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Ashley:

The quibble I have is her moveset. I dont mind her moves being "Shoot with a rifle", "SHoot with a Deagle", and "Get more ammo for both" if you dont, but a common rule with tournaments is "No non-ki infused attacks". I'm not sure if your character is the kind to really care, but that would be a thing they would have to contend with later on.



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Vikkar:
Im fine with Vikkar's back story and fighting style. You have no issues from me.

As for his moveset, Im with Savo here. As worded several of his attacks would just flat out not work against characters that are robotic or have a radically different anatomy than a normal human. He would benefit from rewording his attacks to some explanation that would allow him to use these attacks on such characters. However if you are fine with that, or are willing to accept those as a Thing, I am fine with that. Just be aware of that.

My other big worry is about his armor. You mention it's as strong as titanium. Did you want that to be just fluff, or are characters with steel weapons going to have a hard time?



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Everything looks good, Welcome Back you freaky dude.

Ivory:
Same thing. Bring the pain!



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Aleksander:

Backstory is fine, and pretty unique for this setting. Thematically pretty different from you first one at least.

My major concern is much like Vikkar, is of that armor. If it is basically bulletproof to modern weapons, how does it fare against the typical character's attack? I'm fine with Mighty Glacier characters, just wary REALLY heard to crack nuts.
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@redbaron1234 Physical blows can still knock Aleksandr back with considerable force, but remember this guy is from the future. The armor is definitely going to be more advanced and so forth. Lasers can still pierce him at high concentrations though so...
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Vikkar:
Im fine with Vikkar's back story and fighting style. You have no issues from me.

As for his moveset, Im with Savo here. As worded several of his attacks would just flat out not work against characters that are robotic or have a radically different anatomy than a normal human. He would benefit from rewording his attacks to some explanation that would allow him to use these attacks on such characters. However if you are fine with that, or are willing to accept those as a Thing, I am fine with that. Just be aware of that.

My other big worry is about his armor. You mention it's as strong as titanium. Did you want that to be just fluff, or are characters with steel weapons going to have a hard time?


Yes, his armor is as strong as titanium, and it will make him resistant to many physical attacks. Also, I would like to keep my moveset the same, since it makes more sense that Vikkar is more well trained to fight Humans or anatomically similar creatures.
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I’ve mulled it over for awhile, and I don’t think I’ll be doing this RP for now. Just considering how much difficulty I had trying to crank out a 4-5 paragraph backstory is a testament that I don’t think I’m necessarily ready for the writing skills that a lot of you guys possess here. That being said, I wish you guys the best and I’ll be avidly watching this develop. Maybe after my my experience as a writer develops I’ll be able to jump in. Best of luck!
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Aleksander:
I was talking with @KaiserElectric and @Savo and we do share the concern about Alek's strong armor. We get that he is from the future and such, but we are worried that as-is he is more or less untouchable with the armor. It sounds like he is already nomad level tough, and now he has advanced power armor on top of that (Feel free to correct me, BTW). We would like it if the armor was nerfed in some way. We came up with the idea that somehow the time travel damaged it, or otherwise it isnt operating at full capacity. Maybe the more active parts of the armor cannot hold it's "battery charge" and thus the protection weakens over the course of a battle, or it simply got damaged and Aleksander isn't in a position to repair it.
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Also, it'll be fun to write Vikkar in such a way that he must adapt his tactics in order to overcome his opponents. Also, I think I read somewhere on here that our characters may be able to recieve changes to their moveset down the line as a way to further develop our characters.
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Behold #3 !

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He's bak.
With like one new move.

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Yes, his armor is as strong as titanium, and it will make him resistant to many physical attacks. Also, I would like to keep my moveset the same, since it makes more sense that Vikkar is more well trained to fight Humans or anatomically similar creatures.


I would be willing to accept that he uses a burst of disruptive ki or some sort of hand wave on top of the pressure point, if that is a good compromise to you. It would let you use the attacks on both human and non-human opponents.

As for his armor, that is a really big worry for me. The fact that he has Nomad Level endurance AND so many counter-moves AND armor on par with tank armor. Im worried that this might be too much, especially since he also has good attack and decent speed. Feel free to correct me, BTW. I am willing to accept that with his sickly nature that the armor is how he gets to 'parity' with other nomads, so to speak.
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You guys still accepting?
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Aleksander:
I was talking with @KaiserElectric and @Savo and we do share the concern about Alek's strong armor. We get that he is from the future and such, but we are worried that as-is he is more or less untouchable with the armor. It sounds like he is already nomad level tough, and now he has advanced power armor on top of that (Feel free to correct me, BTW). We would like it if the armor was nerfed in some way. We came up with the idea that somehow the time travel damaged it, or otherwise it isnt operating at full capacity. Maybe the more active parts of the armor cannot hold it's "battery charge" and thus the protection weakens over the course of a battle, or it simply got damaged and Aleksander isn't in a position to repair it.


That’s not a bad alternative. I can possibly add something similar to that on him.
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Alright, so as opposed to me doing a review right now, I would rather like to post our first two plots. These two will be separate, yet connected. For all accepted people, I want you all to choose where your accepted characters will appear in for right now; I'll get to reviewing the other two to three afterwords. Along with that, I will assume certain characters will be participating in certain plots (i.e. some returners), so correct me if they will not participate in said plots. With that being said... @KaiserElectric@redbaron1234@wxps350@Crosswire@lavulman@Megsychan@dragonmancer@Lmpkio@DracoLunaris@stoneString@A Lowly Wretch@Darkmoon Angel@Pirouette@Dead Cruiser

▻ Clouded
  • A martial arts tournament is being held in Tokyo, with the grand prize money being 20,000,000 in yen. Despite the public turmoil and officials protesting it due to the very recent attack on a tournament in Rio, this event was hosted against most peoples wishes. Some Nomads are reluctant as well, not willing to risk wagering their lives... but for others, they are attracted like moths to a flame. In any case, MAVERICK has also been deployed to the tournament to watch over anything that may threaten the tournament. Surely nothing will happen like last time, right?




▻ Connections
  • In the Hokkaido prefecture of Japan, MAVERICK agents have been stationed out there due to reports of machines similar to those in Rio wandering the landscape. Out of fear or further investigations, they have been set to guard, but not to pursue or engage. Along with that, a job was placed under the NomadicNation by MAVERICK, detailing that they need assistance from Nomads to help smoke these wretches automatons out, and that they would handsomely pay anyone who would respond. However, the problem might be a lot more complex than it might seem at first.






In any other case... @Spiral Powered@GamerXZ aye, we are still taking in new players! Might close up soon since we have gotten a pretty huge crowd here. But for now, you two are welcomed!
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@Savo I’d like to place fafnir in the clouded section
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Callus would be in the Clouded arc.
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Al is probably certain to be in Clouded. You can sign him up for there.
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Clouded.
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Clouded for Bec.
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Karliah is definitely going in clouded
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According to the GMs via DM, Aleksandr has been accepted!

He will be in the Connections Arc.
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Didn't realize I was accepted, thought I was still waiting on @KaiserElectric.

But Clouded for Makoto, for sure.
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