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Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

2. I cannot find any issues with the code for my third picture- if someone could look at the raw code and tell me what I am doing wrong, that would be great.

@blackdragon

Looking at the raw code, I can't find the issue so maybe just put the image through Imgur and use that link.

3. Sickness blasts are a more targeted and stronger version of her aura. Victims start feeling ill and lethargic with weaker attacks, but if she puts more into it, like in the sample, she can cause targets to collapse in exhaustion and even fall unconscious.

@blackdragon

This is fine. Just make sure to add it to her CS.

5. I thought the sample post was just to give you an idea of writing quality.

@blackdragon

While the sample post is to gauge your writing quality, we also want to make sure you have a firm grasp of the RP's universe. That being said, is the sample post canon or just a scenario you made?

Aside from these and the backstory, everything else is good to go. We'll let you know our verdict on the backstory after discussing it.

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@Squee

That's fine then.

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@Rai

It's fine. You can also keep that part since it'll make it interesting when she joins the Detention Club, only to find the no killing policy.

As a note to everyone else, your characters will have already been in the Detention Club for some time when the RP begins. Keep this in mind. Likewise, I may allow newbies to the Club on a case by case basis.

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@blackdragon

First and foremost, I don't see what age she is; unless the sentence in her Magical Girl appearance hider is the age? Also, the image for her current appearance isn't working. Secondly, can you describe the "blasts of sickness" magic she has more clearly? Are they the same effects as her withering aura?

Finally, there are a few issues with her backstory and sample post. I don't think the Detention Club would capture and torture her; the point of Dark Magical Girls is that they turned evil of their own choice. I'll need to discuss this with my Co-GM to see if this will be allowed or not. As for her sample post, some things don't make sense. One of the rules the Detention Club enforces is to not reveal themselves to the public, just as any Magical Girl wouldn't. It makes no sense for her to be robbing a bank and the Detention Club would never order her to.

Consider these points and when you're ready, we'll look at her CS again.

@Squee

I'd like to know, did Sera kill the boy in her backstory? If so that's fine, though keep in mind the Detention Club enforces a no killing policy. Since this happened before she joined, it's allowed. Aside from that to consider, she's fine by me. Await the Co-GM's opinion.

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

I've added Emblems into the CS Skeleton sheet, just beneath the Age section. To those with CSs, please add this into your application.

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@floodtalon

I'll overlook her murdering her father since this is before she joined the Detention Club. Aside from that, she's fine by me. Await for the Co-Gm's opinion.

@Polaris North

Accepted by me. Await for the Co-Gm's opinion.

@Rai

Much like flood, I'll overlook her murdering the men in her backstory since this is before she joined the Detention Club. Other than that, she's accepted by me. Await for the Co-Gm's opinion.

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@Bai Suzhen

Your powers can have vampiric qualities, but no straight up vampires are allowed.

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@blackdragon

Are you doing the image codes correctly?

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Is it possible for twins to be scouted by a mascot at the same time?

@Polaris North

Yes. Though most likely, only one would be chosen.

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Does the mascot actively threaten girls in order to get them to join?

@blackdragon

No. Mascots offer them the choice of becoming Magical Girls.