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Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

@1Charak2

Fine by me. Wait for what @KoL says.

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

@Gardevoiran

Fine by me. Await @KoL’s opinion.

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

@1Charak2

With her original form “lost” to her, does that mean she’s always transformed? Is her Emblem and her D.Arm one and the same? I’m not sure how to feel about that so just make them separate for now.

The constitutions to what she can summon with her D.Arm are very vague since anything can technically be used as a weapon. Saying that it must be classified as one feels like potential for debating what is and isn’t a weapon so I suggest putting better phrasing and making it more clear. Right now it’s too vague.

Her magic also needs to be clarified since technically any Magical Girl can avoid death so long as their Emblem isn’t involved.

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

@Gardevoiran

The healing doesn’t much make sense for her current state. She can be a healing light girl in the past, but it wouldn’t remain post corruption.

The strength and defense buffs seem random and out of place without an explanation to why she can use them. Is it her magic? Her D.Arm? That said, her Fleshweaving seems fine enough. Is there a limit to how many creations she can make?

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

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For the longest time, the only spatial awareness Chiaki had was of the steps placed in front of her, boots clicking against the ground. There was also Rania, a shadowy presence in the miasma of darkness that surrounded Chiakia’s vision. Only when they were joined by two much weaker shadows did she stop in place, still staring forward. Even as Chie made motion for her and was stopped by her partner, the former Detention Club President ignored the newcomers.

It lasted up until Chie made it clear she wanted to talk, scooting around the former Code Keeper to smirk at her directly. Both clad in their magical outfits, Chiaki stared down the redhead with an unblinking gaze. However, her vision seemed distant, as if she was looking at something just past Chie’s core. Or perhaps, someone. “If you want to talk to me, do it in person Touka,” she said directly to Chie’s face. “Don’t send your puppet to do it for you. I taught you better than that.”

That said, her eyes flickered back directly onto Chie’s face. It was clear the vessel had a mind of its own, or what could constitute for intelligence. “What we do here is none of your business. If your creator won’t listen, then maybe you will.” Once again Chiaki made to move forward and brush past Chie stiffly. It was clear she was going to pursue her goal regardless but in case Chie had ideas of following she added, “Take another step and I’ll be leaving your toy in pieces, Touka.”

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Neo Sorairo

@Feisty-Pants

We are currently seeing if we have an open spot. We'll let you know when we've determined that.

Neo Sorairo

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The still very much alive Invader snarled in rough pain from its untimely defeat. Its body, split into two, thrashed against the grassed ground and sent droplets of its alien blood scattered among the greenery. Clearly it was still hellbent on fighting, but it wouldn’t be given a chance. The crimson monolith that was Tian-Gui made sure of that. He ended the creature’s life permanently with a healthy dosing of powerful flames. The creature had been reduced to charred metal and crumbling goops of black in no time. Incinerated.

While the other teams were conversing with one another, they would all hear Lieutenant Isoshima’s orders on the intercoms. A minute more and Subaru was offering free portal trips back to base without walking, her drone hovering over the students. Each student had done well enough in fighting to survive the encounter for the most part. Much like Lieutenant Isoshima had said, their actions were to be commended. But it could have been better, and this difference was what separated life from untimely demise.

As the others began to head back to base, R.R. and Riyame stood a bit away from them. The red-headed Striker was shuffling nervously from one foot to the other, her eyes cast towards the ground. “Er, hey, so I didn’t mean to fucking ditch. I just got super fucking excited and, uh…please don’t be mad Riyame...” Her teammate held a blank expression and even raised her arm up. R.R. instantly flinched with shut eyes…only to find Riyame’s hand on her head.

“That doesn’t matter R.R. What matters is that you’re alright,” said the Gunner. Riyame smiled as she patted the crown of R.R.’s head before she motioned towards Subaru’s portals. “Come on, we should be heading with them. And I’m sure a certain someone is worried about you too.”

“Eh? Eh!?! No way, no fucking way Reiki was worrying about me!” said R.R. as she followed her partner excitedly. She looked at the Gunner with too wide eyes and it took all of Riyama’s self-control not to giggle at the sight.

“Hmm, why don’t you ask them yourself?” Riyama shut off her comm links to avoid the barbed retort that would eventually come from their Linker. Soon enough both girls were at the base; in no time, all of them would be. Team Chaotix carefully excused themselves from the younger students to brief in private while the rest of the Psychers would come to eventually gather around Lieutenant Isoshima.

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Neo Sorairo

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“Can someone fucking decide their shit already-oof!!” Hearing the intercoms between the Psychers revealed nothing but a bunch of blah blah idly disguised as “strategy”. And R.R. was the unfortunate soul exposed to such chatter. Her verbal complaint had earned her a heavy landing from Lucia, of which she barely caught in her metal claws. Skipping in place, it took all her balance to keep standing upright before depositing Lucia. No sooner could she make a retort about it did Lucia move away to defend the Gunners and Linkers.

“Ugh, for fuck’s sake, just hit the fucking thing until it dies. I wanna rip it, rip it, rip it!” Doing more than a bit of grumbling, she bounded up next to the other Striker with claws ready, already hating her sidelined job as the defense position. Though in the case of everyone’s planning, it was dearly needed. Both Hiro and Kuni came into agreement of cornering the Invader in one place and then smashing it with whatever power they could all exert at once. With gunfire coming from Dee and steady healing provided by Hiro, the odds seemed in their favor at last.

Indeed, the Big One snarled as its metallic pelt was rained down with the drone’s attacks. Its machine gun turrets pointed up to the sky to shoot the tool down, only to have more gunfire sting it from its side. Shots from Mila’s gun and Riyame’s pistols kept up the pressure, the Big One’s tail firing off energy blasts at random towards the two Gunners. Assaulted on all sides, it was all but an assurance for Tian Gui’s continued attacks.

A metallic snarl echoed from the beast’s layered gullet, legs too slow to bound away from the shining behemoth of flaming justice. All it could do was forcibly bring up its shield yet again, the rising barrier shooting upwards. Only this time it was much slower than before, a sign that it had failed to fully recharge. What resulted was Tian Gui’s blows connecting with the barrier’s surface, shattering it on impact and triggering the same counter explosions of light. The force of this one was significantly less potent than the last, sending Tian Gui flying back with less momentum. Likewise, the Big One was slammed back just as well into one of the abandoned building walls.

Well, that was one way to pin it down. Scrambling on its side like a wounded animal, the creature’s turrets and tail had both stopped firing for a few seconds. It was plenty of time for Yui’s insane plane to be concocted and invoked, Rin-Rin buffing up the Striker while Mavis launched her forward with her shield. Like a red Oni of ancient lore, Yui was shot forward in full vengeance. Barely standing on all fours once again, the Big One roared and tried to raise its shield prematurely a second time.

Yet it was too late, pain spiking through its head as Yui’s blade stabbed into its eye socket. The metallic snarls became harsh, grinding screeches while purplish fluids scattered drops a plenty on the forest floor; so frantic was the Big One’s head shaking as it tried to wrench the blade out. Before it could comprehend what more was to happen, its legs were lifted above the ground, body spun like a wet flop of flesh before launched into the air.

As it plummeted back to the earth like the Invaders of old long ago, Yui’s final swing would bring with it speed and absolute power. Driven into the ground with impossible weight of metal, the small Striker would slice down and completely bisect the Invader. Spouts of more purple fluids shot out from inhuman organs mixed with metal, the Big One screeching in alien pain as its two halves wriggled amongst a pool of its own blood. Defeated.

“Holy shit, I want her on my team!” came R.R’s enthusiastic call from the display.

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Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

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“Answers? You have eyes, don’t you. Look around and find your answers there.” Touka went back to her lunch. She wasn’t going to entertain the notion of conversing with an idiotic light girl. Clearly there was no one injured, student or Magical Girl. Yet. She didn’t need to answer Allegra’s equally stupid final question because Ayumu gave her the truth. Touka raised an eye to hear she had encountered this light girl earlier but didn’t pay it much mind.

“Is that right.” Hearing Ayumu’s explanation, Touka turned her piercing stare right back onto the light girl. “Well, you seem like you have half a head on your shoulders. You’re a smart girl, right? Smart enough to know you shouldn’t be poking wild animals set loose.” Touka grinned, baring shark-like teeth before Allegra. “Or you can decide to side with us. We’re much friendlier than the crowd you’re running with.”

As she spoke, there was a sudden surge of negativity that passed through the entire classroom. To the ordinary student, it was only a quick wave of rising heat, assuming they had no demons of their own. To the Magical Girls, especially the dark ones, it was indication of Ami’s power fluctuating. For Touka, it pulsed right above her and she snapped her gaze at the ceiling. “Tch. Holy bitch,” she spat, zeroing in on Aegis. Another surge of hatred sparked and wafted over, snaking to Chie’s location. The only reason she didn’t get up right then and there was because she sensed another dark presence in the school.

Even the Mascot noticed it, a red fat <.<! expression bleating on its televised face. Dropped by Aegis, it landed on its paws before bounding up Ami’s arm and resting on her shoulder. There it would stand perched, turning its head downwards towards the school they were standing atop of. The negative presence was moving, unseen by humans; no doubt it was a Magical Girl. Or perhaps, the sister Aegis was looking for.

The answer would be found out by the two slackers. As Kanbaru and Chie were having their play playing hooky during lunch, the dark aura came closer and closer to the nurse’s office. Passing by there door, there was a dark-cloaked figure. Fully transformed, Chiaki was invisible much like her fellow Magical Girls. As she passed by the nurse’s office, she gave neither girl a glance, carrying with her darkness incarnate.

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Neo Sorairo

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“I could ask you the same thing Mavis. On both fronts.” Riyame kept firing shots into the crowd of Invaders, but soon enough the targets had dispersed. It left her enough time to pass a comment towards the other girl, but not before Mavis was leaping off to be a hero again. She held back a sigh, noting someone trying to get a message through on the general comm links. It sounded like…another girl and before she could answer back, she saw Team Novae arrive on the scene.

Plus R.R. The redhead was straggling a little, caught off guard by Lucia’s rallying charge into war, but there she was all the same. However, Team Chaotix would have to meet up later; now there only lay just Psychers and the Big One. On all sides, the different teams were beginning their attack. While Raphel and Hiro were conducting a plan with Mavis, lending healing support to their allies on the frontline, the more offensive Psychers had begun their assault.

Beefed up explosives came from Falk’s direction, powered by Rin-Rin’s enhanced capabilities. Likewise, physical strikes came from the heavens as Tian-Gui and Lucia both delivered attacks from the air. The Big One halted firing in Mila’s direction, bringing its tail reeling towards its body. Its slits for eyes glowed just briefly before the barrage of attacks landed.

Falk’s bombs would hit first, making direct contact and sending a plume of energy spreading out from its explosion. It would do nothing to inhibit the visions of Lucia and Tian-Gui as they dived in immediately after, slamming into something large and dense from their moves. Yet as the cloud of dispersed energy cleared for all to see, the Psychers would find their target had other tricks for it to rely on as well.

A translucent barrier surrounded the Big One, gleaming right back at Tian-Gui, Lucia, and even Mavis, held by the Invader’s metallic paws. If the creature could smirk it would have because soon the shield collapsed upon itself, leaving the two Strikers nothing to hold them in the air. Not that it mattered because flickers of light revealed the dispersing shield were tiny explosions, each one rippling right back into the three Strikers.

From the force of Falk’s bomb and their own strikes, the result of the collapsing shield explosion would send both flying away forcibly. The Big One snarled, eyes fading lightly before it began to fire its machine-gun and laser tail at random. Was the shield on a time limit? Either way, Tian-Gui and Lucia were airborne again, this time in the opposite direction.

“Holy shit!” R.R. said, scrambling where she was to catch one of them. It was only natural since one of them was hurling right at her like a bullet. As for Mavis, she too was sent hurling away. Like a missile, she would land roughly near Team Yui Gang’s position, albeit worse for wear.

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