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Fate/Eternum

@ghastlyInc: Overall not bad, but a couple things of note:

He really shouldn't have Mana Burst. That's not found in just anyone, you're generally something other than purely human if you have it in some way.

Far From Rome doesn't quite work given that staging ground is based on fame and country of origin, it'll have an effect no matter who you are, it's just some Servants have bigger "spheres of influence" then others.

Finally, Gabinai Contract is basically just expending a command seal on an order, so I'd advise either rewriting or removing it.

Fate/aberrant destiny

@Crusader Lord: Accepted.

The Nameless City — Invite Only!

Konpaku Youmu

The small, silvery-haired girl nodded, clutching the note firmly in one hand as she lowered it. There was no way they could delay any longer. Youmu began to proceed away from the chest, tucking the note into a pocket as she did. She didn't want to leave behind the last words of the one who had been turned into such a terrible creature.

"I can move through water fine," she asserted, glancing back over her shoulder as she walked, "I'll clear the distance in a single breath."

Perhaps it wasn't time to brag, but Youmu was trying to focus on the task at hand and not on her own anger, no matter how much it was fueling her actions. And even enraged, she was still a proud member of the Konpaku family.

@KoL@PKMNB0Y

Fate/aberrant destiny

@PKMNB0Y: Accepted.

Fate/aberrant destiny

@Reflection: That's being sorted out.

@KoL: Accepted.

The Nameless City — Invite Only!

The entire front half of the beast that Hibiki had punched seemed to crumple like a tin can full of tomato sauce, winding up with the bakc half collapsed into a pile of red mush at the bottom of the crater the impact had left. The shockwave was sufficient to knock the beast that had crawled up the wall down onto its back, leaving it dazed, and the other beast had been completely stunned, easy pickings for Zeke's swift decapitating blow.

Aside from the completely dazed beast, the alleyway was quite still. The pile of mutilated bodies was considerably terrible, but aside from that nothing else seemed any more out of the ordinary then any other area in the town thus far. There was nothing that could be done for the dead, many of them had been torn apart beyond all recognition. But the living were still possible to rescue.

At the moment, it was possible to see beyond the alleyway and to the other side, even through the fog and late-day sun. It looked somewhat familiar. Perhaps that was an area that had been shown in the video?

@PKMNB0Y@Raineh Daze@RoleplayerRoxas

Fate/aberrant destiny

@Reflection: The enemy team is going to be NPCs. Sorry. ^^;

Fate/aberrant destiny

@Crusader Lord: Accepted.

@1Charak2: Accepted.

@Anza: Accepted.

Fate/Eternum

Saber - Arturia Pendragon

Arturia had urged her Master to go quickly. Still dressed in the suit from work, she had desired to waste as little time as possible. Indeed, it was impossible to deny the fact that this was in large part due to the competitive nature of the King of Knights. She wanted to go to the Arena as soon as possible. To test her mettle, her considerable prowess on combat, against her opponent. An honorable clash of weapons before an audience. Ever since she saw her knights participating in such a clash, she was eager to do so herself. There was no hiding it, and no point in denying it. The petite Saber was incredibly eager to get to the arena and start combat.

And so, at the first possible moment, almost dragging her Master with her, the small blonde girl in a suit appeared at the arena. She strode proudly in, the very symbol of knightliness even without her armor on, without her blade revealed. She desired deeply to show her prowess, deeply to honor her opponent by clashing with them, and deeply, deeply, to win.

Perhaps the King of Knights was a little too competitive.

@PKMNB0Y@Raineh Daze@KoL

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Mihama Nanako

Slowly the girl's eyes opened.

Her mind was foggy, swimming. As she placed one hand to her head, slowly blinking, she felt almost as if she was not inside her own body. As this dazed sensation steadily cleared, the girl began to perceive her surroundings, and remember just what had occurred the other day.

... How long had she been asleep...?

Nanako blinked, stretching weakly. Her body still ached...

As further memories came flooding back to her, she recalled the other events as well.

The men who had been killed by that awful shadow...

... Melt...

Meltryllis... there was no way that she...

Nanako placed her head in her hands. But before she could beat herself up once more over how she had ruined everything, the girl's stomach growled.

Ah! She hadn't eaten a single thing for an entire day! Before anything else, that was an emergency that had to be solved!

Getting to her feet, the brunette hurried to the kitchen(at least as fast as someone suffering from not eating for a whole day could manage), flinging open the fridge as quickly as she could. But instead of being greeted with the sight of anything edible...

There was nothing...

"... Oh... oh no..." she half-murmured to herself. Nanako had no choice now. She had to leave. She had to go out and get food.

The next few moments were spent rushing through her morning routine(as much as she could manage), showering and getting dressed before collecting her bag and hurrying out the door. There was no way she could even trying and think of anything on an empty stomach!

@PKMNB0Y

Chronicles of a Lost War

Cute little kitten!?

That... no! She was a demigod! One of the four pillars of Aphei! She wasn't anything like that! Cheeks flushed deeply red, Sylphie squirmed. How could she be blamed for thinking of anything like that when Izel said something so suggestive?! How... how dare she say things like that! How could she say things like that?! Practically burning with embarrassment, Sylphie was very quick to step away the moment she was released, clearing her throat as she did.

It was time to focus on what needed to be done. What she desired to do. In spite of her embarrassment at Izel's teasing, that tingling sensation up her spine, the excitement running through her body, throbbing through every inch of her tiny frame, was still present. It had been far, far too long since she last punished the wicked. Those who deserved judgement being brought to them.

She raised her right hand. A ring of golden light spread from her palm, then began to drift away. Once again, the hilt of her enormous sword materialized, followed by the thick, razor sharp blade.

Lifting it was totally effortless to her.

"Now... it's time," Sylphie said, her blush having completely faded(she wanted to leave that embarrassing display behind as quickly as possible), looking back over her shoulder and grinning at the others, "Let's go!

With that, she was off. Walking, rather than running, as quickly as she could. Her senses reached out, the sort of senses only a demigod of righteous vengeance possessed, almost tasting, smelling the air to sense wicked hearts and evil intent.

These bandits would be crushed, for the sake of the townfolk. For those orphaned children.

@Rune_Alchemist@PKMNB0Y@Raineh Daze@Crimson Paladin@Lugubrious