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6 yrs ago
Current Do you get to the Cloud District very often? Oh, what am I saying, of course you don't.
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8 yrs ago
Man, Mahz is still on his really long vacation, huh!
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9 yrs ago
Better not leave me hanging like Sayori.
10 yrs ago
This is the way the world ends This is the way the world ends This is the way the world ends Not with a bang but a 훌 쩍
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Bio

Got nothing to say here, sooooo yeah.

I'm a bookworm, gamer, and obviously roleplayer since I'm on this site :P

Anyways, those are a few things that I'll say about myself... for now. Maybe I'll update this a little more in the future.

Ciao!

Most Recent Posts

@Pirouette

Alright, so... personally, I was hoping to keep the information over who discovered the stuff about genetics being the reason confined to the scientists of Palladium Academy... but eh, I can stretch the lore a bit, so no need to alter that. However, I am curious about a few things.

For starters, why did her powers only manifest after death? It should of manifested from the ages of 5 - 10. If it doesn't manifest during this time, then the child won't have powers, period. If it has to do with the mutagen, then it doesn't make any sense, considering the age when it usually pops up... which meant there was no way. That's the main problem I have with her backstory. If the mutagen changed the gene to the on phase, I prefer if we hold off on technology that allows the gene to go from off to on for now.

Anyways, the other two covered my thoughts on you (but I am glad you actually covered the part where you had her be interviewed due to her bloodlust... also, four years to master her powers? That seems a little strange.), so I'm going to move on for now.

@Dead Cruiser

Ok, first, let me say something about the way you formatted the personality section. You used the optional format instead of the required format. So I'm going to ask you to fix that. If you don't know what the proper format is, then here's my characters personality.

Personality:
- Caring
- Finicky
- Flirty
- Friendly
- Hardworking
- Perfectionist
- Relaxed
- Self-centered
- Serious
- Stubborn


Next, the backstory... so he has essentially evaded being caught as an alien, therefore won't have a handler that watches over him. There is one tiny detail that makes this whole thing fall apart.

"Despite appearing to be some form of pinkish grub in his baby photos..."

People working at ATLAS aren't stupid. And if they knew there was something wrong with him from the get go, they would probably take all precaution since he's an alien. They don't know what they are capable of and would take every step they could to ensure nothing goes wrong I believe. And if he tries the hypnosis stuff on them, they could always call up superpowered humans who have resistance to that sort of thing (i.e. people with mental powers) due to the training they've had over the years. He's also going to need a handler that can handle his hypnosis and other things, so you may want to rework the backstory.

Also, both gms have covered my thoughts on it too. I'll expand on this further in a second.

@Suku

You did the same thing as Cruiser with the personality section of your app. Follow my example and write your personality like that please.

Backstory seems fine. I do have one major question though. Are her parents superpowered humans? If not, then they would probably get a visit from one of ATLAS' agents first to discuss this sort of thing instead of getting an invite from Palladium Academy. And I just realized something else that needs to be applied to everyone as well. She got a letter of invitation explicitly from Palladium Academy.

There are other academy's owned by ATLAS as well, so please take this post into context when saying they received a letter. They probably received letters from the other academy's if you went down this route, so please take this into context. I'll update the lroe to say that there are four other academy's, making the total amount of academy's owned by ATLAS five.

With her powers, is it plausible that with enough willpower/mental fortitude to resist her song? Just asking.

And @Duoya, I'll get to you in a sec, need to do other things.
Alright, since I'm lazy and was walking the dog (along with other various things beforehand), I'll accept those who I've read so far and get to my review over everyone else in a sec so I can get these three characters the posts they deserve.

@wxps350, @Kiyran I deem your characters...

... good to go. Put them in the cs tab if you could.

Piro, Dead, and Suku. I'll review your sheets soon enough and dissect em... though, I mainly have to type up some questions about Piro's character first, so I'll get on that.
And part of me realized there was some information I probably forgot to include (i.e. that no one would know where Palladium Academy is or that it exists, save for people who attend the school or live on the island, but even then they would only know that it exists... and the fact that ATLAS has multiple operatives out there who either have superpowers or not who keep a look out for potential candidates for one of ATLAS' academies, or superpowered people who seek to use their powers for more selfish reasons.)

I'll get to adding that in. If your character has superpowers, their family would probably be approached by an agent if they were non-powered humans. If they were a part of a superpowered family, then they would probably receive a letter of invitation instead... I think I covered all my ground here.
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Ahhh! Judgement!

*hides behind the refrigerator*


Not even Indiana Jones will save you now.

Also, I think I forgot to mention one thing to you and everyone else. The fact that genetics are tied to superpowers is not public knowledge at the moment. Only some people that are a part of ATLAS and the government will have access to this information. I'll read the rest of your sheet now, but right now, the only problem I have is that he knows that genetics are tied to superpowers.
Even so, I can already feel the tension rising through my computer screen.

... anyways, we, the three gms shall begin to judge ye two and your characters. Beware.
@Savo If we're using a picture alongside written appearance was they rules for what kinda of picture? (Eg. Anime, digital art, real etc)


... oh right, you can't see what I wrote down on the character sheet.

For this one, anime or art will suffice. It also says it on the character coding part of the sheet where the image is supposed to go. Sorry for that.
*pokes head shyly round corner* Hi.


*glomps*

... hoi.
Also, for anyone who might be confused at the full sign and the lack of characters to some degree, this is for people who expressed interest in the interest check. We have literally twenty-one members and three gms... so yeah, that's a whole lotta people.

So yeah, for those in the interest check who made it in before I closed it all, post your characters here! If you didn't express interest, I'll add you to a list of people who I will invite to the roleplay once it's open again. I also added slots, which means not everyone who displayed interest will be getting a spot. If you don't manage to make it, I'll put you onto the list of people to invite to the roleplay if it opens again.

That's all for now, ciao everyone! I've got posts, characters, and information to get down!
Alright, so Duoya, clubs, clubs... I had a list somewhere, but I'll get to you on that because I have something even grander, even more important to announce.

@Angel Eyes, @checkeredsoul, @KaiserElectric, @Fisticuffs, @Duoya, @Kiyran, @Rice Porridge, @FallenTrinity, @Prewiga, @SouffleGirl123, @Atroposer, @Tominas, @Dead Cruiser, @Suku, @Klaykid, @Pirouette, @Captain Marvel, @Lightning, @wxps350, @XxFellsingxX, @Drag

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