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Dead Gods Dream: A post-apocalyptic divine action-adventure RP

@ERode: Thank you, and sorry that things didn't work out.

Dead Gods Dream: A post-apocalyptic divine action-adventure RP

@ERode: Well, the primary points of overlap are the specific notes about conquest-as-sex and the war focus. Additionally, they have similar methods of avoiding injury, as well as a focus on sex as part of an ability set. I'm not saying only one deity can be into sex, but lewd as an actual part of the domain is something that probably shouldn't be repeated twice in a cast of this size.

I also think he's a bit overtuned for the beginning of the RP, at least as far as my judgement went no-one went quite that far in their own bios in terms of offensive capabilities as well as metaphysical ones. While the players are definitely going to be powerful by dint of their nature as deities, I think his ability to interact with concepts and ignore damage entirely is a little too much.

With the acceptance of @Martian's edited bio, the RP is full, but I still thought it would be really inappropriate not to explain my concerns, especially given the effort put into the bio in the first place.

Dead Gods Dream: A post-apocalyptic divine action-adventure RP

@ERode: Hmmm.

While I appreciate the amount of work that went into this bio quite a bit, I'm a little concerned that he overlaps a bit too much with @Raineh Daze's character. Given the cast size and the nature of the characters being played I want everyone to be pretty divergent from one another, so I kind of feel like two deities based around both conflict and multiple meanings of the word conquest is a bit much.

@Martian: Since the backstory was my only issue here, accepted.

Dead Gods Dream: A post-apocalyptic divine action-adventure RP

@Click This: Accepted. Really nifty choice of domain and abilities!

Dungeon Clearer! A Fantasy Adventurer RP

While the surroundings looked distinctly holy, it was likely that anyone with any sensitivity to the matter would realize something else about the former holy site: It felt distinctly empty. There was none of the warmth, no familiar sensation of entering a temple to the goddess. Such a feeling was nearly completely lacking.

There was nothing.

Further exploration inside the buried temple would reveal carved bones, and that many of the old benches had been broken down and hacked apart as if to use for wood.

It became quite likely there were not only undead dwelling down here. The carved bones, as well, would seem somewhat familiar to anyone with any experience tangling with goblins.

If the creatures were still present could not currently be confirmed, but the damage to the benches seemed rather fresh, and the discarded carved bone at least indicated they were almost certainly present at some point or another.

The only way to be certain was to keep searching.

@Raineh Daze@Pyromania99@Rune_Alchemist@Zoey Boey@Crimson Paladin

Dead Gods Dream: A post-apocalyptic divine action-adventure RP

@Martian: The only thing here is really that I want you to make his origins more vague.

Dead Gods Dream: A post-apocalyptic divine action-adventure RP

@1Charak2: Accepted.

@Raineh Daze: Accepted.

Two more slots remain!

Dungeon Clearer! A Fantasy Adventurer RP

Shoot I completely forgot I was distracted all day.

Sorry, I'll try to get something up tonight or earlier tomorrow. My bad!

Dead Gods Dream: A post-apocalyptic divine action-adventure RP

@ActRaiserTheReturned, @ScreenAcne: I'm afraid neither of these really fit the vision I had for the RP, the first appearing to just be a Thundercats shoutout and the second being a bit too abstract, as well as not really accounting for the fact the gods were intended to have died on the same day ten thousand years ago.

Dungeon Clearer! A Fantasy Adventurer RP

Reply will be going up tomorrow!