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Try 2, this one should be better (I hope).

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Attempt two of Cucaniensis

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And another round.

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@Tuujaimaa for Máthair-Amaidí


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Lauder, Oraculum hasn't had the chance to give me his thoughts on your sheet yet, so it hasn't been reviewed. Unfortunately I don't think he or I will be doing anything on RPGuild for Christmas, so you'll probably have to just wait until the 26th. In the meantime I'll give you some quick and informal feedback: I like what you're going for and most of the character ideas, but for the dying words of some tired of great seer, those parts at the beginning were pretty long-winded and filled with what seemed like an unreasonably big amount of information. In Christmas terms, the present was good, but the wrapping was quite sloppy and it bordered closer to a description (as compared to a narration) than we would've liked; you know, the point of the sheet's weird format with the myth is to challenge you to 'show us, don't tell us'.

Merry Christmas everyone, and hopefully when we reconvene in a day or two the IC will be sprung into action! I already have a solid idea for an opening post.
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Here's my new character! I worked long and hard on it!


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Next round of reviews.

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More serious reviews should be along soon, hopefully even today; Oraculum's finished most of the batch already. And the IC can probably start either today or tomorrow depending upon how quickly I can iron out a post.
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Here you go, you scamps.

@Lauder for Batuul (How do you pronounce that? Battle? Lol, you made an Amazonian warlord named Battle?) god, i HOPE she is



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Withdrawn.


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And this one's done too.

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Any room for another late joiner?
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Any room for another late joiner?


Certainly, and happy new year! You wouldn’t even be that late because we’ve only just started the IC and several of us have yet to post. I’ll PM you a link to our discord server.
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Something something something JUSTICE.

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I guess my whipping boy Ora can catch a break.

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there's a Portus Cruor flavour post, now may it never be proofread.
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Imma pull a cliffhanger. End my post on Tarr'kash reveal as I've already stretched the damn thing out long enough.
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Posted. Will I edit this?



No.
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I unfortunately seem to have run out of time for this, and as such will have to be withdrawing. Thank you for your consideration, and good luck with your future writings!

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I unfortunately seem to have run out of time for this, and as such will have to be withdrawing. Thank you for your consideration, and good luck with your future writings!

@Cyclone@Oraculum


Sad to see you go. Thanks for the kind words, and should you find yourself with more time on your hands we’d love to take you back.
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