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Current GM of World of Light. When it comes to writing, there's nothing I love more than imagination, engagement, and commitment. I'm always open to talk, suggestion, criticism, and collaboration. While I try to be as obliging, helpful, and courteous as possible, I have very little sympathy for ghosts, and anyone who'd like to string me along. Straightforwardness is all I ask for.

Looking for more personal details? I'm just some dude from the American south; software development is my job but games, writing, and trying to help others enjoy life are my passions. Been RPing for over a decade, starting waaaay back with humble beginnings on the Spore forum, so I know a thing or two, though I won't pretend to be an expert. If you're down for some fun, let's make something spectacular together.

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Lugubrious, reporting for duty! This is going to be a blast.
@Lugubrious Why you no say who proud soul is?
Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
Writing Quality: 9/10.
Story Line Advancement: 7/10 [poor Navy - will its destruction bring about Jvanic Wrath? Will The One By Immortals Altered forgive the one who wounded her so?]
Character Development: 6/10 [his interaction with the natural cat and the unnatural one is fascinating - does it mean that his perception of beauty is physical alone?]
Independence: 6/10
Total: 38/50; 76%; 8 Khookies to Allure

@Inuyasha Don't think I ever told you that we've rebooted this...if you want to join, feel free to say so :)


It's part of the fun. Try and guess who it is. Cyclone threw in his idea already.
The Angelarium

The Hierarchy of Laguna
((For better images, refer to the official book))



The Demonomicon

-in hell, the strong survive, and the strongest rule. Beyond that, there is no semblance of order among chaos. Demons of this book are sorted by their strength.
((for better images, refer to the official books: Infernal Demons, Darkside Bestiary, Devil List






Gilgamesh Database

Gilgamesh is unrelenting in its defense of humanity and humanity’s interests. To do this, it employs what amounts to a private army known as the Reclaimers, but as with any armed force there exists a cream of the crop.




The Charred Citadel

The base of the Firebrands, the agents of the Charred Council. It has numerous facilities, positions, and more to be explored, utilized, and upgraded.
Though he could imagine neither the complexity nor the variety, nor that essential glamour that lay within, of the world that now stretched before him like a scrumptious smorgasbord upon the banquet table, Allure knew beyond the shadow of a doubt that it contained much magnificence for him to savor, and the knowledge made him giddy. With a spring in his step he left the Deepwood behind, his heart soaring with possibility. He marched through the trees, and with his questing eyes scoured the bark of every tree and the surface of every stone. Knotted wood did not excite him, but neither did it incite him to action. He did not, after all, seek to coax the beauty for which he longed from the stage and backdrop where it promised to appear. Nevertheless, he could find an esoteric artistic statement in the rhythmic swish of leaves and the nurturing golden sunlight which filtered through it. Its warmth dotted his face. How divine, he mused, could this luminous treasure be if personified in human form!

From the underbrush a noise caught his attention, and Allure held his breath. The moment of discovery thrilled him: would the living thing soon to cross his way embody the beauty of nature, or its unsightly flaws? He dropped to his knees and stilled himself nearly enough to stop his heart, less by his movement he frighten the approaching creature away. When the beast finally emerged from the billowing leaves, the handsome man could not contain a gasp.

Patterned from muzzle to toe it was, clad in an ostentatious coat of tawny yellow and ebon black. Like the brilliance of the sun between the mask of the canopy, it flaunted its spots, yet paradoxically the harmony of spotted cat and spotty light hid the former from view. Slowly, curiously, the leopard stalked forward. Its every movement belied sinews beneath the gorgeous fur; it moved with a predatory grace and confidence. Allure stretched out his hand, bending his fingers downward like claws. After a moment, the beast began to move in. ”Yes…that’s it,” the man whispered. A gleeful smile played across his lips. ”Come and let me…touch you.” It stopped short a few inched from his fingertips, but Allure did not wait. He reached out, predator to predator, and nestled his hand in the thistle-soft fur on its head.

A quiet, peaceful moment passed. The leopard made a sound of pleasure; the man’s lay apparent on his face. ”You are a beautiful creature,” he crooned. ”Proud, colorful, deadly. Were that you were a woman. I could lose myself to a wild, gorgeous girl with that quiet tenacity and supple grace.” The moment of serenity and unity among two of the most gorgeous things alive persisted a short time longer. Allure gave its ears one final stroke. Then, rising to his full height, he turned away, and the cat departed unchanged.

Scarcely had it gone when a new noise bade Allure twist around. This newcomer, he could tell, shared none of the subtlety of the tawny hunter whose beauty he admired. With a startling abruptness a mass of bluish hair, amorphous and odorous, burst through the foliage. Allure fought fiercely to suppress a violent gag, and failed. It landed next to him in an ungainly pile and tumbled through the long grass for a couple of seconds, forcing the man to press a hand to his face in horror. With his other hand he reached out dramatically, and cried at Navy as it bunched itself up to leap away, ”Vile, disgusting blob! In my most fevered nightmare I could not have imagined that hair, a canvas for fascinating art, could be so sullied! You must allow me to give you a trim!”

So saying, he articulated his fingers into a rigid, flat formation and swiped horizontally. Instantly, Navy flew apart, two wretched blue hairballs rather than one, split perfectly through the middle. Filled with manic drive, Allure began to dance. He span and swung his arms, his balance suitably flawless, and with every turn of his gorgeous body threw another slashing motion Navy’s way. In less than ten seconds, only noisome shreds of the thing remained, and Allure ceased his dance of death with an extravagant poise. “Aha! You are not now so contemptible. You have sacrificed your very life so that I could make my beauty shine; perhaps you were not the basest form of ugliness I’ve encountered thus far.” Gathering himself, he leapt forward to the epicenter of carnage. In a rough circle, about fifteen feet across, the grass –which lay flat, as it, too, had been cut- bore a garish blue stain.

Ahead lay the open savannah, where the land itself assumed myriad forms beneath an endless blanket of grass. Rather daintily, Allure navigated out of the blue splatter, only to hear yet another noise coming from behind. Spinning around in a single hop, he gazed back the way he came and beheld a colossal orange ant. A quizzical look crossed his features as it approached. ”What’s this? An oversized grub thunders toward me…does it seek to strike me down? There is nothing beautiful about idiocy—except its demise.” He raised a finger as if stricken by a profound thought. Patiently waiting, he watched the ant draw closer, but to his confusion it began to slow down. It slid to a colossal stop a few feet away to regard him with black eyes. After a brief pause, Allure curled up his finger and placed it beneath his chin, musing upon the odd behavior as he examined the gleam of brilliant sunlight on its carapace. He smirked. ”Oh-ho! I know why it is you have changed your tune. Though you are grossly engorged, you are attuned to natural life, yes? And you have discovered that I, most perfect Allure, am most perfectly natural, as all beauty is. Perhaps it astounds you, too, that the world is so full of hideousness when beauty is so ingrained in the idea of life.”

Allure performed a backflip, sailed through the air, and landed smoothly upon a large branch on the last Acacia tree before the proper savannah began. The eyes of the giant ant followed him. Shaking his head, Allure lamented, ”Though you’ve perhaps a smidgen of wisdom with you, and intellect bears an ethereal beauty most admirable, I can see no way to redeem your ghastly form…save, of course, one.” He traced a fingertip along the body of the One By Gods Altered, severing in a single stroke the bottom half of all six of its legs. With a thump the huge insect collapsed to flounder among the grass. Its attacker appeared oddly intrigued for a moment before he tilted his head back and laughed, ”Ah, hah hah! Your suffering is exquisite. The smell of your blood seduces me…and yet, makes me hesitate. You’ve been touched by divinity. To redeem you with my cutting charms could embroil me in the rancor of a god. Though I care not for reproach, I must admit I am not yet powerful enough to dash to pieces the cosmic horror of a god.” He slipped backward off his branch and fell to earth, knees bending to absorb the impact. Placing one foot in front of the other and holding his hand out to the side, he bowed, saying, ”And so, you are spared. See that you become more beautiful for when next we meet, insect.” Laughing, he turned around and sped away, dashing through the grass with the predatory grace and speed of a spotted cat.


So I'm making the humans still. Working on the post (AKA making sure it's compelling and fun to read and well made and completely without grammar errors, so I'm doing the personally impossible) but I'm still in somewhat in a knot about the whole life stuff. What are the exact consequences if life isn't made from Slough's essence?


It can't grow or evolve on its own, it is targeted by White Giants and other such protectors of life, natural life displays an aversion to it, and it doesn't sustain itself via normal processes. Basically, humans made without Slough's essence wouldn't be humans at all; they would be as alien as Niciel's angels, and would reflect Realthos rather than natural laws. As such, they would be deathly and dark and barely like flesh-and-blood humans.

On a related note, if you're looking for a way to get inspiration for the human form, Realthos might do well to encounter Allure.
I was actually thinking of filling Chronos with these guys:



And similar therianthropes




Though their relief and gratitude were palpable, the two men could not form a single word amongst them through the chattering of their teeth and ragged breathing. Cold rolled off them in waves, but even being out of the food locker already appeared to helping. Neither made any effort to resist the removal of their clothes, despite the sickly pallor and clamminess of their skin, and without much in the way of lucidity then received the warmth offered to them by the students.

Benjamin’s inquiry received a punctual reply. Goodwitch’s familiar no-nonsense voice surged through the radio. “Yes. According to Manticore, eighteen people were present in the facility during the last report. I can get the names if you require, but you shouldn’t. With these two accounted for, and the bodies found, that makes five. Factoring in the people in the safe room mentioned by your new contact, you have thirteen. Five left,” she calculated flatly. “Time is of the essence. Take a look in all of the rooms in the hallway before going downstairs.

-meanwhile-


As a unit, JCL moved into the next room with Lucas on point. Directly after the decontamination room was chemical processing. While no doubt a marvel of engineering and efficiency during the distillery’s heyday, the processing room now lay in a state of ruin. An entire wall was dedicated to the stacking of chemical drums, separated neatly by a demarcation line into filled and empty. Of course, quite a few littered the floor in various states of damage, and a variety of chemicals lay in puddles across the floor. They suffused the entire room with an intriguing but nauseating odor, of which the students had only gotten a hint in the generator room. Judging by the state of the floor and nearby machinery, some of the puddles were acidic, but to a sane individual none would seem attractive for the setting of one’s foot. At the far end of the room was a lift, like the dumbwaiter but far larger, for the ascension of filled drums to the vehicle lot for transport.

The noise caused by the three teens’ entrance quickly gave way to silence. Worryingly abruptly, the feminine screaming had ceased, though by now it was obvious that it came from a closed but unlocked door to an adjoining storage area. After a moment, however, a new noise broke the oppressive quiet. A large chemical drum with sides raked by clawmarks, situated at the other side of the room, shuddered violently, a clang reverberating within. From this drum a muffled noise echoed forth, ambiguous in all but intimidation.



The three remaining students, with Jorie slung over Sterling’s shoulder like the catch of the day, made it to the evac point without incident. While a few of the lesser Taijitus tailed them, a couple volleys of projectiles successfully turned their attention back to the abandoned caravan vehicle to join their fellows in ripping into it like hagfish into a dead whale. No humans remained in the formerly-proud vehicle to elicit such wild bloodthirstiness; evidently the Grimm delighted in destroying the works of man nearly as much as eviscerating men themselves.

By a miracle of carmanship, the driver had arrived with Lilac just before Sterling, Estelle, and Sarina made the final ascent. They piled in, a collective despondency hanging around them like mist. As the airship took off, leaving the canyon of failure behind, the pilot said nothing; Beacon’s seniors would be their own worst critics. Not many students of their caliber flunked a mission, and while nobody lay dead on the dusty arid ground, team JESS seemed so gripped by a morose quiet that there might as well have been.
Would it be a great blow to either @Kho or @Antarctic Termite if either the big ant or Navy were cut into tiny, tiny pieces?
@Lugubrious Is that a serious, "Who did Logos base humans off of?", or a sarcastic "Gee, what a unique species. However did you think of them?"


None of that, what I meant was: if people want to make humans on Galbar, they can use Allure as inspiration.
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