I'll try to find some time tomorrow to finish off everyone else. If it looks like I skipped anyone, I haven't! Anyways, night.