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I'll drop my tentative interest here. I'll read over it later and see if I'll keep up or not.
By the way, I'll post again once I get a few more replies from the other players. I don't want this RP to feel like it's rushed.
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Added two more parts to my previous post. That should give more options for whoever wants to spend time at the Festival. As some of you requested.
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I'm not the only one thinking of CC, am I?


That's just because you don't know of Ruxen, she gives CC a run for her money in the cursing department.
Ahh, nothing beats the smell of tentacle r*pe in the morning...
@KoL Got it, can I assume that Atlanta is withdrawing from the competions then? I think we are about to propose either drinking or target practice.


He may try to change her mind, but Atalanta is not very much up for ridiculing herself. Sinftol's antics kind left a bad taste in the competition issue for the moment.
@Beloss

I would like to inform you that Atalanta got to her spirit form, after the scene. Even though Servants can notice each other in that form, Sinftol is still more or less talking to the wind.
I just feel the worst right now.

Get better on an issue only to fall to the same traps on another while GMing and always putting the stress on your partners, since they have to deal with the aftermath of your hotheadedness.

There's nothing worst than falling for someone's trolling only to annoy/hurt the ones you care for/yourself.
I just noticed something... I'm the only one with a villain like character... Hmmmmm Well then... I guess it's going to be me and thief/"assassin"


Just don't expect to have much to do, if your character doesn't find a way to get in the story, or the others find a way to do so for you.

By the way, your writing still needs a lot of improvements. The verbs are all out of tense, the punctuation is not done so well/the text could be more spaced and, most of all your choice of symbols to indicate things is kinda against the usual writing manners as well.

You either indicate thoughts/whisper by writing it in italic, like this part here, not by putting them between brackets, {like this one}. I mean, English is not my first language, so I don't set a bar too high for the grammatical level of my RPs, but there's somethings that just won't do.

Diana
Current Location: Alt Signia, The Core Room Vent Tunnels

"Oh? You are that maid of the Elicitor, right? What are yo-" If Diana were drinking something right now, she would have spat it all on Hibiki's face, after being told that the Machina somehow got a way to sneak and sabotage the Core room, despite Diana having locked the bulkheads before taking the center plug off. "You did what!?" The dragon girl was kind of dumbfounded.

Either way, the situation needed to be taken with calm and rational thought, "Erm... anyway," Diana cleared her throat and tried to sound cool and in control. "Don't you Machina put self-destruction devices even on your copy machines? Just press the red button and blast them before they blast us, or call them back, I don't know." Diana spoke from experience, given that one of her mission once involved copying the files of an old Machina archive, but somehow the damn copy machine exploded in her face despite not looking like it was bobby trapped.

"Or, if you can't, I guess we should get going. This tunnel here will take us right to the core. I don't know if you can take it, there are some places that are hot enough to melt steel. Oh, I know it!" Diana tapped her mantle, causing an aura of energy shaped like a dragon to envelop Hibiki for a moment, before dissipating, seemingly harmlessly. "I used my mantle's protection, you should be like a true dragon now, the heat will not be a problem, so let's go." The dragon girls leaped back in the tunnel's guiding Hibiki toward the core, where the Killa Kans should be.



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