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This seems like a cool idea. I've tried my share of slice of life (especially Yuri) before, but more girl's love can never be enough, so take her a CS for two very important archetypes, twins and exotic foreign exchange students:


Having a certain semblance of structure to the post would be the ideal, so it's harder to achieve with a single paragraph, but not impossible. In truth two would be the idea length, I think.

What I want to avoid the most of all are really walls of text, since those are supposed to be simple CSs, for a relatively old style fantasy RP, thus I don't need piles of info other then what might really come to use in the game.

Either way, I'll review the presented CSs later.

Eclipse Princess
Current Location: Alt Signia, Outer Ramparts

"What!?" Juno stood there with eyes wide in shock after witnessing her taunt have the contrary effect of what she wanted. "Why did you... Demons aren't supposed to cry over that kind of stuff." The spatial valkyrie complained to to the air as Henry was driven through the mountainside by her kick, still despairing after the goods Juno destroyed before the Gate was closed.

So distracted was she, with the idea that she could have actually hurt someone in a way other than reducing them to an atomized mist, that Juno didn't even noticed the incoming fist from Grafdaka until it was too late. "Gahh!" Juno spat, blood mixed with saliva, as she was sucker punched against toughest part of Alt Signia, the main gate, having one of her lungs perforated by a broken rib. One of the few rare times when Juno was injured that badly, to say the truth.

"Pff! Now's not the time to think if I did something bad or not. First, I gotta take down that tin can- Pff! For Cely..." Juno cleared the blood off her lips with the back of her hand and summoned her sword again, now that things just got serious. She tried to get back to her feet, on to tumble back in pain; her leg had been neatly broken in two places along the calf. To stand up and keep fighting, Juno used her powers to bind her own broken limb, forcing it back in function, though it didn't made even a bit of the pain go away, in fact, Juno was gritting her teeth for the first time in a long while.

However, before she could teleport above Graf and pay him back for the punch, Torag's voice rang on her head, saying that the battle was over. "Are you serious?" Juno said in a mix of defiance and dejection. "At least let me take down that... thing. It won't stop fighting now that the Creatio took over him, but I can- Argh... make it stop! No one else has the power to-" Juno stopped talking as she was forced to her knee by the pain, resting her back against the heavy gate, as the snake-like binds of force she summoned tried to force her leg to keep on going past the point it was usable.


Diana
Current Location: Alt Signia, The Forge

"What? Is this battle going to end like this, I mean, for once no one has to die painfully or be tortured?" Diana almost didn't believed what had just transpired before her eyes, a truce like that was an unheard feat in as long as she has been part of the Nexus' war, yet somehow, Torag did it.

The dragon girl didn't had much that she could do to add to the already resolved conflict and, the less she did to rekindle the flames of conflict, the better. Thus, Diana let Torag drag her into his protection without protest. Nevertheless, something still bugged Diana whenever she crossed gazes with Bastion, something that Diana felt that she should have said a lot of time ago. There was no time better than now, anyway.

"I'm sorry, Bastion, for not being able to save you earlier. Now they... they turned you into a weapon of war as well." Diana faced the scorched stones of Alt Signia's forges as she apologized, not looking at Bastion while doing so. "I would have... done it, but Mis- I mean, that vampire's powers are too strong. Anyway, I'm sorry." After letting out the confession she waited this much to do, Diana's shoulders slumped forward, especially when she almost caught herself saying the name of their captor with anything but hatred. Really, has Victoire's taint been so strong as to still leave a lasting mark on Diana, after all that happened?



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Alrighty if that is the case then I will post without ShadowKingman, that okay with everyone?


If Shadow said it's ok, I don't see why not?

Thania E. Langston
Current Location: Dust City, Rooftops

"Hold it, ma'am! I wasn't... ogling you. I already have my hands full with a single old cougar, I don't need another one." Thania bolted straight up when she was so unjustly accused of looking up the skirt of a woman she didn't even knew and, not only that but also, pointed to the local house-of-ill-repute. Seriously, what did that woman thought that Thania were, a dirty old man like the kind that overcrowded Dust and the rest of the Frontier?

Well, anyway, her order was had arrived and, when Thania was about to pick it up, she spotted the very same woman sizing her up. Needless to say, Thania puffed her cheeks, red with boiling feelings, in face of such an outrage. "Hey ya, miss! Who's the one ogling now? I was thinking of offering my services to you, but I guess you really want another thing, don't yo-" Thania declaration was abruptly cut by the saloon bursting to life, after the faint cry of someone yelling something about a reward in this city of gold-crazed vultures reached Thania's ears. "Oh, great, what's it now?" Thania went to look out of a window.

A few gunshots, yells, general chaos and Morrigan being a lazy ass as usual, later...

"Send that to my room like usual, old man, I gotta a job to do." Thania shouted to the saloon master, as she dashed to the back alley. When she passed close to the bar, Thania snatched a bottle of the cheapest whiskey she could find, throwing a coin to the old master "Keep the change!" Thania said after juggling the heavy bottle, catching it by the neck.

Once in the alley, Thania quickly found her way to the nearest rooftop that had a stair close to it and then stopped to observe and try to spot the thief, still juggling the bottle, to get a good feel of its weight. As a rule of thumb, cheap drinks are sold in the toughest bottles, it was not uncommon to use one of these as a club on a bar fight, which is more or less what Thania had in mind as she spotted the criminal and began to trail him as silently as she could.


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