@Lauder
Storywise, everything is fine except for her title as Jörmungandr. The real Jörmungandr is currently being controlled by a GM so that's prohibited. Furthermore, for her Soul Consumption, can you describe exactly what kind of power souls give her. Is is a physical boost, an elemental ability like her heat powers, etc.
Aside from those points, I see nothing wrong with her. Edit them and she's fine by me. Await the others' opinion.
Storywise, everything is fine except for her title as Jörmungandr. The real Jörmungandr is currently being controlled by a GM so that's prohibited. Furthermore, for her Soul Consumption, can you describe exactly what kind of power souls give her. Is is a physical boost, an elemental ability like her heat powers, etc.
Aside from those points, I see nothing wrong with her. Edit them and she's fine by me. Await the others' opinion.


