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Did the same as Melo, changed Kanza's pic to be more inline with the art style of everyone else.

Edit: And appearance changed slightly.
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Alright, finally done and ready for review!

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A Goddess of the Sun, and a God of the stars?!
Oh Voriskimaar is gunna have a field day when he finds these two.
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Hello everyone! Quick update to say that I'm back on this today and my schedule's pretty free from now on, sorry for the inconvenience <3
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@MaeYay glad you're back! ^_^
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@Mae No problemo, glad to have you back!
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@Write@Lord Zee I've worked through alot of sheets today with Melo so I hope you will forgive me. I'll be getting to Persephone and Thran tommorrow evening. You are by no means forgotten, I have some stuff I have to set up tonight for some irl stuff and it's currently midnight where I am.

But I promise your characters are the first things I will get to when I get home tommorrow :D

@13org You already know but for the sake of propriety, Nanna's accepted :D

@Aewin That was entirely my bad, The Bellcairn info should be up <3 Three simple illusions is perfect.

@MiddleEarthRoze that makes alot more sense! It can definitely wipe away entire bays and stuff like that. I think the wording just caught me offguard :D

Honestly with that clarification it's fine as is, we might even want to buff if a touch now. Since you're dying to use it (literally! :D) it can be more powerful then a regular tsunami :3 I'm very sorry for the confusion on my part.

Unless you want to switch your ultimate ability for boil and toil, in which case we can do something with that :D



Let me know what you think and then I can probably accept Lorena after this set of changes :D

@McHaggis add Dryden up to the CS tab :D! and yeah, considering the slot you put Displaced in I thought 600 meters would be pretty good :3 And I think Greed is a very appropriate domain to add.

@luckofthedraw are you sure you don't want to buff absolute nothingness to include an effect on other immortals or a stronger effect on the surrounding landscape?

@Dusksong Sorry Dusksong, me and Melo have been doing a bit of rebalancing so there will be a few changes to work through. Of course if you want to move things about to keep certain abilities at their current power levels we can do that :D



@Apokalipse ohmygosh that picture is beyond perfect <3

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@Filthy Mudblood love the new appearance <3

There will be options for previous players to keep some of their key relationships if they still want to explore them.


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Vatten Clan @MiddleEarthRoze What colour shall I set the Vatten Clan to?

Ursidae @McHaggis@Apokalipse I was gonna put Ursidae north of the Roamwyns, does that sound about right or do you imagine them further south (or perhaps out east/west on par with another clan, let me know) I was going to show their migration north which probably goes all the way up past Wolfrahg and Craenak.
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@Mae Just letting you know I'm making a new clan with my new Charry, his sheet ought to be finished soon ^_^
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@13org actually reviewing the sheet in the CS tab there are a few more small skill ammendments as I believe there are problems again with two skills in one slot. I don't think we've talked through some of them?

I'll go over them properly tommorrow.
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@Mae Hey no problem! I can wait.
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@Mae

As far as Persephone goes, I'm always willing to wait on you guys so don't worry about it.

Okay so let's start with Faela our favourite 'we need to edit that' sheet.




Phew, can't wait to hear about Persephone and hear back from anything I might've messed up. My responses are all in italics!
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@13org actually reviewing the sheet in the CS tab there are a few more small skill ammendments as I believe there are problems again with two skills in one slot. I don't think we've talked through some of them?

I'll go over them properly tommorrow.


Yeah. It was a formatting error. Already fixed it.
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@Mae

I've adjusted the wording for her curse mark and added that section in her formative moments about how she ended up cursed.

I'm interpreting her ruthlessness as a survival skill that helps her push forward in the face of adversity, is that correct? Yes, that is precisely correct.

Can you clarify what this ability does a bit more, I'm having problems imagining the end effect:
Honor Guides Me In a clash between adversaries Huitzilipochtli will stand by the side of the honorable one and will extend her guidance to her charge in the moment of most dire need. I was imagining it as a sort of a minor luck buff... Evade a blow, hit the right spot, don't step on poo

My Honor Is My Shield: With this ability Huitzilipochtli can deflect a single moderate or weak physical attack from one source, the physical attack deflected cannot be fatal or maiming in nature. This cannot be used on the same person for another twenty minutes. I thought that other effect might be too OP

Your Burden Shall Be Mine: Can you specify a little bit more, do you mean when a person makes a selfless act towards another, Huitzilipochtli removes any suffering related to that? Yes.

Know The Joy Of Sacrifice Huitzilipochtli: Is this just a joy increase or does it boost people's awareness/senses as well? The purest joy of the sacrifice brings with it a boost of awareness. Let's say one knows they will be sacrificing themselves. They'll lose a limb, their life, etc. The joy in this sacrifice boosts their awareness.

Healing Gift - you'll probably get a buff to this once all characters are in (so I can better compare the heals that people have in this slot so it's a good balance for the cost) but don't worry about that for now. Yes, please, don't confound my brain with numbers

My Life For Yours: Is this her life for another person's or is she ressing one person by killing another? No, no. No killing. One willing person offers their full life for the life of someone who just died or is dying. She can offer hers as well, just not for her starkissed. For another random human. She is simply the one to facilitate the trade and revive the targeted individual. The one doing the sacrifice would be committing suicide in the vain of her domain.



Since there were no notes about the clan, can I assume it's accepted
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@Mae Ah... okeydokey, was mixing something up with a previous post. I understand now. For the Abs. Nothingness buff I think that the mass willpower drain would probably be the best addition to that skill.
- mass amnesia would, in a sense, lessen the emotional impact that amnesia had on his bonded partner.
- wounding immortals is not all that bad, however, nothing is not necessarily physical, plus the lore has vodahil feeding of other immortals when they lived (in?) him, which I think translates better to a willpower drain, then wounds.
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@Lord Zee Onto Thran, sorry for the wait!


Gah, I'm still a bit behind but should be able to catch up with you two @luckofthedraw@ihinka tommorrow <3

Also I'd like to go through the sheets again soon and check where everyone is at with the changes and what they'd like to discuss :D
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@Mae Made all the changes but one, since I had some questions.

For Kenzie's "The Elements," you had:
The Elements: Switch with the 3:1 position and pick one element to manipulate.
What does that mean? Like abilities 1 and 3? Or switch the 1 and 3 in the cost, thirteen?? (probably not the latter, but that's what I thought of first and gut impression is that I'm getting something wrong 0_0")

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@Mae Made all the changes but one, since I had some questions.

For Kenzie's "The Elements," you had:
<Snipped quote> What does that mean? Like abilities 1 and 3? Or switch the 1 and 3 in the cost, thirteen?? (probably not the latter, but that's what I thought of first and gut impression is that I'm getting something wrong 0_0")

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3:1 means your seventh ability slot (The way we note it is the ability:potency, so in this case the third ability, first potency). And then to limit it to one element. The free manipulation of three elements is way beyond what any of the other abilities in similar slots allow, even 3:2 slots.

An announcement: Narcissa's/Ylonia's 2:2 (fifth ability) has been changed. Mae has given consent for this.
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@MaeYey, another place to stalk
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