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While this goes for everyone (but @Crusader Lord brought it to my attention) I would like you to wait until everyone posts before posting again. Not all of the natives have posted, and some of them could be in the vicinity of your characters. You could also bump into an NPC.

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Fuck, it closed up already? Was thinking about making an app
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@ZekariVoblis Yup, I've got 15 players if I don't count myself and the co-gm, and about 20 characters with the potential of more on the way. Though if a few drop out, I'd be more then happy to let you in. But at the moment we've got a lot of characters moving around.
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Fuck, it closed up already? Was thinking about making an app


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@FamishedPants@Letter Bee You guys posted out of order.

During moments like this, timing is very important, and I don't want too many reactions to happen before I post for the world again. I post I do as the world has this banner in it



So for this next round of actions, I would prefer if Alester and Flame took no actions. We'll just pretend they took their actions after the banner, as nothing happened in that area anyway.
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@BrokenPromise, understood; sorry for acting too quickly. I'll just post as Ashton.
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I may not be able to post tomorrow; I need to rest my brain.
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@ZekariVoblis

Even though we are full, I was willing to give your character a chance because two people seemed like they wanted you in. However, this character falls far below my standards for a few reasons.

She does not really offer anything that isn't already in the RP. we already have a psycho archetype. I'll spare explaining all the reasons why I'm very cautious about accepting such characters, but this already makes "happy psycho" an even harder pass for me. Her fighting style is one that is taken by at least two other characters in the RP. But the biggest reason why the character isn't up to snuff is because of how similar they are to a certain other Re:Zero character. Not just her face claim, but aspects of her personality and fighting style. Surely you can understand how this comes across as an embarrassingly lazy character submission?

I'm going to declare Mikayla rejected. She could work, but would require a massive overhaul to the point where she no longer represented the character you have just presented.

I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt and say this character was made in haste to get into the RP as fast as possible, rather than the work of a hack RPer. You may try again, but I strongly recommend looking at the characters already in the RP so that you can fill a nich that isn't already filled. Also, getting creative and not ripping characters directly from Re: Zero will greatly increase your chances of being accepted.
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@ZekariVoblis

Even though we are full, I was willing to give your character a chance because two people seemed like they wanted you in. However, this character falls far below my standards for a few reasons.

She does not really offer anything that isn't already in the RP. we already have a psycho archetype. I'll spare explaining all the reasons why I'm very cautious about accepting such characters, but this already makes "happy psycho" an even harder pass for me. Her fighting style is one that is taken by at least two other characters in the RP. But the biggest reason why the character isn't up to snuff is because of how similar they are to a certain other Re:Zero character. Not just her face claim, but aspects of her personality and fighting style. Surely you can understand how this comes across as an embarrassingly lazy character submission?

I'm going to declare Mikayla rejected. She could work, but would require a massive overhaul to the point where she no longer represented the character you have just presented.

I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt and say this character was made in haste to get into the RP as fast as possible, rather than the work of a hack RPer. You may try again, but I strongly recommend looking at the characters already in the RP so that you can fill a nich that isn't already filled. Also, getting creative and not ripping characters directly from Re: Zero will greatly increase your chances of being accepted.


Understood, I'll start working on a new character instead of Mikayla. There were a few things I didn't quite realize when making said character so I must not have been paying as much attention as I should have.
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@Cu Chulainn We'll have to discuss the "conditions" of such a powerful DB in private. But I like the character enough to accept them. You may post Sir Charlot "Lotte" Walter in the character tab.
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Christ that took forever

Edit: I know how to use image but for the life of me the links weren't working with it. Also she is not a white clothed Holy woman despite clothes and title. She isn't that powerful. Nor can she predict the future
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That came a day or so later than I wanted, but it's uuuuuuup!

Non-Natives: Your characters remember everything that has transpired, and you may post with your characters having retained this knowlage.

Natives in non-native scenes: Your characters have no idea what the hell happened before the reset, and cannot act upon it's knowledge.

Natives not in Non-native scenes: If you wish, you may continue posting as if there was no reset, so long as it doesn't really interfere or take into account what happened during a non-native scene. As an example, nothing Aer did really relates to the non-natives in any way, so we can pretend all of that already happened since the timing with the resets doesn't really matter.

I'll see about getting a zeroth post up sometime.

Christ that took forever

Edit: I know how to use image but for the life of me the links weren't working with it. Also she is not a white clothed Holy woman despite clothes and title. She isn't that powerful. Nor can she predict the future


I will look at your sheet later, but will try to get it reviewed ASAP.
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Mirt




Age: 55 | Gender: Male | Weight: 225 pounds | Height: 6foot
AffinityNone | Native | Race: Human Northerner


Description
Unbreakable body, unbendable will, yet burdened be a heart weighed down with sorrow enough to still test these unmatched qualities day after day.

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Mirt is elderly, that much is clear any way you look at him, and still his body remains the graceful despite the extra weight piled on in recent years. Training for the holy warriors of his homeland are rigorous and demanding with many often killed in their youth by their fellow practitioners in rare lapses of focus. Despite the added weight gained from many years as a gentle wanderer there is no doubt the skills of his youth have retained their edge. Strong arms bulge like oak trees at his sides and his legs still carry the weight of a falling avalanche behind every strike.
When asked why his impressive gut remains despite the training still regularly done, the reply is often 'Youths today go easier when they think the enemy is fat or old. Doubly so if both!'.

Personality

Mirt carries a weight in his heart and shackles of his mind that impede the once glorious cause he strove to uphold and defend with a ferocity that outshined many of his fellow Warriors when they marched across the frigid plains of Aier'Sun. Beyond its often frozen walls lay beasts big enough to claim lives at their leisure for fun or sport and Mirt had claimed their lives on the regular, their broken bodies used to feed and warm the people of his homeland that could not do so for himself.
It was who he was that demanded the defense of those who could not make do for themselves. His heart was often ridiculed as soft for his mercy in a land where only the strongest could thrive. His wife had been frail, his children had been strong, and his heart had carried their spirits high.

In the clergy itself he was devout in his worship of the holy sun and its infinite warmth. To defy the sacred orders of their righteous ways meant death and Mirt was all too often the one who mete out punishment for thieves, rapists, murderers, stalkers, and the worst betrayers to the faith: Deserters. To reject the teachings was to accept the darkness of the worlds heart into yourself. Misguided hate guided his fists for far too many years.

Recent years, the many long and lonely years after the tragedy that broke him, have created a softer Mirt. Still the kind hearted soul who could and would give everything to see justice through has become a secluded fellow dedicating what is left of his life to seeing another rise from the ashes of their life, and is prepared to protect them at any and all costs. Despite having become a mercenary, there is no more hate left in his wounded old heart.

Class
Mirt is the shield to his allies spear, deflecting endless blows with nothing but his skill and fists. The training of his homeland for the men focused on devastating blows that kill or cripple with the barest effort and his mastery of disarming an enemy or trapping them in a grappling hold is second to none but the First Warrior of Aier'Sun themself!

Bio



Mirt was born to the weakest caste of peoples living within the confines of Aier'Sur, the peasantry. Unfit to fight or forage they were merely the servants of the higher castes of honorable warriors and healers of the realm that prided themselves on their prowess in the night and their fervent worship of the holy texts drilled into them day by day.

A single roll of the bones can make or break your entire lineage, so it is said at the bottom. Mirt had a destiny only 1 in hundreds of thousands could claim. The bones had been rolled, read, and rolled again to be sure that it was no error.
At the age of 8 he had been called by the gods to be Aier'Suns First Warrior.

How he hated those bones then, how he had fought against their prophecies and fortellings when every day of his life young life had been controlled by their incessant clattering upon the stone floors, and how his rage swelled even now when the day that broke him had come from those accursed carvings.

Mirt excelled in his training under the Warrior Clerics, rising to their every challenge with a fierce determination. Perfection was the only thing close to acceptable for one of his future standing and there was no time to formulate his own personality while under the grips of his masters. His mastery of their many grappling techniques quickly distinguishes him as the youngest Warrior Cleric ever born at only 17 and already nearly unbeatable in Aier'Suns heirarchy.
It gnawed at him to be unchallenged and still not free.

Increasingly rebellious, Mirt found allies in the Clergy that aided their future First Warrior in finding that freedom to run and live as he pleased with the sun was high and the many ranking officials still slept as they awaited the night. Ten long years of this secret life did not go unnoticed. At first it had been an acceptance of the next First Warriors right to live his life, but when Mirt became infatuated with a woman of a lower caste it been taken all the more seriously.
The First Warrior could take no wife not of the highest standing in the city or the bones said it would create ruin for his rule. All lies. Mirt defied the bones for the first time in his life and the punishment had been severe in the extreme.
Alyara, the light of his life, was executed. Many other innocents he had dallied, friendly or not, were dealt the same fate. Ordinarily it would have cost Mirt his life too to defy any casting of the bones' many predictions but again the title of First Warrior, a destiny he had begun to hate, spared him. It had been too much to handle. In a fit of rage as the reality of his wasted lifetime sank in and the memory of his beloved still boiled in his heart, an attack on the western wall had transpired. An act of terrorism that had killed a patrol that had included the young daughter of a close ally. The very first person on the road to First Warrior that had ever granted him freedom..
His rage burned like fire as the grievances piled too high. Pushing the ripe age of 43, Mirt sruck back at his jailers. Freedom was his to take but it could never be here, not in the palace, not in the slums, not in the confining walls. It was out on the tundra far away from this place and he took it.

Took it along with the lives of over a dozen Warrior Clerics, and nearly the life of the reigning First Warrior himself. The blow had nearly cost Mirt his own life as the two staggered away bruised and bloody, unwilling to die to the other. With his freedom at last his to choose it would be nearly 7 more years before the mystery of Anyons disappearance, her body never recovered or identified, had been solved.
A vagabond as he was.

Their time travelling was one of purest joy. They went hungry, worked hard, brought healing and harm to those who deserved it, and the laughter they shared spoke of true expression. The sky truly was their limit. Even when their needs of survival turned to mere mercenary work it was always with a code of ethics and reservations attached to it and by the Sun they excelled.

Magic

Life energy: S

Flow: Letter F

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None

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While Mirt was a master of his homelands martial prowess, his many years away from the hardships of the north have softened him tremendously. Still a being to be feared he is nowhere near as powerful as he was at his peak. Where once he claimed to have the strength of 10 men, now it is only 3. Still more than enough to toss you around a room though.
Note: Mirt carries no weapon except for a pair of hand wraps sporting a thick metal plate across the back of his hand.

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Mirt is accepted. you may post him in the character tab.

For Anyon, I've seen better formatted sheets, but this is a lot better than what was submitted last time. however, a few points...

-For a battle caster who can kill a man with two punches, I think her magical powers are really strong at B/B. I also feel that what you wanted to make is not accurately reflected in B/B, as you mention her buffs being short in duration and not lasting the entire battle. I would feel more comfortable if you made her a bit less potent with her magic or in melee. C is a pretty average rank for spellswords, and I would choose an arrangement that reflected that unless you want her to be more support orientated.

-Healing and buff magic actually requires two different magical affinities. Buffs come from yang, and healing magic is water. So it's not really possible for her to do both. However, her DB lets her cast buffs, so it might be worthwhile to make her affinity water, which isn't as common as yang for some reason.

Other than that, looks like she'll be a good character.




Gunna make sure everyone sees the anouncement this time.



So some things have been said on the discord, and I'd just like to put my thoughts on them here where they won't be immediately buried.

While I realize some of you really want to know who the sentinel is, there's no real benefit in trying to figure it out at this time. Or really any time for that matter. The sentinel switch is really just there to ensure there won't be a reset as soon as the first non-native dies. Ideally, any deaths that happen will be pretty close to the sentinel's death time wise, as it's sort of not fun to have to wait weeks for the sentinel to drop dead before you can post again. By the same token, if there was a reset as soon as yuuki died, no one would have realized what their obstacle was until the second reset. so sometimes it is a necessary evil. Regardless, there's no reason for your characters to assume there is a sentinel, that you will return by death a second time, or that there is a trigger for it beyond people dying. While you are free to have your characters act and do however you wish, I will not be forcing a reset every time you intentionally put your character in a hard spot. Especially if it's just so that you can gain some meta knowledge.

Also, I will be giving most of my important announcements via OOC on the forum. This is because I hate doing battle with Discord's word limit. If you want to make sure you don't miss anything, I would subscribe to this topic. I don't genuinely like to ping everyone because I know some people get triggered by that.

I'm also going to recap my last anouncement since some of you missed it.

Non-Natives: Your characters remember everything that has transpired, and you may post with your characters having retained this knowlage.

Natives in non-native scenes: Your characters have no idea what the hell happened before the reset, and cannot act upon it's knowledge.

Natives not in Non-native scenes: If you wish, you may continue posting as if there was no reset, so long as it doesn't interfere or take into account what happened during a non-native scene. As an example, nothing Aer did really relates to the non-natives in any way, so we can pretend all of that already happened since the timing with the resets doesn't really matter.


And with that out of the way, let's see if you can survive a little longer this time, non-natives!

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As I said on Discord, I only have four sentences for Flame right now, so I'll be waiting.
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Some of the non-natives have learned how to cast spells! remember that you need to call your incantation in order to cast them.

@Ryofu

Endurance Increase (Lesser): Hiro's body feels a bit lighter after casting this spell. As a result, he does not tire as easily when running, and he can jump a few feet further and a few inches higher than he normally could. He is unable to cast this spell on anyone but himself.

@FamishedPants

Splash: Alistair can fire a gallon of water out of his palm.

Blind (Lesser): Alistair can point at a nearby target and blind them. This magic is too weak to work on those with a strong affinity with magic, or even a modest affinity with magic.

@Crusader Lord

Dust: Aerith can create a cloud of black dust that fires out of her palm. As the seconds tick by, it expands into a fog, which continues to thin out until it no longer obstructs vision.




In the future (after a time skip) I will be letting players work on what type of spells they have, and I will not require them to list them. Except for the really special ones, but more on that later. But at this stage, all non-natives are rather new to magic, so their first spells won't be very impressive. It's the cost of being the main characters.

as for native spell casting, my policy is if you don't do anything too crazy, you won't get a whole lot of fuss from me.
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