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Now running: World of Light: The Tale of the Dark Itself
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Forever and ever, amen
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Calling out from Scatman's world
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Called into action - by threats that seem harmonized

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Current GM of World of Light. When it comes to writing, there's nothing I love more than imagination, engagement, and commitment. I'm always open to talk, suggestion, criticism, and collaboration. While I try to be as obliging, helpful, and courteous as possible, I have very little sympathy for ghosts, and anyone who'd like to string me along. Straightforwardness is all I ask for.

Looking for more personal details? I'm just some dude from the American south; software development is my job but games, writing, and trying to help others enjoy life are my passions. Been RPing for over a decade, starting waaaay back with humble beginnings on the Spore forum, so I know a thing or two, though I won't pretend to be an expert. If you're down for some fun, let's make something spectacular together.

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@IceHeart
You guys still accepting?


@IceHeart

Still accepting? XD


I can't really speak for our GM, but as far as I know Iceheart hasn't said that there's any limit to how many people can join. Given the tendency for there to be at least a few players who jump ship forthright, I feel as though you'd be welcome.
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All perfectly fair, and I can acknowledge your criticisms. Allow me to rebut a number of them. The statement of "he should be dead" was not third person omniscient perspective, it was third person limited from Motley's perspective. As such, it was inherently flawed and skewed in his mindset. Additionally, Runch is explicitly stated to be able to take ungodly amounts of punishment in his CS, as well as being from the world of One Piece where that's the sort of thing that happens all the time.

In regards to the catacombs having been moved, fair enough, but the OOC still has them listed in Oldtown so you should update that to avoid future confusion. Not all of us can read every update made by every player to have been able to catch that detail. As for Erina getting there, that was left open ended on purpose to give us both opportunities to describe it in the third round. He had blacked out for a while there (not intended to be a few minutes, more like minimum an hour).

Re: Hamon and air floating, fair enough, If I made that mistake, then I apologize. I didn't see it listed on the Jojo wiki for ripple powers, but I was going with a statement that BC made previously since it was his character. If that breaks the power's canon, then it's my critical research failure and I own that. Also it was my understanding that "lightning mode" was Motley using actual electricity, not his dark ripple, so if what you say is true that my version of events would have him "charred and rotted black by an overwhelming infusion of corrupted hamon" then that was not my understanding of that particular ability at all, which again I'll totally own. Perhaps BC can clarify that himself.

Of course if you don't think any of these points change anything, then that's perfectly fine. I am aware that I went real hard into the "Runch takes massive damage" direction because, well, that's historically what he's done in the stories I've written for him. But this is a different sort of setting and if I have to make peace with that, so be it.


@Lugubrious Actually, there is a scene in the Phantom Blood anime where the Ripple master Dire uses his Ripple to hover in the air, which is explicitly noted by Dio. Don't know if that translates to the manga as well, but it is at least an option for them, albeit not one I see Crue using when his foe can properly fly via cereal expulsion. As for Runch hobbling away, I do have an idea in my head regarding how he could keep fighting in the next round, assuming my version pulls through. No spoilers, though.


Thank you both for the clarification. Typically, I do these as much to get further insight as to offer an opinion. The note I missed on Runch's endurance in particular, as well as forgetting about Lightning Mode, are significant mistakes on my part. As for Dire, I also totally forgot about that floating bit. I went back and checked, and sure enough, he floats.
I'll wait until 1:00, then I'll call it.


I don't think a few extra minutes is going to make a difference. I'll go ahead and call it.

The Fungal Knight vs The Blood Devil Round 3 goes to Roughdragon1. Battle Score is 2-1 for Saria


And with that, I have my first two reviews to offer.

First is for you and @Banana:

It's good to see you both getting serious in this fight. In particular, I'm enjoying longer, more detailed writing from Banana. You'll notice, though, that I cast my vote for Saria in this fight. One of the factors here was characterization. In Roughdragon's piece, he depicted Bonesword pretty well, since Bonesword has only two listed personality traits and alcoholism isn't particularly predictable. Your version, Banana, I felt depicted Saria as a little too coherent and knight-like. In this fight, Saria is frenzied, filled with pain and power. Forming a good amount of full sentences, some of them resolutely taunting and some advisory, kinda downplayed this. In addition, Bonesword's able to match a frenzied, superpowered character blow for blow. Given Saria's state, I can't help but feel like Bonesword should be backed against the wall, really struggling to keep up. You're not utilizing his chloromancy as much as I would have imagined either. In short, you're writing pretty well, but there are some tools at your disposal that I felt you didn't utilize this round.

While you captured my attention by steering the fight into a climax, Rough, the amount of damage dealt to both combatants in your version plus Saria's own feeling of resignation makes me think that Round 4 is going to be short. Of course, that's if you win the next one. If Banana wins the next one, there's still a Round 5 that has to be done, and given both fighters' conditions it makes me a touch incredulous. just something to be aware of.

As for @ProPro and @BCTheEntity:

I suppose it doesn't need to be said that length /= quality? Doing too much in one round can create problems. Both fights were well-written, complete with a couple overlaps which in my book is good because it means people are understanding characters, but there are a few continuity problems. In both versions, Runch takes extreme damage, though even worse in ProPro's version; you outright state that he shouldn't be able to survive such an attack. He's charred and rotted black by an overwhelming infusion of corrupted hamon at point blank, then he blows himself up after getting a jumpstart from the power of friendship. Then he's essentially flushed down a toilet, and wakes up in Actaeon's catacombs (which as Lazo can tell you were retconned to exist at the bottom of the Justice Hub instead) with only "everything hurt something fierce" acknowledging what he just went through. How did Motley fare worse than him in that exchange? How did Erina get down there? Logically, getting grabbed by Motley seems to me like it would be curtains. I'm not trying to be mean here, but I am confused.

Something sort of similar occurs in BC's version. The overall damage Runch takes by the end, hobbling away as a pretty much fine Crue begins his pursuit, speaks to me of a fight winding down or at least about to reach its climax, when in fact if you take this round, you're only one third of the way there. That said, I did find it interesting that you decided to take on the challenge of entering Runch's brain to recall his memories for the purpose of forming a strategy. You did a good job with that.

Because one version leaves me with a better impression, fewer questions and -perhaps ironically- Runch in a logically better condition, my vote goes to BC this round. One bit of advice for both of you: to my knowledge Hamon doesn't allow a user to float in the air, and Runch doesn't make puns. He's more of a funny saying kind of guy. I'm interested to see whether or not anyone agrees with me. If I've made some mistake in my understanding, be sure to let me know.
I'm sorry to bother, but please vote.


Two things: while general encouragement is fine, I really wouldn't call people out on not voting. It's optional. And Deadnaut was kicked for inactivity more than a week ago.
It seems that...

Knight Sylvestre vs God Hand Round 1 goes to me. Battle Score is 1-0 for Cyril


Good round, @GreenGoat! I'm sure the next will be as exciting.

Only half of the players have voted for Fungal Knight vs Blood Devil Round 3. Be sure to get them in soon!
Who knows, maybe some of these negatively aligned players may have a change of heart? Or vice-versa?
Maybe their moral compass has a more influence in their decisions once they realize that the MMO world is now reality?


Both total possibilities.
The Lady in White and Gaben's Chosen

Location: Governance Hub – Art Gallery
@Lazo@Hostile


The impossibly distended landscape around Mountain shocked him, as surely as it would have shocked anyone. A step forward confirmed, in his eyes at least, that the newfound mile between himself and his destination was legitimate. It boggled the mind; what could this be? Some sort of hallucination, perhaps? Through the scope of his sniper rifle, however, one thing could be seen through the faraway door: perched upon the same statue in whose lap the golden arrow rested was a single, unremarkable pigeon, staring at him with an unfathomable intensity in its button eyes as though it knew why he was here. On closer inspection, one thing out of the ordinary could be discerned about it: a scar, somewhat fresh, across its chest. The plumage there exhibited the sort of sheer damage that could only result from clean stab with a sharp instrument.

Meanwhile, Pithy, out of breath yet hellbent on confronting the individual she suspected to be her next enemy, reached the top of the steps. For an instant, she could see the art gallery's entrance hall, the sculptures therein, and a young man in combat gear standing with his back to her. In the air was some sort of odd ripple, like a heatwave. It brushed against her, and the world began to change.

Just as they had for Mountain, her surroundings began to extend at a breakneck pace in a single direction. In mere instants, the building and its interior shrank away into the distance, turning the foot-long top stair of the steps into a walkway many hundreds of yards long. To either side, the plaza stretched as well, but the bordering buildings appeared to have replicated rather than extended.

There wasn't much time to ponder the situation. Right in front of her, less than ten feet away, stood the object of her pursuit. Whether he was cognizant of her approach or not, she couldn't immediately say, but the next instant a familiar and grating voice reached the both of them from the other side of the plaza.

“There can be only one winner.”

CLACK!

“Fight!”

(Wild card: Free Bird & 「SPACE ODDITY」)

Seraphim and Sunspot

Location: Hidden Settlement
@DracoLunaris@floodtalon


Above the Whispering Wood's hidden settlement of cabins and campfires, Oren's drone floated where the morning mists couldn't obscure it. Though privy to the ongoing conversation between the two soon-to-be combatants, in particular the palpable dis-ingenuity of the assassin, he felt sure that no future awaited the odd pairing. Sophia, he'd decided, had been galvanized into a sort of active denial by the traumatic acquisition of her new limb. How else could she imagine that someone in a tournament with the primary purpose of soultaking would ever be her ally? The announcer didn't care to let Jin prevaricate any longer. From what he'd seen, he had enough advantages without being allowed to fish for an instant-kill on his opponent.

Still...this was the bed that Sophia had made. Useful though she had been moments ago in learning more about the airborne armada, and bad as he felt about hanging her out to dry, Oren figured that she might as well lie in it. Even now, she extended her hand to take an obviously-not-suspect drink from her opponent. The foolish, especially the foolish who commanded more than their fair share of power, deserved to be punished by the repercussions of their mistakes—that was something Oren believed. I don't have any stake in who lives or dies, he told himself. I got where I am through wits and cheating. Jin was a trickster too, and one who harbored contempt for the unpleasant and pretentious as deep as he, and probably just as hypocritically too. Yet...

“Enough goofing around already. We want action!” Oren's cheery tone rang from the flying machine, followed by the loud slam of its pincers. Neither of these, however, were free actions; Jin could act as he willed before the signal even came. His advantage, depending on his impulsiveness, was preserved. “Begin!”
@Lugubrious
Selena will need to level up some more and get better equipment before tackling superbeings like that. She's not the kind of person who will jump in without assessing the situation. And she will not go out of her way to attack them either.


That's precisely the sort of thing I'm interested in! Conversations like this:

"Please tell me you're gonna work with us on this. There's only like four of us with a positive alignment, and if we don't do anything, those psychos are gonna wipe out or take control of everything just 'cause they can!"

"What!? Me!? I got a positive alignment 'cause I was friendly and peaceful, not 'cause I went around toppling dictatorships! I'm not gonna get myself killed just when my life is turning around. Even if I did, they're all crazy specc'd for PVP. One of 'em could wipe the floor with us! You do what you want, I'm staying in my village."

"What about when they come for your village? Maybe Azoth decides he doesn't have enough thralls and comes marching around. What then?"

"Then at least I'll have enjoyed some of my time!"

Of course, I'm interested to explore the setting as well. Some kind of inter-group conflict would, with the current roster, not go too well for the 'good guys', if they decide to don that mantle at all knowing what they do about their former friends.
@everyone:
What are some elements of the Overlord setting, you would like to explore during play?
Perhaps some bit of lore that was only mentioned in passing.


Well, after some initial character development on each of our own parts related to the new reality in which they find themselves immersed, I think it'll have to come to pass where the players with positive moral alignment have to come to terms with the fact that, since everyone's no longer just playing a game in which their actions have no real consequences, having evil sadistic supervillians out there to torture, enslave, and destroy the world as they see fit can't be allowed to continue.

In Overlord, as far as I know, Momonga is the only superpowerful player, and because he's quite literally an evil overlord he has free reign to kill 70,000 people with a single spell and summon an eldritch abomination to slaughter even more. In this story, there's going to be both good and bad all-powerfuls; characters like my own, Lexus Dominiel, SpringPuppy, and Selena might have to decide whether to betray their principles and let their peers-turned-megalomaniacs run rampant, or decide to oppose the overwhelming odds.

It could be quite the interesting story; a tale of former friends turned enemies as they embrace their new selves, obliged to be the horrible or heroic beings they set themselves up as, blurring the line between reality and fantasy, a tale of losing one's humanity or perhaps reclaiming it.
Round 3 of Fungal Knight vs Blood Devil looks good to start.

By the way, folks, I never disallowed explanation of why you voted the way you did in a current matchup. That's not to say it's necessary, but I'm sure it'd be constructive. I'm thinking about starting to do it myself.
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