@Conscripts: Alright, I think that revision looks good.
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STATUS: I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography. 4 yrs ago
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I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
4 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
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I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
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As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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@LuckyBlackCat: Accepted.
@Pitsuji: You're in luck, you're my next acceptance!
I'll be ideally wrapping up acceptances by the weekend!
I'll be ideally wrapping up acceptances by the weekend!
@Conscripts: Ah sorry got a talk in with my co-GMs, and ultimately we agreed he needs to have done a bit more to earn his spot in the knights? I had meant to post this the other day and it slipped my mind, I'm sorry. ^^;
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Oh, good, someone had come to help her. She wasn't used to the body of a teenaged girl, and hauling off the unconscious boy had been far more difficult then she'd thought. But with some assistance, she'd be able to get him to the Nurse's office without hurting hi-
Oh.
The moment her eyes fell upon her assistant, Anne realized precisely who it was she was looking at. There was no mistaking him. No denying it. Of all the people who had come to her aid, it had to be one of them. Not just one of them, but this one.
In the end, she supposed it made sense. Helping someone in need would totally attract the attention of somebody like him.
But that didn't make it better. That didn't help in the least.
If glimpsing von Afah wasn't bad enough, she'd just run headlong into the Crown Prince himself.
She could practically feel sweat dripping from her forehead her lips shut firmly as she vibrated in place slightly.
What did she do? How did she respond? She couldn't trip any flags, she couldn't! She didn't want to start heading down anyone any routes at all! What did she say?!
"HAAAH!"
... Probably not that.
Clearing her throat and trying to stop her head from swimming so much(not to mention screaming suddenly in the middle of the courtyard was embarrassing), Anne tried to compose herself.
Act normal.
Act natural.
Treat it as a passing meeting and move on.
That's all she had to do.
"L-let's... hurry to the nurse's office, then...!"
@PKMNB0Y@MagusDream
Oh.
The moment her eyes fell upon her assistant, Anne realized precisely who it was she was looking at. There was no mistaking him. No denying it. Of all the people who had come to her aid, it had to be one of them. Not just one of them, but this one.
In the end, she supposed it made sense. Helping someone in need would totally attract the attention of somebody like him.
But that didn't make it better. That didn't help in the least.
If glimpsing von Afah wasn't bad enough, she'd just run headlong into the Crown Prince himself.
She could practically feel sweat dripping from her forehead her lips shut firmly as she vibrated in place slightly.
What did she do? How did she respond? She couldn't trip any flags, she couldn't! She didn't want to start heading down anyone any routes at all! What did she say?!
"HAAAH!"
... Probably not that.
Clearing her throat and trying to stop her head from swimming so much(not to mention screaming suddenly in the middle of the courtyard was embarrassing), Anne tried to compose herself.
Act normal.
Act natural.
Treat it as a passing meeting and move on.
That's all she had to do.
"L-let's... hurry to the nurse's office, then...!"
@PKMNB0Y@MagusDream
@AThousandCurses: Yep, go ahead!
Hey, sorry for the delay! The holidays got in the way and I'm feeling a bit under the weather.
But let's get started on those acceptances:
@AThousandCurses: Yuichi is accepted!
@DarckLeon: Kazama is accepted!
But let's get started on those acceptances:
@AThousandCurses: Yuichi is accepted!
@DarckLeon: Kazama is accepted!
@Conscripts: Sorry, took a bit over the holidays. Just want to chat with my co-GMs before we make the final call.
The ball was bustling. People were everywhere. The girls talking with Sir Gerard. Lady Veilena, briefly eyeing Velbrance as she prepared to speak. The First Princess, excitedly approaching two of the three living founding Knights. The grim visage of Haelstadt observing the ball from the sidelines.
Fanilly opened her mouth. She was going to greet Veilena, and Dame Serenity.
But then there was a voice in her ear.
It was a little girl's.
"Ahead of the First Princess. Look now."
"Ah...?"
Her eyes travelled swiftly across ball, and widened when they fell upon something that shouldn't have been there.
A hooded figure, exceptionally small, a short crossbow in one hand, leather and cloth in dark colors covering her body. Almost-gleaming yellow eyes beneath the good. Somehow no-one around her seemed to notice as one delicate hand trained the crossbow on First Princess Elisandre-
Fanilly was already turning, running. She didn't understand what was happening, how the small assassin had managed to get so far without even a single person seeing her. But she had to be stopped, she had to!
"Stop her! Stop her now...!"
The trigger was pulled.
The bolt flew.
But it never reached its target.
It had stopped, one delicate, elegant hand gripping it and having ended its trajectory instantly.
Lilette's stern gaze fell upon the would-be Assassin, as she lowered her hand. Crimson dripped from her palm, but still she held fast on the bolt.
"Iron Roses, to arms!" cried Fanilly, "Stop her! Do not let the assassin escape!"
An attempted assassination of one of the royal family, here, now? So brazenly in the middle of the ball? But how was it that no-one had seen the assailant until now? These questions raced through the Knight-Captain's mind.
But that was why the assassin had to be captured, not killed.
"BAR THE EXITS!" bellowed Sir Adeforth's voice over the crowds, "What in the blazes were you doing!? Bar them now! Now!"
The crown knights were moving as swiftly as possible to bar any potential routes of escape. But the small assassin was moving, too, swiftly, even after having frozen in shock at being discovered she was darting away as quickly as possible.
"Haelstadt!" came Veilena's voice as well, "Get ahead of her!"
The towering black knight as moving now, as well.
They had to stop the assassin. They had to capture her.
The had to know what was going on...!
@Creative Chaos@Raineh Daze@Rune_Alchemist@Saiyan@The Otter@Crimson Paladin@Psychic Loser@Richard Horthy@VahkiDane@Psyker Landshark@HereComesTheSnow
Fanilly opened her mouth. She was going to greet Veilena, and Dame Serenity.
But then there was a voice in her ear.
It was a little girl's.
"Ahead of the First Princess. Look now."
"Ah...?"
Her eyes travelled swiftly across ball, and widened when they fell upon something that shouldn't have been there.
A hooded figure, exceptionally small, a short crossbow in one hand, leather and cloth in dark colors covering her body. Almost-gleaming yellow eyes beneath the good. Somehow no-one around her seemed to notice as one delicate hand trained the crossbow on First Princess Elisandre-
Fanilly was already turning, running. She didn't understand what was happening, how the small assassin had managed to get so far without even a single person seeing her. But she had to be stopped, she had to!
"Stop her! Stop her now...!"
The trigger was pulled.
The bolt flew.
But it never reached its target.
It had stopped, one delicate, elegant hand gripping it and having ended its trajectory instantly.
Lilette's stern gaze fell upon the would-be Assassin, as she lowered her hand. Crimson dripped from her palm, but still she held fast on the bolt.
"Iron Roses, to arms!" cried Fanilly, "Stop her! Do not let the assassin escape!"
An attempted assassination of one of the royal family, here, now? So brazenly in the middle of the ball? But how was it that no-one had seen the assailant until now? These questions raced through the Knight-Captain's mind.
But that was why the assassin had to be captured, not killed.
"BAR THE EXITS!" bellowed Sir Adeforth's voice over the crowds, "What in the blazes were you doing!? Bar them now! Now!"
The crown knights were moving as swiftly as possible to bar any potential routes of escape. But the small assassin was moving, too, swiftly, even after having frozen in shock at being discovered she was darting away as quickly as possible.
"Haelstadt!" came Veilena's voice as well, "Get ahead of her!"
The towering black knight as moving now, as well.
They had to stop the assassin. They had to capture her.
The had to know what was going on...!
@Creative Chaos@Raineh Daze@Rune_Alchemist@Saiyan@The Otter@Crimson Paladin@Psychic Loser@Richard Horthy@VahkiDane@Psyker Landshark@HereComesTheSnow
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