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Nice to meet you Princess! I'm doing pretty well - been a while since I've been on the forums. ^_^ I don't mind compromising at all! Of course it's your guy's world and story I'm entering into, so I came with the expectation of working it out together, with the assumption the idea might be fitting!

My communication can be sometimes choppy - not on purpose mind you - but sometimes I don't always have the words to properly relay my thoughts. With the rift, you and I are on the same exact page... I had meant that as she dived into the lake, she was caught by the rift from this particular elf who then gives her the sword and then mysteriously vanishes (I'm a sucker for mysterious beginnings). When she comes back out of the lake, she is in Avalia.

To clear up, "the weapon acts as a catalyst for a magic befitting the blade", I had only meant that.. in truth.. I wasn't sure what magic would be most suited for her. I imagine her using the blade itself to channel the magic (for example, if it was lightning, she could imbue the sword with lightning or point it and shoot a bolt). This is probably where I need some help. I tend to like water a lot, but I'm a fan of fire and air too. ^_^


Yes you can totally do that with the weapon. All that is fine. Just how would the elf who summoned her disappear? Monster? Drowning? A part of the story you know but we don't? It can be left unknown to your character of course.
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Yes you can totally do that with the weapon. All that is fine. Just how would the elf who summoned her disappear? Monster? Drowning? A part of the story you know but we don't? It can be left unknown to your character of course.


Well, part of the reason for going this route was the similarity to Excalibur (though obviously not that)... in being that maybe the sword is something of legend or myth. How the elf disappears, as far as I'm concerned my character has no idea where she went to. That can be left at that or something that can be introduced later in the story, I think. What are your thoughts?
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Well, part of the reason for going this route was the similarity to Excalibur (though obviously not that)... in being that maybe the sword is something of legend or myth. How the elf disappears, as far as I'm concerned my character has no idea where she went to. That can be left at that or something that can be introduced later in the story, I think. What are your thoughts?


I think that sounds fine. If there is anything a little too off when you make your CS, we'll let you know. I PMed you a discord link if you want to have access to some resources and to chat with the other RPers
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Hey I'm interested in this RP and I have a few ideas for characters. I want to know what is slots are still open?
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Hey I'm interested in this RP and I have a few ideas for characters. I want to know what is slots are still open?


We do have slots open there is a lot of Demi-humans, Light elves, Humans but we are lacking in the rest especially orcs. We also have a lot of Demon NPCs I added for later RP reasons. I am open to hearing your ideas that are already in your head though.
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Hey I'm interested in this RP and I have a few ideas for characters. I want to know what is slots are still open?


Hey Dragonpiece, you can also click the character tab and click the characters hider. There you can see how many of each species we have.

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I see that there is some openings for orcs and dwarfs. Do you mind if I put a bid in for an orc?
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@dragonpiece you should @ them to make sure they see it sooner.
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I see that there is some openings for orcs and dwarfs. Do you mind if I put a bid in for an orc?


We have quite a lot of room for orcs. That would be great.
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Out of curiosity Are half-breeds a thing or nah? I want to play a Half Winter Fairy-Half Human. Also, from the way the Orcs are structured there seems to be space for ritual magic in the world. Is that so?

If I can't do the half-breed thing that's cool too.
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Well, I ended up making my half-breed anyways....so here it is.



Oh, and yes, I am aware that if I get to play this character that she is an evil character and will most likely get killed. I'll be coming into the RP with that understanding and I won't be upset when her time finally comes.
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Well, I ended up making my half-breed anyways....so here it is.



Oh, and yes, I am aware that if I get to play this character that she is an evil character and will most likely get killed. I'll be coming into the RP with that understanding and I won't be upset when her time finally comes.


Hi there,

Thank you for your time, effort, and interest. c:
It is nice to meet you.

Some issues here. Feel free to shoot any questions

- No Half-breeds --> Make her a winter fairy. Please refer to the first page of OOC, the second post of all the species or here:
avalia.fandom.com/wiki/Winter_Fairies

- Humans have not been here for a very, very long time.

- Winter Elves do not exist.

- Fairies cannot do orc rituals. No necromancy.

- A 26-year-old cannot have a 10 in magic. Please make her an 8.

- Winter fairies do not have Hydrokinesis.

We will reject this character for now unless these changes can be made as well as the following necessity.
This is not personal; it is to your benefit that both you and I know you can keep up with the material so we just want to be 100% sure.

In order to prove you've thoroughly understand the story here, please read the following and surmise in a few sentences:







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Ok, thank you for taken the time to read through my character. I was already aware of the fact that she prolly wouldn't come to fruition as I was almost sure someone else would've already ask about half-breeds. Also, any mentions of winter elves would have been a mental typo and were referring to winter faeries. (I was probably thinking something along the lines of Faeries-Fae-Elves and making a stupid mental jump while writing.) Also, practically everything you said that was wrong, was due to the half-breed nature anyways so that would've just solved it. And I'm gonna scrap her from this RP as I don't like massively reworking characters. I'm just gonna make a new one. Oh, and don't worry about me taking any critiques as personal. They are critiques after all.

Now the summaries.
1) That's the main setting info at the beginning of the OOC. It basically tells us how the world of Avalia is related to ours, and where a large number of our myths come from. It also tells us why we no longer have creatures from mythology popping up due to the dark elves. Basically dark elves are being angsty and bad, the light elves and faeries are freaking out. The Orcs seem to currently be oblivious and I assume the dwarves don't generally care as the conflict hasn't yet touched their homes. But, the light elves are going 'Oh Shit!' and started summoning humans to help fight off the dark elves.

That I did read before making a character. Also, if you can put in lore wise how long ago they actually started that process, that'd be pretty dope.

Anyways, gonna be truthful didn't read the other two before making a character. I don't think either part was in the OOC and I didn't plan to read the IC unless I got a character a-ok'ed.

2) Well, as it says at the top, the villians are introducing themselves. In the most stick-up-the-arse way they can. (Not saying the writer is a pretentious arse, just the characters) One of them goes all dementor and kisses the rat dude. The other is rightfully disgusted and instead decides to shout at his enemies and goes 'Ha! I'm your enemy!' Which is very foolish because now he has a target on his back. And this all happened because they got all uppity about the light elves being uppity and summoning humans. Also, the villians are full of themselves and no doubt they think their existence is a gift. I got that from them calling themselves the twin-headed dragon.

3) XD. This one sounds like a weird beach resort advert for spring break at the beginning and is all like 'Come see the once in a lifetime event of humans! Also, we did it over there but it wasn't as good.

Oh, also if this ends up sounded rude, that was not the intention. I have been told that I just kinda write that way when I'm writing from my perspective.
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Ok, thank you for taken the time to read through my character. I was already aware of the fact that she prolly wouldn't come to fruition as I was almost sure someone else would've already ask about half-breeds. Also, any mentions of winter elves would have been a mental typo and were referring to winter faeries. (I was probably thinking something along the lines of Faeries-Fae-Elves and making a stupid mental jump while writing.) Also, practically everything you said that was wrong, was due to the half-breed nature anyways so that would've just solved it. And I'm gonna scrap her from this RP as I don't like massively reworking characters. I'm just gonna make a new one. Oh, and don't worry about me taking any critiques as personal. They are critiques after all.

Now the summaries.
1) That's the main setting info at the beginning of the OOC. It basically tells us how the world of Avalia is related to ours, and where a large number of our myths come from. It also tells us why we no longer have creatures from mythology popping up due to the dark elves. Basically dark elves are being angsty and bad, the light elves and faeries are freaking out. The Orcs seem to currently be oblivious and I assume the dwarves don't generally care as the conflict hasn't yet touched their homes. But, the light elves are going 'Oh Shit!' and started summoning humans to help fight off the dark elves.

That I did read before making a character. Also, if you can put in lore wise how long ago they actually started that process, that'd be pretty dope.

Anyways, gonna be truthful didn't read the other two before making a character. I don't think either part was in the OOC and I didn't plan to read the IC unless I got a character a-ok'ed.

2) Well, as it says at the top, the villians are introducing themselves. In the most stick-up-the-arse way they can. (Not saying the writer is a pretentious arse, just the characters) One of them goes all dementor and kisses the rat dude. The other is rightfully disgusted and instead decides to shout at his enemies and goes 'Ha! I'm your enemy!' Which is very foolish because now he has a target on his back. And this all happened because they got all uppity about the light elves being uppity and summoning humans. Also, the villians are full of themselves and no doubt they think their existence is a gift. I got that from them calling themselves the twin-headed dragon.

3) XD. This one sounds like a weird beach resort advert for spring break at the beginning and is all like 'Come see the once in a lifetime event of humans! Also, we did it over there but it wasn't as good.

Oh, also if this ends up sounded rude, that was not the intention. I have been told that I just kinda write that way when I'm writing from my perspective.


Thank you WolfHorns for all your effort and reading. The IC posts I gave you were not required; I asked you to read them in order to give you a better idea of the current state and to help you understand what's happening. I usually ask people after they get accepted to read those two posts to understand the circumstance.

Unfortunately, the other GMs and I do not feel this would be a great fit going forward as it does not feel like the important plot points were noted in your statements. This roleplay is heavy reading at times and it is a vital factor in going forward that the players are not skimming, missing points, and are thoroughly reading others' posts.

Best of luck to your future endeavors and have a great Sunday!

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This is not a character submission. Just some background on Astra because of how active she is. Plus, why not?



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