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At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
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I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
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Oh god multiple replies at once hopefully my edits patch stuff up.

Not a major update, just detailing that Fanilly isn't just standing there and is trying to recover from her well-intentioned but admittedly foolish move by giving guidance. And taking out a couple bandits.
The man who had engaged Fanilly in the first place was almost immediately killed by Forina, who took the moment to chastise her for her actions. Dully, Fanilly realized it had been foolish to move before trying to see if the man was alive, but... but weren't they also knights of compassion, who helped the innocent? Weren't they...

In her moment of silence, another man leaped from behind the cart. Seeing her distracted, and likely realizing there wasn't much room to run where he had found himself, had managed to mount another attack moments after Forina had changed targets. But Fanilly wasn't completely stunned. She caught his shortsword it swiftly on the edge of her own blade, sliding his weapon along it and forcing it downwards. She'd practiced practically every possible motion with her longsword over and over, and this bandit, while not totally unskilled, was simply not someone who could claim the same thing.

She made her opening, adjusted her grip, and thrust her sword. The leather armor was no match for her blade. Neither was the bandit's torso.

It wasn't the first. It was the second. The second man Fanilly had ever killed.

The blonde girl stepped back, and he let out a gurgle, tumbling sideways.

Fanilly took a deep breath. It was striking her in her heart, for a moment. Even if it wasn't the first... But, they had come here to kill these bandits. Any that surrendered would be taken prisoner, but any that resisted would be killed. They were murderers. They were the type of people who hurt innocents, who had no remorse for their actions, who would kill anyone if it meant making coin.

Just like the first.

These facts in mind, Fanilly readied her bloodstained blade. Around her, the knights were taking initiative, those with poleaxes pushing forward, others taking out the archers in the brush. Tyaethe had rushed to her side swiftly and tended to the injured farmer, as well as cut apart one of the bandits. The sight of a man cut in half before her eyes gave Fanilly a moment of shocked pause, but she swiftly shook her head and tried to recover. She couldn't freeze up. She couldn't let herself be lost in the frantic clash. She had to make up for not realizing how this was a trap. She had to do everything she could. She couldn't be the fool Forina had called her. She had to do everything she could to be the captain that the Iron Rose Knights needed!

Given the bandits were, for the moment, unable to focus largely on her, Fanilly took a moment to take stock of the situation, trying to clear her mind and ignore the hammering of her heart. This was likely not all of the bandits. The first bandit's reaction indicated they weren't expecting the Iron Roses. Therefore...!

"Do not let a single man escape!" cried Fanilly, finally managing to speak, "They cannot alert the camp to our presence!"

Every bandit here had to be killed or captured. If they were not, it was possible they could warn the others, in which case the bandits could prepare further defenses, traps, or flee outright.

"Archers, magi, suppress their crossbowmen!"

The most dangerous bandits among this small force had to be those that were hidden among the forest, using their crossbows to fire unseen. To keep them from injuring, or worse, killing any of her knights, Fanilly knew she had to suppress them in any way possible. She had to keep them from being able to concentrate enough to aim! Even if they didn't know exactly where the bandits were, it would be difficult for them to attack if they were being struck with a hail of arrows themselves. Ah, what else could she order?! She had to give further guidance, she had to think! But everything was happening around her, bandits being slain left and right...

She had to have faith in her knights above all else!

With Tyaethe caring for the man, Fanilly took a swift step forward. Ducking low, she heard something whistle over her head. Shortly afterwards, she heard a pained cry from the same direction.

A man with an axe sprang from behind the tree in front of her. As he swung down, she responded immediately with her parrying dagger, locking the axe's head between the blade and the hilt!

This one came easier, her sword cutting downwards between his shoulder and neck, hacking into his leather armor. The bandit's numbers were dwindling swiftly, and though there were a considerable number still fighting for their lives... there were others wavering, preparing to flee.

Fanilly tore her blade from the dead bandit.

"Do not let them escape!"

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As a bonus, here's one of the two goddesses worshipped by humans on the continent, though she's not as worshipped as Mayon in Thaln she's still part of the religion!

I figured it would be a good idea to sketch up how she looks, though Mayon's more important for this RP(she's coming soon enough).
I'll try and give more time between this update and the next to let people get replies up.
I got too excited and ended up posting, but it still shouldn't be too hard to post an introduction!
The knights who quickly volunteered for the scouting party were a considerable boon. It allowed Fanilly to understand their capabilities, at least to some extent, far more quickly. But the scouting party would wait until after they dismounted. She did want to try and lay out her plan of attacking the bandit camp in more detail, but for the moment it was important to understand what defenses were in place. The bandits themselves were invariably inferior to the knights in equipment and training, but the 'Bandit King' was something of an unknown factor, and it was possible there were some sort of defenses in place that could make an attack more difficult.

Fanilly paused as she listened to some of the concerns(and Tyaethe's rebuttal) voiced by her knights.

While scouting seemed practical, if they moved too slowly, didn't that give the bandits more of an opportunity to prepare, if they did know they were coming? It was strange that the Bandit King had challenged them so directly, but... ah, this was an odd situation. But the Iron Rose Knights wouldn't be cowed by bandits! She didn't want to be an unworthy captain, and when the order had such a history of striking down far more impressive threats then bandits...

Besides, this was Fanilly's duty. She had to carry it out.

As the knights around her spoke, Fanilly thought over what they knew of the bandit raids in her mind. Certainly, a few of the dead men of the King had been killed in methods one would expect. Arrows, blades, axes, spears. But the majority of the dead that had been recovered were slain through far more grisly methods. Whatever weapon had been used against them had not simply killed them, it had cut their bodies to pieces. Many soldiers had been cut entirely in half. Simple fact was that there was someone among the bandits who wielded an enormous weapon capable of doing such incredible damage to even someone wearing armor.

The forest was growing considerably thicker, here.

"It's not unlikely there may be scouts of the bandits, as well, but for the moment it's important to act quickly," Fanilly said, finally, "But the forest has become too thick for horseback, we must dismou-"

She stopped dead as she looked up. Ahead, wheels smashed, caught up against a tree, was a cart. A horse lay dead in front of it, arrows sticking from its side and neck. A man lay on the ground. He wasn't moving.

The Order's duty came to the forefront of Fanilly's mind immediately as she lept from her horse. There was the sound of metal on leather as she drew her longsword in one hand, the blade flashing in the light of the setting sun. Even if this was foolish... if that man was alive...!

The Captain of the Iron Rose Knights sprinted forward without a second thought. Soon she was upon the cart, coming to a halt and kneeling beside the downed man. He was an older man, in his late fifties perhaps, with greying black, short hair and simple clothing. His side was soaked in blood, and there was a gash in his flesh. And yet, he was still breathing, even if he was pale an unconscious.

"... He's still alive!" Fanilly called to the others, looking back over her shoulder, "But he needs aid immediately!"

The man's eyes fluttered open, and fell upon Fanilly's face, then the symbol on her breastplate.

"... You... an... Iron Rose Knight..." he said, weakly, reaching up towards the girl. Her attention returned to him quickly and she took his hand in her own.

"Hold on," she began. His wound was bloody, but if he got medical attention swiftly then he could perhaps survive, "As captain of the Iron Rose Knights, we will get you to safety!"

He weakly shook his head. "L... leave, this is... a trap..."

... A trap...?

Fanilly heard the sound before she saw anything. She released the man's hand, and did the first thing that came to mind, throwing herself to the side, catching herself with her free hand as she stopped and looked up. Three black arrows had buried themselves deep in the wooden cart where she had been moments later. Almost immediately, a hooded man in ragged leather armor sprang out of the downed cart and threw himself at her.

Fanilly threw herself to the side as he swung a shortsword down towards the short girl. His sword hit dirt, but he swung back up just as she drew her dagger and immediately locked his strike up in her guard, a followup strike forcing him back immediately. Just as her training had told her, just as she'd practiced a thousand times or more...!

"Heh," he spat, "Skilled for a little girl, but no use when the other guys get here. What are you doin'-"

His eyes found the symbol on her chestplate, and then his gaze found the other knights. His eyes widened in horror.

"... Th... the Iron Roses?! Oh gods above!"

Perhaps he had known there was a large force approaching. It would have been difficult for him not to, if he had been lying in wait. But it did not appear he realized it was the Iron Rose Knights.

He was hardly alone, however. A considerable number of bandits now emerged from the forest, brandishing shortswords, axes, and a number of other weapons. Not a single one of them appeared unshaken, but perhaps they felt they had little choice but to commit to their trap.

"Iron Roses, to arms!" called Fanilly, raising her sword.

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I can't wait until I can update again, I'm really excited to see how people handle the scenarios ahead!
@Virgil: Evening, yes. By the time we actually reach the camp it will likely be pretty dark.
Got a reply up for now, proper full-scale moving-things-forward update will come when more people get their intros up. Also...

@ghastlyInc: Accepted.
It was a little reassuring to Fanilly to hear that the oldest knight in the order approved of her decision. It was made for a simple reason, that riding horseback into a skirmish in a forest was a poor idea. The horses could easily be tripped up by roots, and render the advantage of cavalry instead into a liability. While Fanilly had never participated in a proper battle, at the same time she had tried to do as much research as possible before being appointed. It was part of her training, just as as her training in swordplay.

Just as...

For a few moments, the sudden bombardment of concerns of several of the short blonde's knights suddenly overwhelmed her. The look in Dame Fiora's eyes, too, seemed especially piercing and difficult to prepare for. But she couldn't falter, not before they even set foot in combat. No matter how her heart beat more quickly in her chest, Fanilly had to ensure she did everything she could. To lead her knights triumphantly into battle, and to leave 'King' Jeremiah's bandits dead or captured. The Artificer Elodie's suggestion was a bit of a shocking one. How could they ever bombard the camp knowing that there was even the slightest chance of killing potential prisoners? There were magi among the order, certainly, but simply firing off spells and hoping... there was no way the Iron Rose Knights could ever do such a thing!

Dame Narcissa's suggestion, however, gave her a good point to jump off from.

"Ah, yes, I..." she paused for a moment, trying to gather her thought before speaking, "Yes. After we have dismounted, sending ahead scouts would be wise. While I believe they do not yet know when we are coming, given their success against the King's men I am certain they must have some sort of defenses in place in case of surprise attack."

Fanilly couldn't falter even for a moment.

"I shall deploy, er..." she paused for a moment. Ah, she didn't even yet know the names of every knight... To be fair, it was difficult to know that even if you had been among their number for a long time, given how many knights there were, but as the new Captain this was just something else that made Fanilly feel self-conscious. "... I will ask for those among us who are the most capable of stealthy observation. They will compose our scouting party."

A small part of her considered the fact that this would help her become more aware of the strengths and weaknesses among her knights, at the very least. The forest was growing thicker, it would not be much longer before their horses would have to be left behind in order to proceed.

"... However, a magical bombardment is absolutely out of the question," Fanilly asserted, doing her best to sound commanding, "There's no way we could possibly risk the potential of harming innocent prisoners they may have taken."

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