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Hey!

Does anyone know when I can expect a response for the character sheet? I have talked with Frettzo and we have a plan for him to first be a soul creature before being born as a demigod in the next age.


Can you elaborate more upon this idea? The origin of your demigod is an integral part for us to evaluate, and I've been waiting to hear about what you came up with.

If you'd rather not spoil it for everybody, you can just PM us three GMs. Maybe put Frettzo in the PM convo to, if you decide to do it.
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Can you elaborate more upon this idea? The origin of your demigod is an integral part for us to evaluate, and I've been waiting to hear about what you came up with.

If you'd rather not spoil it for everybody, you can just PM us three GMs. Maybe put Frettzo in the PM convo to, if you decide to do it.


Ok. I put it in the character sheet I think, but I'll say some more.

The Great Shepherd was first just normal soul ash, but then the soul ash heard the suffering of the first souls, and maybe also because of Li'Kalla's cries and other gods who might have been in some troubling experiences and this caused a soul creature to come together. Nothing powerful, just something that hears the cries for justice and cries of suffering. It can be attracted to Li'Kalla because her suffering is probably very noticeable and it just stays around her. Frettzo and me said in our messages that Li'Kalla probably notices it. Then when Vakk comes to fight with Li'Kalla the soul creature will be near Li'Kalla and some blood will go on it. So he will only becomes a god when Vakk and Li'Kalla confront each other and he gains divine ichor due to the violence, but before that for one post he will be a soul creature that hovers around Li'Kalla.

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@Tal

Sounds all good to me. You've got a pretty good character design and can consider it accepted.

In reviewing your sheet, the general consensus was that your being vague on what justice is actually supposed to be is fine, because you're trying to explore that IC. It looks like you'll have plenty to do and write about between that and creating Ya-Shuur and then in perhaps having him try to ascend to godhood.

BBeast noted that we get an idea of Ya-Shuur's philosophy and values, but not really his temperament or demeanor, or any quirks. Those small details would be nice to have in your sheet, but beyond that, I've got no criticisms of substance.

Well done and welcome aboard!
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I regretfully will have to withdraw from this rp. IRL has really disabled my time and desire to rp. My apologies for any time I have wasted but sadly, it is how it is.

Thank you for the invite and enjoy the story, from the outside its been a fun read.

Yall take care.

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I regretfully will have to withdraw from this rp. IRL has really disabled my time and desire to rp. My apologies for any time I have wasted but sadly, it is how it is.

Thank you for the invite and enjoy the story, from the outside its been a fun read.

Yall take care.


I appreciate the kind words and you letting us know. Best of luck in your endeavors!
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I regretfully will have to withdraw from this rp. IRL has really disabled my time and desire to rp. My apologies for any time I have wasted but sadly, it is how it is.

Thank you for the invite and enjoy the story, from the outside its been a fun read.

Yall take care.


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After several hours I have finished reading the entirety of the OOC and IC. I will begin working on a character sheet for a demigod after I have slept, currently I don't have any particular leanings for portfolio though it will be something that can be used in the current era for a purpose.
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@Kho It is rude to talk about people behind their back, that is why I would like to say I stated why I believe your newest post is objectively the worst thing ever on discord.
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After several hours I have finished reading the entirety of the OOC and IC. I will begin working on a character sheet for a demigod after I have slept, currently I don't have any particular leanings for portfolio though it will be something that can be used in the current era for a purpose.


Hey man, you're a bit farther ahead on the IC than even I am

I'll PM you a link to the Discord; come on there and say hi, and maybe check out the pinned list of portfolio ideas that I put up there.

Also, note that the current era will be transitioning to the Age of Monsters in like 3 days.
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@BBeastWell, sorry for a month of silencing. It is just that something happen in life that required my immediate attention. Anyhow, the problem is solve and everything should be back to its course.

Well, this is what I planned to do with my cult, or religion.

The needs:

Because everything need something in life, I, in turn, could provide them. If they need food, they prey me. If they want weapons, they prey me. If they want wealth and ecstasy, they prey me. And when everything is so easy to gain, just pray and you will be granted, they will grow dependent on me. You hungry? Pray me and you will be full. You are desperate? Call my name and aid will come. Why would you hunt, risked of danger, if you can be full? It lacked excitement? Nonsense. Pray Adam, and your excitement never drain. Why invent, when all needs are satisfied? Why discover, when there are no reason to venture into the dark?

And because of this, the level of dependency would only increase in time. And moreover, the more his people pray, the closer they become Adam.

I separated into 4 stages:
  • Gratitude: You acknowledge that Adam is good, and he is something that you can trust. Maybe that he had saved you. Maybe he had extended a hand when others don’t. Nevertheless, there is this link between you and him, a sacred bond that you cherished.
  • Enthusiast: You acknowledge that Adam is good, and he is something that you can relied on. Your life, your hopes, your sadness, your dream. Just tell him, and he understands. He will respond the way you want, speaks the word you want to hear. And love, do tell, what is better than hearing the sweet voice of someone you trust with your life? Just pray, and that voice will forever be close to you.
  • Madness: You are what you are. You are limited by your lifespan, a horror of creation. To be born is to be destined to die. But you don’t want to die. You want to live, to continue hearing that sweet voice in your ears, feeling that tingling senses when your skin caressed by the wind, and bath in the glorious light known as pride. You pray more and more. Others did not understand what you speak. They call you mad. They see the horror, but they know not what you felt and see. As you pray more and more, you felt something changed inside of you. Something wonderful. Twisted. But wonderful nonetheless.
  • Lost: You are home. You feel the flesh. You hear the voice. You are me. We are one, never to be separated again.


But of course, there are those with extraordinary feats, who are bound to achieve things that the majority can’t. And for this, I separated them into a few stages. And unlike the previous for stage,, who only managed to become a part of Adam, these “Heroes” are meant to be develop into a lesser- Demigod. Called it half-god or god-kins, these beings are stronger and more well-versed than your heroes yet weaker than already born demigod. Although there are those that may be stronger than a newborn demigod, most followed the rules.
  • The devotion path (for those that regard Adam as their true God and devoted everything for Him)
    • Hallow: “Hear his words. Heed his voice. The words I about to speak to you are words that he had spoken. So, cherishes these words as your life. Protects it but not hide it. Worships it but not taints it. And only then, would the words belong to you. “
      • Now, words that you speak are not belong to you but something greater than yourself. As long as you held your god in your heart and mind, yours words held power. It would decimate enemies, carved the lands, heal the wounded. “Fus-ro-dah.”
    • Insidious: “Can’t you feel it, the flame inside of you?”

      • You words inspire men and women. You actions attracted kings and queens. Your thought ignites their sleeping soul, eager to receive the love of God once more. You came to preach in the name of God. And in the name of God, you will always come home with his Disciples.
    • Glory: “Do not fret. Be proud. For before you, in His Name, and in your prayer, I had come.”
      • Unlike others, who are still lost before He came, you had known your destiny. To serve by his side was your duty. Be his protector and his helper in these darkness nights was your oath. Others may regarded you as the weakest of three. But only you know that strength comes not from sword and shield, but by faith and pride. You are His knight. You are His steed. You are, and forever will be, His faithful servant.
    • Herald: “Before you, I bring the news of change. What must come had come. What must pass will pass. And I am that change.”
      • You do not choose to be His servant? How arrogance. But I do suppose that your intention is clear. Rather than hiding behind him, you choose to be his hands. Rather than hearing voice, you raised voices. His family may never like you. But do know, my dear child, act in His name and fear not the tongue of the twisted.


I also did the Rebellion path. But like you said, I would like to reserve it for later on. Of course, I don’t plan to do this all on my own. And if there are changes that you want to make because it is not compatible with the law. Just ping me. My schedule is back to normal so everything should be fine from now on.
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@Scarescrow Welcome back.

It seems that you have solid long-term plans. This is good. However, the IC has moved somewhat since you were last here. The only thing that impacts you is that Anzillu has turned its severed appendage into an Avatar, so that is no longer available as the story of Adam's birth. You will need to renegotiate Adam's parentage and origins.

Further, there are still a few other points I raised in the review that need to be addressed. You need to settle on some abilities. You need to elaborate on the personality. And some of Adam's short-term plans did not quite work, although with mortals getting closer that might be less important.

Submit a revised character sheet and determine the manner of Adam's birth, and we shall review Adam again.
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@Scarescrow if you want Ekon will be your daddy. =P
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@Doll Maker Thanks. So do you want to see the CS first then discuss the way he came to life?
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@Scarescrow Sure. I liked your CS the first time I saw it, but we can go over it in DMs or on discord.
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